The Unraveling (New 11/23)

[Darky]

Thanks Emily,

What a great pre-birthday present! Two chapters of your great story. If I may make a birthday wish, I hope Lily will lose a game. Just for the dynamics and give our lovely Riley a good feeling once, just once.

But off course, your story, your storyline!

[Emily]

Thanks Emily,

What a great pre-birthday present! Two chapters of your great story. If I may make a birthday wish, I hope Lily will lose a game. Just for the dynamics and give our lovely Riley a good feeling once, just once.

But off course, your story, your storyline!

Happy birthday! I’d love to make your wish come true!

Anybody have any ideas for more games the girls can play and compete in at the pool?

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You could have them to do some races in the pool, and have rewards for the winner and forfeit punishments for the loser, also could do some diving contests if the pool has a diving board.

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You could have the loser of everything. have to leave her clothes behind and run back to the dorms through the whole campus.

[Darky]

Thanks Emily,

What a great pre-birthday present! Two chapters of your great story. If I may make a birthday wish, I hope Lily will lose a game. Just for the dynamics and give our lovely Riley a good feeling once, just once.

But off course, your story, your storyline!

Happy birthday! I’d love to make your wish come true!

Anybody have any ideas for more games the girls can play and compete in at the pool?

Thank you Emily for the birthday wishes

[Bucket]

Thanks Emily,

What a great pre-birthday present! Two chapters of your great story. If I may make a birthday wish, I hope Lily will lose a game. Just for the dynamics and give our lovely Riley a good feeling once, just once.

But off course, your story, your storyline!

Happy birthday! I’d love to make your wish come true!

Anybody have any ideas for more games the girls can play and compete in at the pool?

I've not read chapter 33 or 34 yet, so bare that in mind. (Will read once 35 is released)

Without much context to go off of beyond the fact that the two girls are in a public pool, perhaps the contest could be that the girls do laps and and the first to do however many laps wins, but with the stipulation that Riley and Lily remove their bikini bottoms BEFORE they do the laps. That way, it's a sort of blend between the competition and the actual punishment.

The potential punishment could be tgat the loser has to talk to boys inside of the water with the bottoms remaining off.

I swear, I must be the only person within this forum that comments on chapters, having not yet read said chapters lol.

Happy birthday to Darky btw!

[Bucket]

You could have the loser of everything. have to leave her clothes behind and run back to the dorms through the whole campus.

Just wanted to quickly add to this.

No problem with this idea whatsoever, but imo it'd be better if some level anonymity remain intact in large, crowded public areas. At least for now. So perhaps one (or both?) girls run to the dorms with masks on or something to that affect to hide their face. That way it gives a bit of wiggle room to up the ante later on.

Just my humble opinion of course.

[Emily]

Chapter 35

Riley lay back, her eyes squeezed shut as the sun kissed her skin, feeling the warmth spread through her body. She was acutely aware of every inch of herself that was on display, the way her nipples tightened and her pussy grew slick with desire.

Lily's voice was a soft whisper beside her. "I'm sorry for what she said, Riley," she murmured, her own cheeks still stained with embarrassment. "You're beautiful, just the way you are."

Riley's eyes snapped open, meeting Lily's concerned gaze. She felt a warmth spread through her chest that had nothing to do with the sun's rays. "Thank you," she managed to reply, her voice thick with emotion.

Lily leaned closer, her voice a barely audible whisper. "Seriously, Riley, your pussy is... it's so pretty. It's like a delicate little flower, all pink and soft."

Riley felt a shiver run down her spine, the compliment from Lily unexpected and surprisingly comforting. She turned her head to look at her, their eyes locking in a moment of shared vulnerability. "Thank you," she murmured, the words feeling inadequate to convey the depth of her gratitude.

Their peaceful reprieve was short-lived, however, as Aria's voice cut through the air like a whip. "Alright, my little beauties, time for one final game before we call it a day."

With a graceful rise from her chair, Aria sashayed over to the small group of college kids who had remained at the pool's edge. Her hips swayed seductively, the strings of her bikini bottom barely holding on to the curves of her ass. "Hey, you guys got any ice left in that cooler of yours?" she called out, her voice dripping with sweetness.

The group looked up, their eyes widening as they took in her beauty. One of the guys, a burly football type with a buzz cut and a smattering of acne, nodded eagerly. "Sure, we've got some," he said, his voice cracking slightly with nerves. He rummaged through the cooler, his hand emerging with a handful of ice cubes.

Aria took them with a wink and a smile that was all teeth, the kind that didn't quite reach her eyes. She sauntered back to the trio, the ice jingling in her hand like a warning bell. "Alright, Riley and Lily," she announced, her voice ringing out across the pool. "Our final game of the day."

"What is it?" Riley asked, her voice trembling slightly. She could feel the tension coiling in her stomach, a familiar knot that had become all too common in their interactions with the trio.

"Ah, the grand finale," Aria announced, her smile growing wider as she revealed the ice cubes. "We're going to play a little game called 'Ice Breaker'. You see, Lily here is a bit of a novice when it comes to... backdoor fun. So, we're going to help her break the ice, so to speak."

Riley felt a cold knot form in her stomach as she looked over at Lily, whose face had turned a deep shade of red. She knew what was coming next. "Each of you will take an ice cube," Aria continued, her eyes gleaming with excitement. "And then, you'll insert it into your anus. The first one to melt it completely wins."

The trio's eyes shone with malicious glee as they handed out the ice cubes. Riley took hers with a trembling hand, the coldness sending a shiver down her spine. She knew this game was going to be one of the most humiliating yet, especially for Lily, who had never been so intimately exposed before.

"You can melt them in your mouths for 30 seconds," Claire offered, her voice deceptively sweet. "To get rid of any sharp edges, of course."

Riley's stomach churned, but she knew better than to protest. She popped the ice cube into her mouth, her teeth chattering against the cold. The sharp edges melted almost immediately under the heat of her tongue, and she tried to ignore the cruel smiles on the trio's faces as they watched her.

Lily took a deep breath and followed suit, her eyes squeezed shut as she tried to focus on anything other than the cold, hard cube against her tongue. The icy taste was jolting, sending shivers down her spine, but she managed to melt it as instructed. The tension between the five of them was thick, the air charged with anticipation.

When the time was up, Aria clapped her hands together. "Alright, let's get started!" she exclaimed, her eyes gleaming with excitement. "You know the rules, now let's see who can handle the heat!"

“Turn over, both of you,” Ellie instructed, her voice leaving no room for argument. “On your stomachs, spread your legs, and lift your asses up for us. We need a clear view for this game, after all.”

Riley and Lily exchanged a look of dread, but they knew better than to protest. They rolled over, the plastic lounge chairs sticking to their wet skin as they repositioned themselves. Riley felt her cheeks burn as she spread her legs, her heart racing as she exposed herself to the trio. She could feel the cold cube in her hand, a stark contrast to the heat of the sun and her own arousal.

They each took a deep breath, steeling themselves for what was to come. The trio leaned in, their eyes glued to the two girls' asses, their excitement palpable. "Begin," Ellie said, her voice low and commanding.

Riley closed her eyes and brought the ice cube to her anus, the coldness making her gasp. She began to rub it in small circles around the tight ring of muscle, the sensation sending a jolt through her body. Lily did the same, her breaths coming in short, shallow bursts as she tried to ignore the feeling of the cube against her skin.

"Go on," Ellie prodded, her voice a sultry whisper that sent a shiver down Riley's spine. "Don't be shy, push it in."

Riley took a deep breath and did as she was told, feeling the coldness of the ice cube penetrate her, sending a shockwave of sensation through her body. She bit her lip to stifle a moan, her eyes squeezed shut as the cube began to melt inside her, the coldness giving way to a spreading warmth that was both painful and exhilarating.

Lily mirrored her actions, her own hand trembling as she approached her back entrance. Her anus was a tight, pink bud, flinching slightly at the touch of the ice. The cube was small, but the anticipation of the cold made it seem much larger. With a gentle push, she inserted it, her body quivering at the sudden intrusion.

The trio leaned in closer, their eyes gleaming with excitement as they watched the ice cube disappear into Lily's anus. It was a mesmerizing sight, the stark white cube slowly melting into the pink flesh, leaving a trail of water that glistened in the sun. Ellie licked her lips, her eyes hooded with desire as she took in the sight of Lily's body writhing under the cold intrusion.

Riley clenched her body, trying to make the ice cube melt faster. The cold was unbearable, sending shivers down her spine, but she knew that the quicker it melted, the sooner the game would be over. She could feel the warmth spreading from her core, the heat of the sun on her back only adding to the sensation. She began to move her hips in a slow, deliberate circle, the motion sending waves of pleasure through her body.

Lily, on the other hand, was struggling. The ice cube was a foreign presence, the coldness a stark contrast to the warmth of her body. She whimpered slightly, her body tightening around the cube. Riley could see the tension in her shoulders, the way her fingers dug into the plastic of the lounge chair.

And then, with a sudden jerk, Lily's body spasmed, and the ice cube slipped out of her anus, bouncing off the chair and landing with a splash into the pool. The sound of surprise and laughter from the trio was like a slap in the face, and Lily's cheeks burned with embarrassment.

"Well, I guess Lily's out," Aria said, her voice thick with amusement. "What a clumsy little thing."

Lily's face was a mask of humiliation, her eyes squeezed shut as she felt the coldness of the ice cube leave her body. She heard the trio's laughter and felt the heat of embarrassment spread through her, even as the warmth of the sun beat down on her back.

Riley, on the other hand, felt her own ice cube melting inside her, the coldness slowly dissipating as it became one with her body. She focused on the sensation, the way the warmth of the sun on her back and the coolness of the cube inside her melded together into something new, something she never knew she could experience.

"Come on, Riley," Claire said, her voice low and urgent. "You can do it."

Riley nodded, her breath hitching as she felt the last of the ice cube melt away. She clenched her ass cheeks, the coldness turning to a warm glow that spread through her. When she was sure it was gone, she announced, "I'm done."

Ellie's eyes gleamed. "Prove it," she said, her voice dripping with challenge. "Spread your cheeks apart for us, let us see your pretty little asshole."

Riley's face flamed with humiliation, but she knew better than to resist. She reached back with both hands, her fingers slipping slightly on the slickness of her own skin. With a deep breath, she pulled her cheeks apart, exposing herself fully to the trio's gaze. The air felt cold on her anus, the sudden absence of the ice cube leaving her feeling oddly vulnerable.

The trio leaned in, their eyes greedily taking in the sight of her stretched hole, the pink flesh glistening in the sun. Riley's heart pounded in her chest, the sound of her own blood rushing in her ears. She felt a strange mix of fear and arousal, the lines between the two emotions blurring into something she couldn't quite define.

Ellie's voice was a soft purr. "Very good, Riley," she said, her eyes never leaving the exposed area. "Now, let's see if you're telling the truth."

Her hand reached out, the tips of her fingers brushing against Riley's anus. Riley gasped, her body jolting at the unexpected touch. Ellie's fingertips were warm, a stark contrast to the coldness that had just been there. She felt Ellie's finger push inside her, the sensation sending a shiver down her spine.

"Mmm, it seems you're telling the truth," Ellie murmured, her voice thick with satisfaction. "Good girl."

Her finger lingered for a moment, stroking the inside of Riley's anus, before withdrawing with a wet pop that made Riley's toes curl. The trio's eyes remained on her, their expressions a mix of amusement and lust. Riley felt her face burn with embarrassment, but she couldn't deny the pulse of desire that was building low in her stomach.

"Alright, Lily," Ellie said, her voice cold and calculating. "Since you couldn't quite manage to melt your cube, we've got a little punishment for you."

Lily's eyes snapped open, her cheeks still burning with embarrassment. "What is it?" she asked, her voice trembling slightly.

"You're going to get spanked," Ellie announced, a smug smile playing on her lips. "By Riley."

Lily's eyes widened in shock, looking from Ellie to Riley and back again. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. Riley's cheeks flushed an even deeper shade of red as she took in the trio's expectant expressions.

With trembling hands, Riley pushed herself into a sitting position, the plastic chair sticking to her wet skin as she moved. She looked over at Lily, who had rolled onto her back, her legs still shaking slightly from the recent exposure. Lily's eyes searched hers for a moment, a silent plea for understanding. Riley took a deep breath, trying to ignore the way her own pussy was throbbing at the thought of what she was about to do.

"I'm sorry," Riley whispered, her voice shaking almost as much as her hands. She reached out and took one of Lily's wrists, pulling her to a standing position. "Come here."

Lily stumbled to her feet, her legs wobbly as she followed Riley's lead. They both knew this was part of the game, but the reality of it made her stomach churn. Ellie's cruel smile only grew wider as she watched the two girls, the power dynamics stark and unyielding.

"Bend over, Lily," Riley said, her voice barely above a whisper. She felt sick to her stomach, but she knew that Ellie would only escalate if she didn't follow through. "I'm sorry."

Lily took a deep, shaky breath and leaned over the chair, her ass in the air. Riley's hand hovered over her pink, plump cheeks, the reality of the situation making her hesitate. She had never spanked anyone before, let alone in such a public and humiliating way.

"Do it," Ellie urged, her voice low and demanding. "And make it count. We want to see a good show."

Riley's hand trembled as it made contact with Lily's skin, delivering a gentle smack. Lily's gasp was audible, and the sound of the slap echoed in the tense silence that had settled over the pool area. The trio leaned in, their eyes glinting with excitement. Riley delivered another smack, slightly harder this time, and Lily's body jerked in response.

The crowd of college kids around the pool had taken notice, their whispers and giggles growing louder as they watched the scene unfold. Riley's stomach turned at the thought of being watched, but Ellie's glare was a constant reminder that she had no choice but to continue. With a deep breath, she raised her hand again, bringing it down on Lily's ass with a resounding crack. Lily's cheeks turned a darker shade of pink, and she bit her lip to stifle a moan.

"Again," Ellie ordered, her eyes glinting with satisfaction. "And don't hold back."

Riley swallowed hard, her hand poised in the air. She could feel the eyes of the onlookers on her, a mix of curiosity and excitement. Despite the fear of their audience, she knew she had to obey. She brought her hand down with more force this time, the sound echoing through the pool area. Lily's body tensed, and she let out a soft whimper.

"Good," Ellie purred, her eyes glued to the scene. "Keep going, Riley. Show us what you're made of."

Riley's hand fell in a steady rhythm, each smack echoing through the tense silence. Lily's whimpers grew louder, her body quivering with each impact. The trio watched with rapt attention, their eyes shining with excitement as the power dynamics played out before them.

As Riley's smacks grew more forceful, Lily's skin turned a rosy pink, the color deepening with each stroke. Her ass bounced with every hit, the plump flesh rippling like waves in a pond. The sight was mesmerizing, a stark contrast to the serene backdrop of the pool. The trio's gazes were hungry, their desire for dominance evident in the way they leaned forward, eager for more.

Finally, Ellie raised a hand to stop Riley. "That's enough," she said, her voice thick with satisfaction. "Look at that beautiful ass. So pink and tender."

Lily's body was trembling, her legs threatening to give out beneath her. The pain from the spanking had turned into a dull throb, a constant reminder of her submission to the trio. Her ass was indeed a vibrant shade of pink, the contrast against her pale skin stark and unmistakable.

"Thank you, Riley," Ellie said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "That was quite the performance."

Riley's hand fell to her side, the sting of the spanking echoing through her own body. She felt a strange mix of relief and guilt as she watched Lily stand up, her eyes filled with unshed tears.

"Alright, you can both jump back into the pool," Ellie said, her voice a smug purr. "We're leaving soon, and we wouldn't want you to get too hot out here."

Riley and Lily shared a look of relief, their bodies still trembling from the intense experience. They quickly climbed down from the lounge chairs and made their way to the pool's edge. The cool water beckoned, a sweet release from the heat of the sun and the trio's humiliating games.

The water was a refreshing embrace, the coolness washing over them as they submerged themselves. Lily winced slightly as she felt the sting of the chlorine against her sore ass, but the pain was quickly soothed by the gentle caress of the water. Riley slid in beside her, their bodies brushing against each other as they found a spot to stand in the shallow end.

"Are you okay?" Riley whispered, her eyes searching Lily's for any sign of distress.

Lily nodded, her cheeks still flushed from the spanking. "I'm fine," she managed to say, though her voice was strained. "Thank you... for not making it too hard."

Riley's eyes searched hers, filled with genuine concern. "I'm sorry," she murmured. "I didn't want to do it."

Lily took a deep breath, the cool water lapping at their waists. "I know," she said softly. "It's not your fault."

They hung out in the pool for a bit, the water a comforting barrier against the prying eyes of the college kids around them. The laughter and chatter of the partygoers began to muffle the echoes of their recent humiliation. They floated together, the gentle waves of the pool acting as a balm to their bruised egos.

After a few minutes, Ellie's voice cut through the water's whisper. "Alright, that's enough," she said, her tone clipped. "It's time to get out of the pool."

Riley and Lily exchanged a wary glance, their bodies tense as they climbed out of the water. The coldness of the air hit them like a slap, their skin prickling with goosebumps. The two girls stood there, naked and exposed, their cute pussies on display for the world to see. The water droplets clung to their skin, tracing a path down their curves, highlighting their intimate parts in a way that was both humiliating and oddly erotic.

[Bucket]

Thank you so much once again for the constant stream of new chapters! It's so wonderful getting such astonishing chapters so often! Will read chapter 33, 34 and 35 towards the end of the week.

[Emily]

Thank you so much once again for the constant stream of new chapters! It's so wonderful getting such astonishing chapters so often! Will read chapter 33, 34 and 35 towards the end of the week.

I cannot wait to hear your thoughts on them!