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by Hooked6
Wed Mar 17, 2021 10:41 pm
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The Midnight Run (1,2,3,4,5,6, 7,8,9, 10,11,12,13,14,15,16 ,17,18,19

The Midnight Run – Part One (Public Nudity, Humil, Bullie s) BY: HOOKED6 (Hooked6@hotmail.com) Copyright May 28, 2008 by Hooked6. All rights reserved. No reproduction, retransmission, re-posting on another Internet site is permitted without the expressed WRITTEN consent of the author (Hooked6@hotma...
by Darky
Wed May 29, 2024 5:23 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 5/29)

I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad…… I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on the...
by CityWolf
Wed May 29, 2024 5:39 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 5/29)

I am a fan of situations in which our lovely lady relies on a mask to protect her from total humiliation. ALTHOUGH the situation is only really rewarding if the mask is stripped away with all of her dignity in the most humiliating way by the people she hates most and she is exposed in the most perma...
by Skylar21
Wed May 29, 2024 10:25 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 5/29)

Seems like this is a utility chapter, to get Riley from point A to point B. Nothing much happens here. Shame and humiliation may come back in the art class or whatever situation she is put in. It would be interesting if Riley had to interact with someone she doesn't like, to increase her stress. I d...
by Dirk Egbert
Thu May 30, 2024 5:44 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 5/29)

Made an account just now because I have to give some praise for this story (I made an account long ago but have forgotten the login as I'm primarily a lurker, hehe) As old as it is, the trope of escalation as the victim creates more blackmail for themselves in the process of trying to escape blackma...
by Rblurk
Sun Jun 02, 2024 2:58 pm
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Writing Advice

I could have sworn this topic already existed somewhere but I cannot seem to find it so I'm just posting a new thing. I'm looking to start writing some of the ideas I have floating around in my mind for enf, but I also haven't written anything in a long time. So I was wondering what advice writers o...
by Blondie
Sun Jun 02, 2024 6:19 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 5/29)

I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad…… I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on th...
by Blondie
Wed Jun 05, 2024 8:01 pm
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Re: Writing Advice

As TeenFan noted, your grammar and structure are sound, so the potential is there to put together some good ENF stories. Everyone has their own style, and you should stick with what works for you—and to take it a step further, what excites you. Chances are good that if you're enjoying what you're wr...
by TLN
Mon Jun 10, 2024 8:06 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 6/08)

How about introducing a boy in the same position as Riley and Lilly? Shy, embarrassed virgin but perhaps like the girls, has no reason to be so shy.