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by Hooked6
Mon Nov 11, 2024 4:29 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I agree with Bucket. The story is marvelous so far and I would encourage you, Emily, to continue. In fact several of the last chapters were just plain wonderful! I have always encouraged authors to write what pleases them and create as you feel appropriate. You can't write for or listen to a crowd o...
by shmeckle
Wed Nov 13, 2024 1:40 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I also think you should keep writing the story you want and let it go where it wants to. I'm sure most of your readers would agree. I'm always looking forward to more.
by Bucket
Wed Nov 13, 2024 1:40 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

You see, Emily.

We love and support your story BECAUSE of the directions you've taken. That's what makes it the best story around. And of course the way you write. I hope for many, many, and one more many for good measure, more chapters to come!
by neverdoubted
Wed Nov 13, 2024 10:53 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

Kudos to you for having captured the imagination of so many readers. I hope you continue writing and don't get discouraged by detractors. My only advice as a writer is to go a little easier on Riley's "racing heart". It races, pounds, and skips beats so often, I'm starting to worry the poo...
by emobat
Fri Nov 15, 2024 12:47 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

I love the story, and the escalation I think it's going perfectly building and expanding the humiliations.
by Bucket
Sat Nov 23, 2024 4:20 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)

Thanks for the new chapter, Emily! Can't wait to read the latest two!
by Bucket
Wed Nov 27, 2024 6:48 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)

Hi everybody I wanted to take a moment and thank you all for the support on this story! For a few different reasons, I have decided to take a break from writing. I’m not sure if or when I will be back. For those of you who have been friendly and left kind comments, thank you. It truly has meant the...
by computerphoto
Wed Dec 11, 2024 3:50 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)

Thanks, Emily, have a great break and come back rested and I know you will knock the rest of the story out of the park.
by Girlspns
Fri Dec 20, 2024 2:47 pm
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reminder to both our dear readers and authors

I feel like this needs to be said as a reminder to both our dear readers and authors. First our readers, thank you greatly for reading our stories, some of them may not be to your liking, and some may even weird you out, that's normal, humans have different tastes, sometimes to a wild degree, so it'...
by SDS
Sat Dec 21, 2024 11:09 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 9/19/24 - Caught Naked

Hang on, I must have completely misunderstood that announcement. So we can't ever be negative at all? Even if someone clearly asks for feedback, and is frequently asking 'does anyone still like this?' what if a positive comment, or even apology, is taken in a negative way? Completely theoretical qu...