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Love stories like this.

Especially with that extra bit of embarrassment added to by the addition of a girl.

Keep up the good work, and can't wait for the next chapter, and maybe more stories with the boys playing more games with maybe other shy boys.

Thank you again.

I am hoping we see wrestling.

Whether they make the boys wrestle each other, with some kinky rules on how to win. First to make the other cum wins for instance.

Or whether the girls wrestle the boys with unfair rules, like 2/3 vs 1 or all 7 girls vs the 2 boys at the same time.

The other options ...

Realistic for me is always better. You don't have to be completely serious, but trying to tell the reader that a boy basically came over and over again to 8 girls, who all made him cum in multiple ways, in 25 mins. That's a bit too unrealistic.

The story itself is decent enough, but felt completely ...

I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them returning to the changing cubicle.

I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board.

It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan ...

I understand the comment about having people suggest something close to what you had planned.

It may not be logical, but there is a part of you that thinks about whether that person would think you did it because of their suggestion, and i would imagine, when it is in the open, like the comments on ...

Steps that could be implemented.

Close new registration for 1-2 weeks.

New members can't post for 1 week. (could just be a few days)

New members have to like 5 posts (could be 10, 15, 20) before they can post.

Daily post limit, or hourly limit.

These are a bit extreme, and not brilliant, but i ...

I would like to give a bit of friendly advice.

Could you break up the story a bit, so it isn't such a wall of text.

It's just a bit of a put off to read big blocks of text, 2-3 lines per paragraph is a good amount to aim for, and it just makes a story easier to read.

Short but sweet.

I do have a soft spot for boys being stripped, as i guess everyone in this part of the forum does. lol.

Good job is all i can say.

Would love a longer and more fleshed out version, but that just shows how effective your story is.

if it can leave a reader wanting more, then you ...

*** This is a story that I have been thinking about for a while, but not really sure if it is something others would be interested in. It's a slow burn, and as of writing this, i have reached chapter 5, where the first game ends.

Also not quite completely happy with how well I've written it as ...

Don't think it says how old Ben and Matt are, just that the 12 year old boys are younger ?


The younger boys are all 12 years old, and it is mentioned that both Matt and Ben are 14 years old later on. i thought i mentioned it indirectly that they are either 2 years older or the younger boys are ...