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by destroyer008
Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:12 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)





Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far ...
by Bucket
Tue Aug 20, 2024 7:21 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)



Yet another new chapter, and so soon too! 😃

Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon. 😃

I've yet to ...
by Bucket
Fri Aug 30, 2024 4:43 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/26)

Ok, so I've just read the latest 3 chapters and I have to say, you've truly outdone yourself, Emily!

Seriously, chapter 30 is jaw droppingly good, and has just taken this story to a whole other level! The edging and constant arousal with the orgasm denial stipulation is absolutely sensational ...
by destroyer008
Tue Sep 03, 2024 11:43 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/02)

Making the two love birds fight against each other in order to keep what's left of their dignity was genius. Keep up the great work! :)

I'm sure Riley is eager to get that sweet release but I guess the girls want to keep her on edge for a bit longer. When she gets to orgasm eventually, Riley ...
by Bucket
Tue Sep 03, 2024 5:56 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/02)

destroyer008 wrote: Tue Sep 03, 2024 11:43 am When she gets to orgasm eventually, Riley should be made to achieve it in an outmost humiliating manner.
And it should the most earth shatteringly insane, toe curling, eyes in the back of the head orgasm that Riley has ever experienced in her entire life! 😃
by Bucket
Wed Sep 11, 2024 6:28 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)





Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far ...
by Bucket
Fri Sep 13, 2024 9:20 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)



Review(s) of the latest chapters incoming tomorrow.

Fair warning: It's astronomically large, as well as mammothly enormous. I've read most of it, but annoyingly, I didn't have the time I thought I would to read it all. Will finish on the morrow.

As it's quite...elaborate, would it be ...
by Bucket
Fri Sep 13, 2024 2:47 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)

Yup, ok so spoiler alert: I absolutely freaking love everything about this story!

Seriously, I cannot stress enough just how breathtaking this story is! Awe inspiring. Sensational, and all sorts of other superlatives. This is literally the perfect story, and there's not a damn thing I'd change. I ...
by Bucket
Fri Sep 13, 2024 2:55 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)

Chapter 34 review

Wait... So did the girls get out of the pool naked/topless? Did they get their bikinis back before hand? 🤔 (Never mind, ignore this. It initially seemed like they were already out of the pool)

Anyway, I really liked this part for obvious reasons:

"Without thinking, Riley reached ...
by Bucket
Fri Sep 13, 2024 3:27 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)

Chapter 35 review

Once again you give us more of the Riley/Lily bond, and I really love the comment " You're beautiful, just the way you are". I was hoping for a "You think I'm beautiful?" from Riley, followed by her getting all flustered/blushing, but no worries whatsoever. Everything has been ...