Strip Penalty shootout

[Gotpantsedmanytimes]

I have the idea of something like strip poker. From summers. I just wanted to say that so no one would say I stole it. Actually, it's a different story. Nevertheless, read the story by summers too! And I apologize for any translation errors in the following story! Have fun!


*ding* I got a message on my cell phone. It was my friend Paul. He wanted to go and play soccer with me. With the other friends. Their names were Tobi and Fynn. I knew Tobi from my class. I didn't know Fynn. I think he went to soccer with Paul. Paul was in a soccer team. He was very good. I often played soccer too, but I was bad.
So I went to the soccer field. The three boys were waiting there. I saw Fynn for the first time. He was really good at soccer and definitely better than Paul, my best friend. We started to play. We took penalties - the classic way. But suddenly Fynn had an idea. "It's boring to death. How about we make the game a bit more exciting? We play strip penalty kicks! Every penalty kick you miss, you take off an item of clothing. Whoever ends up naked has to play a game 2 against 2 to 5 naked!" I wanted to refuse straight away but Paul and Tobi beat me to it: "Yes, good idea!" But I didn't feel like it. I wasn't the best and I definitely didn't want to end up naked. Not in front of Paul. We'd never seen each other naked before. Only in our underpants in the changing room or something. And besides, I didn't want anyone to see us here. "Come on, let's play normally. If anyone sees us here, it would be embarrassing for all of us." I said. But Tobi replied: "Oh come on John. Nobody sees us here anyway. And you don't have anything to hide anyway, do you?" Paul and Fynn nodded in agreement. So I had no choice. Fynn knew he was the best. He just wanted to see the others without clothes. Pervert.
The pitch was made of concrete and the shoes and socks all counted as one. There was always one in the goal. The others shoot and then the next one is in the goal. If you scored a goal, you were safe. If you miss or the goalkeeper saves, you have to take off an item of clothing. I was the first one in goal. Fynn was the first to shoot. I hoped he would shoot the ball but his shot was so hard that I dodged the ball. "Easy!" he shouted. I thought he was really arrogant. Secretly I hoped he would end up naked. But I probably would. But I shook off the thought and concentrated on the next shot. It was Tobi's turn. He took a running start and hammered the ball against the post. "Damn!" He immediately took off his shoes and his socks too. Now he was only two misses away from losing his pants. That wasn't much. The goal wasn't that big. Now it was Paul's turn. He was a good penalty taker. I knew that. He shot with all his might. But this time I didn't duck. But that was a mistake. The ball hit my head with all my might. But it didn't roll behind the line. "Everything all right?" asked Paul. I nodded. He also took off his shoes and socks.
Now Fynn was in goal. Tobi was supposed to shoot first. It would be difficult without socks. And it looked like it would be: This time the ball hit the other post. Now Tobi had to take off his shirt. You could see him turning red. "Shit," he said. "You wanted it that way!" I said. It was probably a mistake as karma would strike back. He took off his T-shirt and threw it in the corner. I felt my penis getting a little bigger. I never actually got an erection but I covered it up with my T-shirt because it was my turn now. I took a running start. But I stumbled and fell completely flat on my face. I touched the ball. It was incredibly embarrassing even though I was still wearing everything. It always happens to me. Why? "Take your clothes off!" said Fynn. I wanted to protest but it was no use. Should I take off my T-shirt or my shoes/socks? I couldn't shoot without shoes. I took off my T-shirt. Luckily my penis was back to normal. "Ohhh brave, brave John!" said Paul with a grin. He made the next shot cleanly-even without shoes.Tobi stood in goal, without a shirt. Paul started again. He shot but Tobi held it firmly in his hand. Paul looked a bit sad. But he took off his T-shirt. The game actually goes really quickly. If Paul and Tobi each shoot twice, they're already naked! Apparently I wasn't that bad. Then came Fynn. Of course he scored perfectly again. Oh man, he's arrogant... I thought. Then it was my turn again... This time I didn't fall down. I shot it confidently into the corner. Even Paul said "Wow".
And the next round began. Paul was in goal this time. Without shoes, without a T-shirt. He couldn't lose anything now. He was lucky. It was my turn first. Paul fidgeted a bit on the line. I let that confuse you because I shot over it. Now I had to take my shoes off. That wasn't bad in itself because they cover almost nothing, but it's super hard to shoot. "Please soccer God! Please let me score!" Tobi begged. He certainly didn't want to lose his pants. He looked towards Paul. The shot was great but Paul jumped and blocked the ball at the last moment. As if he would do anything to make Tobi lose his pants. "No! That can't be! That's not fair!" said Tobi. "Hey. Just do it! You've still got your underpants!" said Paul with a big grin. Fynn had to laugh. Tobi grabbed the waistband of his shorts and slid them down. Tobi was visibly uncomfortable that he now had to show his neon green underpants. Fynn and Paul had to laugh. I had to laugh too. My dick got bigger. I couldn't cover it up because I no longer had a T-shirt. Luckily, Fynn grabbed the ball and took a running start. Tobi looked on a little ashamed. I actually wanted to make a joke about his underpants, but I let it go. And if I had to take my pants off, I'd be a complete idiot. I was thinking too much and didn't even notice that Fynn had shot the ball in again...
Now I was back in goal. Fynn started and shot it wide. Fynn took off his shirt and put it away. He feels so cool, I thought. Then it was Paul's turn. He grinned at me. He didn't want to lose his pants either. This time I ducked. The ball was shot super hard. He cheered. Now it was Tobi's turn. "Let's see if your neon green andies bring you luck," said Fynn and laughed. Tobi was visibly blushing. Suddenly you could see him get a bump. I could see Fynn trying to say something but he just said "aha, Tobi" and laughed. I felt sorry for him. Tobi just shot. I could have held him but I pretended I couldn't get any more. He was happy.
Fynn was now in the goal and looked at me with a grin. I didn't want to be intimidated. I didn't want to lose my pants and get stupid remarks from the asshole. So I took a deep breath and shot. He went to the post... "Say what you have under your shorts John!" "I don't want to!" I said but I knew it wouldn't do any good. So I pulled my shorts down. I could feel it getting colder around my legs. I was wearing briefs. With a car on the side. It was small but visible. I had forgotten all about it! I was turning really red. "john? Are you serious? You're not a little one anymore! You're 14!" Paul shouted, laughing his head off. My penis responded. I got an erection. Fynn and Paul and tobi looked at me. Oh God, that was embarrassing! But Paul took pity on me and grabbed a ball. Then everyone was distracted. Now I was standing next to Tobi. He whispered in my ear: "Don't be embarrassed. That Fynn is a real asshole too." Good. I wasn't the only one who didn't like Fynn. That was a good thing. Paul put the ball in. Now it was tobi's turn. He was nervous. You could see that in his face. I felt sorry for him but somehow I hoped he would shoot. I didn't want to end up naked. But Tobi shot it surprisingly well into the corner. Now he was safe for the time being. Because he was now in goal.
Fynn paul and I did rock, paper, scissors because we forgot whose turn it was. Of course I had to shoot first. I hoped that Tobi would let him in. I had to hit it now. I didn't want to show my genitals in front of my friends. And certainly not out here in the open. So I tried to hit the ball as hard as I could. But that went wrong. The ball flew over the goal. No! That couldn't be. I didn't actually want to play it, but now I have to strip naked! "Nah, guys. That's going too far" I said. "But John. You have to go through with it now." Paul said. Fynn nodded. I looked at Tobi. "Please. I'll do 15 push-ups in my slip too!" But as I said that, I felt a hand on my brief. It was Fynn. He pulled my underwear down to my ankles. He now had a clear view of my backside. And tobi and Paul had a view of my genitals. I was completely exposed. I wanted to pull them up again. But Paul said to my horror that it was the rules. Tobi and Fynn agreed with him. So I let Fynn take off my slip, so to speak. He threw it in the corner. I covered my genitals. My penis got big. Everyone started looking at me. "Hands off!" said Fynn. I did it. As if he was my teacher. You could see how excited the boys all got. "Come on, let's start the game!" said Paul. "I'll play with John. Whoever scores five goals first." Paul continued. Everyone got dressed again. Now everyone was dressed except me. Completely naked.

We started. It felt strange to run naked. They looked at me the whole time. Fortunately, the penis became flaccid again. It just dangled around the whole time. Now they had seen everything. My penis wasn't that small so they couldn't make any stupid comments. I already had hair too. And they didn't really care in the end anyway. Surprisingly, Paul and I were leading when I heard people. They were girls.
I was in a state of shock. I saw a group of girls coming towards hns. They were wearing sportswear. There were 5 of them. They must have wanted to play soccer. They were all my age. If not younger. Why did they have to come now? I ran to my clothes but to my horror I realized that they were gone. I saw Fynn grinning at the other end of the sports field. He was holding my clothes in one hand. In the other he held my briefs. Up. Paul and Tobi gave me a look that said they were being naughty. Nevertheless, they were having fun. I could see that in their faces. Now the girls had seen me. "Omg! Guys! Look at this! A naked boy!" said one of the girls. They stormed towards me. I was surrounded. There was a fence behind me. I tried to hide everything. The one girl took out her cell phone. "Take pictures! Quick!" oh god it was embarrassing. And all because of this fynn. My penis got bigger accordingly. That was obvious. "Look here! His penis is getting bigger!" said one of them again. "Please let me go!" I begged! "Ok, but only if you put your hands behind your back so we can take photos. The same with your bottom." I was a little horrified. I've never longed for my car slip so much. Although they probably would have taken them off me... I shook off the thoughts and thought about it. I had no other choice. I put my hands on my back. Now they could see everything. They took lots of photos. I hoped they wouldn't spread them. If anyone I know saw them, I'd be the victim of bullying at school. "Now turn around!" she ordered. I put my hands on my genitals so they could take photos of my bottom. "I expected more!" said one of the girls. I turned red. "So! Now you can go! I hope you enjoyed it! Because we did!" I ran to Fynn, Paul and Tobi. The girls were probably still taking photos of me. I was on the verge of tears. Fynn threw me my clothes. I quickly put on my briefs. Now they could take another look. I almost fell over in the rush. I quickly put on my shorts and T-shirt. Finally my socks and shoes. "You put on a good show!" said Paul. I didn't react to that. Tobi and Fynn had to laugh. I already knew how I would get my revenge.

To be continued!

[Jeepman89]

Great story and I like the idea of strip penalties. The icing on the cake was when the girls showed up and took pictures of the naked boy, front and back!

[TeenFan]

My comments are not about disliking the story, just how the structure of writing could be better.

There are no paragraph breaks to separate different actions.
Multiple quotes from different characters are on the same line of script.
It all makes your story more difficult to read than it could be.

[Summers]

Glad that you were inspired by my story.

i like what you did with it.

It's a fun read, and you should keep posting stories, but maybe take on a bit of the constructive criticism below, as it will help you become better at writing, and more people will enjoy your stories.

Like others have said, you do need to break up the wall of text. it is easy to do, just put a space between paragraphs, every 2-4 lines, then a gap.

I would slow the story down a little too, maybe draw out each round as each boy loses a piece of clothing.

it is also a little confusing with who is who in the story, and which boy is taking the shot and removing clothes. i think putting spaces between paragraphs will help.

Also, keep the same order for each round. When you switch it around, it's hard to keep track of who is who, and what they are doing.

[Gotpantsedmanytimes]

Glad that you were inspired by my story.

i like what you did with it.

It's a fun read, and you should keep posting stories, but maybe take on a bit of the constructive criticism below, as it will help you become better at writing, and more people will enjoy your stories.

Like others have said, you do need to break up the wall of text. it is easy to do, just put a space between paragraphs, every 2-4 lines, then a gap.

I would slow the story down a little too, maybe draw out each round as each boy loses a piece of clothing.

it is also a little confusing with who is who in the story, and which boy is taking the shot and removing clothes. i think putting spaces between paragraphs will help.

Also, keep the same order for each round. When you switch it around, it's hard to keep track of who is who, and what they are doing.

I had gaps. But the Transalator Deleted them! But thank you for the feedback

[BareB4U]

I really like this idea. Fynn needs to get his comeuppance in a future chapter.