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by SDS
Sun Nov 03, 2024 12:16 pm
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Re: Connie Is Confused - If it's inappropriate for a girl's panties to be seen... should I get naked?

Part 2

Kayden stared. Openly stared, with not even Connie to now witness his open ogling of the back of her near naked form, he drank hungrily at the unbelievable sight of her skinny pale body. The morning sun beautifully highlighted her body, she practically glowed to his view like some mystical ...
by Fixitman8267
Sun Nov 10, 2024 4:31 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I enjoyed this at first when it was more about nudity and exhibitionism. A little ENF is exciting, but this has gone way past that. Lilly and Riley have experienced way more humiliation and embarrassment than if they had allowed the original picture to be circulated. Now that have allowed themselves ...
by computerphoto
Sun Nov 10, 2024 7:25 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)



I enjoyed this at first when it was more about nudity and exhibitionism. A little ENF is exciting, but this has gone way past that. Lilly and Riley have experienced way more humiliation and embarrassment than if they had allowed the original picture to be circulated. Now that have allowed ...
by Hooked6
Mon Nov 11, 2024 4:29 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I agree with Bucket. The story is marvelous so far and I would encourage you, Emily, to continue. In fact several of the last chapters were just plain wonderful!

I have always encouraged authors to write what pleases them and create as you feel appropriate. You can't write for or listen to a crowd ...
by shmeckle
Wed Nov 13, 2024 1:40 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I also think you should keep writing the story you want and let it go where it wants to. I'm sure most of your readers would agree. I'm always looking forward to more.
by Bucket
Wed Nov 13, 2024 1:40 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

You see, Emily.

We love and support your story BECAUSE of the directions you've taken. That's what makes it the best story around. And of course the way you write. I hope for many, many, and one more many for good measure, more chapters to come!
by neverdoubted
Wed Nov 13, 2024 10:53 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

Kudos to you for having captured the imagination of so many readers. I hope you continue writing and don't get discouraged by detractors. My only advice as a writer is to go a little easier on Riley's "racing heart". It races, pounds, and skips beats so often, I'm starting to worry the poor girl ...
by emobat
Fri Nov 15, 2024 12:47 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I love the story, and the escalation I think it's going perfectly building and expanding the humiliations.
by Bucket
Sat Nov 23, 2024 4:20 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)

Thanks for the new chapter, Emily! Can't wait to read the latest two!
by Bucket
Wed Nov 27, 2024 6:48 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)


Hi everybody

I wanted to take a moment and thank you all for the support on this story! For a few different reasons, I have decided to take a break from writing. I’m not sure if or when I will be back.

For those of you who have been friendly and left kind comments, thank you. It truly has ...