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by Darky
Sun Jun 23, 2024 6:05 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 6/22)




These next few parts will probably be the most challenging for me to write. I don’t really have any experience with guys so it may be a bit harder to write about. Regardless, I’m looking forward to the challenge.

As always, I’m definitely open to any ideas anybody may have!


Well you got me ...
by Darky
Sun Jul 07, 2024 5:51 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock:
The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t ...
by Pantherjsmt123
Tue Jul 09, 2024 12:23 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

This is one of my favorite stories on this site and I love the direction. Currently, as the story stands, you're sitting on a goldmine of opportunities! Here are just a few possibilities.

-More public humiliation in class and on campus by forced/reluctant exposure.
-Give the girls full clothing ...
by Darky
Tue Jul 09, 2024 4:39 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)



I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock:
The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t ...
by shmeckle
Tue Jul 09, 2024 5:36 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I love the direction the story's going in. She has the assurance of the other girls that she can stay a virgin as long as she wants. Without that to worry about, she'll relax and probably let herself get pushed farther than she would have otherwise.
by jastes22
Sun Aug 11, 2024 2:55 pm
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The Photoshoot (Part 9 Posted 11/19)(COMPLETE)

The Photoshoot - Ashley models for some friends.

Part 1: Nature and Beauty - Ashley's friend asks her to model for him.
Part 2: Test pictures - Ashley does some test pictures.
Part 3: Buttons and Rain - Ashley does her first set of pictures.
Part 4: A Boquete of Roses - Ashley moves on to ...
by Darky
Wed Aug 14, 2024 4:40 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Tattoo and piercings are too much invading a body. You can’t force someone into that (my opinion)

But to check if she complied to the tasks, more humiliating videos or photos could me made by Riley. She must have acces to clothes in public places otherwise the blackmail element is gone and the ...
by destroyer008
Wed Aug 14, 2024 6:49 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

I like the idea of some kind of point system where the girls give her a point threshhold she needs to reach each day in order to avoid punishment. This point threshhold could increase over time and she could be awarded points for doing all kinds of things within the day.

Like, eating pussy of one ...
by darklord66
Wed Aug 14, 2024 2:19 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

I was reading all the comments after reading this outstanding story, and I understand some think tattoo and piercings are to much, but I have read a lot of stories over the past 20 years where girls in high school and college age, end up getting tattoos and piercings and even drinking piss, because ...
by destroyer008
Sun Aug 18, 2024 7:37 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Great episode! I'm thrilled to learn what happens next! :)