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by TLN
Fri Jun 21, 2024 3:04 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 6/18)

I think it’s great. Looking forward to the next chapter.
by Darky
Sat Jun 22, 2024 6:09 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 6/18)

What do you all think of the direction this story is going? Too much action? Not enough action? How far should things go with the boys? I must admit, to me you are getting the story back on track. You found a good pace of action. Concerning the boys, you wrote Riley is still a virgin, so I would sa...
by Darky
Sun Jun 23, 2024 6:05 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 6/22)

These next few parts will probably be the most challenging for me to write. I don’t really have any experience with guys so it may be a bit harder to write about. Regardless, I’m looking forward to the challenge. As always, I’m definitely open to any ideas anybody may have! Well you got me really b...
by Darky
Sun Jul 07, 2024 5:51 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock: The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t playf...
by superevil7
Mon Jul 08, 2024 5:35 am
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Re: Chose One! CMNF OR CFNM

CMNF for sure. I think women can still look classy without clothes, where as men kind of need to dress up in order to look presentable. Without a suit or proper work attire a guy will probably look goofy and not at all prepared for work, but that's just my opinion. Women are the more natural transit...
by Freesub
Mon Jul 08, 2024 7:35 pm
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Re: Chose One! CMNF OR CFNM

If you had to chose, If one of these became the law of the land. You have to vote for only one. (you can let us know if you are male or female) CMNF CMNF where only females are nude while males are modestly dressed OR CFNM where only males are nude and females are modestly dressed Which would you c...
by Pantherjsmt123
Tue Jul 09, 2024 12:23 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

This is one of my favorite stories on this site and I love the direction. Currently, as the story stands, you're sitting on a goldmine of opportunities! Here are just a few possibilities. -More public humiliation in class and on campus by forced/reluctant exposure. -Give the girls full clothing cont...
by Darky
Tue Jul 09, 2024 4:39 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock: The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t play...
by shmeckle
Tue Jul 09, 2024 5:36 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I love the direction the story's going in. She has the assurance of the other girls that she can stay a virgin as long as she wants. Without that to worry about, she'll relax and probably let herself get pushed farther than she would have otherwise.
by jastes22
Sun Aug 11, 2024 2:55 pm
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The Photoshoot (Part 9 Posted 11/19)(COMPLETE)

The Photoshoot - Ashley models for some friends. Part 1: Nature and Beauty - Ashley's friend asks her to model for him. Part 2: Test pictures - Ashley does some test pictures. Part 3: Buttons and Rain - Ashley does her first set of pictures. Part 4: A Boquete of Roses - Ashley moves on to her first...