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The Midnight Run – Part One (Public Nudity, Humil, Bullie s)
BY: HOOKED6 (Hooked6@hotmail.com)

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I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad……
I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on the ...

I am a fan of situations in which our lovely lady relies on a mask to protect her from total humiliation. ALTHOUGH the situation is only really rewarding if the mask is stripped away with all of her dignity in the most humiliating way by the people she hates most and she is exposed in the most ...

Seems like this is a utility chapter, to get Riley from point A to point B. Nothing much happens here.

Shame and humiliation may come back in the art class or whatever situation she is put in. It would be interesting if Riley had to interact with someone she doesn't like, to increase her stress.

I ...

Made an account just now because I have to give some praise for this story (I made an account long ago but have forgotten the login as I'm primarily a lurker, hehe)

As old as it is, the trope of escalation as the victim creates more blackmail for themselves in the process of trying to escape ...

Great story!

I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad……
I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on ...

How about introducing a boy in the same position as Riley and Lilly? Shy, embarrassed virgin but perhaps like the girls, has no reason to be so shy.

I think it’s great. Looking forward to the next chapter.

What do you all think of the direction this story is going? Too much action? Not enough action? How far should things go with the boys?



I must admit, to me you are getting the story back on track. You found a good pace of action.
Concerning the boys, you wrote Riley is still a virgin, so I ...