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Bucket: thank you so much for the kind reviews! Definitely keep those types of reviews coming. I love hearing comments about this story and getting feedback from people. That is a big thing that keeps me inspired and motivated to write more!

A lot of Riley’s body and experiences are based on ...

Alright, I remember the suggestion I had, but first:

1. Ok, you've got me quite curious as to your real life adventures. If you're comfortable sharing, what is the craziest dare/bet that you've done, and what did it involve? Does your sister get involved, or does she kind of just get you to do ...

Wow, this is such an awesome story! I've only read the first three chapters so far... but this looks like it's going to be epic

I'm going to try to savour the remaining chapters (let's see how strong-willed I can be!). Thanks Emily.

And that's 3 chapters! Assuming you're not sick of my reviews, reviews for the latest 3 chapters incoming next week! Cannot wait!

Holy crap, a fourth chapter! Phenomenal! Well, a fourth chapter from my perspective.

Well let's do another review than, shall we.


Chapter 39

Love how it opens up with Riley looking down at the ground again. I'll never get tired of that kind of submissive body language from her.

This ...

Crossing the shallow, sandy riverbed on foot, we had no trouble coming up the other slope on the south bank. There were not as many people exploring this part of the abandoned settlement, but still too many for Mary's liking. Avoiding all eye contact, she used her shy, naked girl pose - desperately ...

Wtf is going on!?

I'm a smidge speechless. What is that, 3 chapters in a week? Staggering! If this is going to become a regular thing, I think I'll likely wait for two chapters at a time instead of three and then give you my reviews.

Appreciate yet ANOTHER chapter!

Wow Emily,

We discussed this idea, but little did I know you worked it out this great! Damn. The only little point of criticism is that storywise Tyler came pretty quick. If it took him longer Riley could been pushed to the limit even more. But he that’s just nitpicking. I admit.

Rebecca, with a satisfied smile, approached Laura, who still remained motionless, her hands covering her naked body. The situation, which had initially surprised her, had now become a power game that Rebecca enjoyed.

"Well, Laura, you've got me curious. How did you end up like this? Is it some kind ...

Amazing story Emily you are an excellent writer. I really appreciate that you are taking suggestions for the direction and events of the story. I have one suggestion myself.
I would like to see more rules for Riley and Lily to follow on their own, such as having them compete similar to tasks in ...