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- Wed Sep 11, 2024 6:28 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched?...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:20 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)
Review(s) of the latest chapters incoming tomorrow. Fair warning: It's astronomically large, as well as mammothly enormous. I've read most of it, but annoyingly, I didn't have the time I thought I would to read it all. Will finish on the morrow. As it's quite...elaborate, would it be preferable to ...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 2:47 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)
Yup, ok so spoiler alert: I absolutely freaking love everything about this story! Seriously, I cannot stress enough just how breathtaking this story is! Awe inspiring. Sensational, and all sorts of other superlatives. This is literally the perfect story, and there's not a damn thing I'd change. I'll...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 2:55 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)
Chapter 34 review Wait... So did the girls get out of the pool naked/topless? Did they get their bikinis back before hand? 🤔 (Never mind, ignore this. It initially seemed like they were already out of the pool) Anyway, I really liked this part for obvious reasons: "Without thinking, Riley reac...
- Fri Sep 13, 2024 3:27 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)
Chapter 35 review Once again you give us more of the Riley/Lily bond, and I really love the comment " You're beautiful, just the way you are". I was hoping for a "You think I'm beautiful?" from Riley, followed by her getting all flustered/blushing, but no worries whatsoever. Ever...
- Mon Sep 16, 2024 7:58 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)
Bucket: thank you so much for the kind reviews! Definitely keep those types of reviews coming. I love hearing comments about this story and getting feedback from people. That is a big thing that keeps me inspired and motivated to write more! A lot of Riley’s body and experiences are based on that o...
- Wed Sep 18, 2024 10:26 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/16)
Alright, I remember the suggestion I had, but first: 1. Ok, you've got me quite curious as to your real life adventures. If you're comfortable sharing, what is the craziest dare/bet that you've done, and what did it involve? Does your sister get involved, or does she kind of just get you to do thin...
- Wed Sep 18, 2024 11:27 am
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Re: Top 10 lists
So a conversation elsewhere inspired me to make a thread for people to rank what they believe to be the top ten ENP stories of all time, or at least their own personal top ten. I'm quite curious as to what everyone thinks on this. So I don't have a "top ten" per se. I came here to post my...
- Mon Sep 30, 2024 10:23 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/16)
Wow, this is such an awesome story! I've only read the first three chapters so far... but this looks like it's going to be epic
I'm going to try to savour the remaining chapters (let's see how strong-willed I can be!). Thanks Emily.
I'm going to try to savour the remaining chapters (let's see how strong-willed I can be!). Thanks Emily.
- Sat Oct 05, 2024 6:53 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 10/04)
And that's 3 chapters! Assuming you're not sick of my reviews, reviews for the latest 3 chapters incoming next week! Cannot wait!