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Awesome how she distracts him! It feels so good that he is playing naked. Can't wait to read more

I love how she is in total command at this point no matter what.

Short but sweet.

I do have a soft spot for boys being stripped, as i guess everyone in this part of the forum does. lol.

Good job is all i can say.

Would love a longer and more fleshed out version, but that just shows how effective your story is.

if it can leave a reader wanting more, then you ...

In the next one, can you make sure girls get to see the male character bare naked? Males seeing other males naked just doesn't feel the same.

Don't think it says how old Ben and Matt are, just that the 12 year old boys are younger ?


The younger boys are all 12 years old, and it is mentioned that both Matt and Ben are 14 years old later on. i thought i mentioned it indirectly that they are either 2 years older or the younger boys are ...

Game One: Chapter 2

“We’re already betting, you morons.” Chris then said, before shaking his head and dealing the cards.

Much to my relief, as I knew what Ben was like, and he would definitely land us into another mess. I was still trying to get my head around the fact that I was playing strip ...

This story is very different in subject matter. Won't be for everybody, but I liked a lot of it.

The writing felt a bit rushed, like you threw in all your ideas without fully developing them. The Huge sections of writing
(the dreaded "Wall of text") is hard to read without paragraphs and ...

Game One: Chapter 4

I then had to wait at least a minute for the teasing to end, and for Ben to tell Chris to deal the next hand. Which went from me feeling relieved, to worried within a few seconds, as I picked my cards up.

Not that it was dreadful, but I was hoping for something that would ...

Really nice story.
Two boys down to their last strike, last hand of cards, down to their last chance.

When I was around twelve I went on a fishing trip with other guys. It was my birthday that weekend as well, but that didn't
help me for luck. In a game of strip poker I was the first loser...and ...

Would be good if the loser was always Matt. Makes it funnier.


Honestly, i wouldn't have been against that at all, but as i have said, i have basically used the poker hand site i linked, decide how the games go. with a little nudge on the couple of times i have skipped ahead a few hands.

I ...