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by Emily
Sun May 12, 2024 10:44 pm
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The Unraveling (New 11/23)

The Unraveling Table of Contents Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 Chapter 15 Chapter 16 Chapter 17 Chapter 18 Chapter 19 Chapter 20 Chapter 21 Chapter 22 Chapter 23 Chapter 24 Chapter 25 ...
by Emily
Mon May 13, 2024 1:09 am
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Chapter 2 Riley’s eyes darted around the hallway, searching for anything that might help her, and that's when she saw it. Out of the corner of her eye, a single, familiar-looking sock perched on the edge of a door. A surge of hope filled her chest. She hurried over, her toes curling with anticipati...
by Emily
Mon May 13, 2024 3:23 am
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Chapter 3 Riley’s heart pounded in her ears as she waited for a response. There silence seemed to stretch on forever, and with every passing second, she felt the weight of her actions pressing down on her. She wondered if she had made a terrible mistake, if there was some way out of this nightmare....
by Emily
Tue May 14, 2024 2:02 am
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Chapter 4 The next few days were fairly uneventful for Riley, as she settled into her new life as college student. To avoid seeing Ellie and Aria all together, she spent all of her free time away from her dorm, only sneaking in at night to sleep. One night, while she was in the library studying for...
by Emily
Tue May 14, 2024 5:37 am
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Chapter 5 The next morning, Riley awoke to the soft glow of sunlight streaming through the window. She glanced over to the other bed, where Ellie still slept soundly, her long, curly sprawled across the pillow. The events of the previous night came flooding back to her, and a mixture of shame, arou...
by Emily
Tue May 14, 2024 1:33 pm
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Re: The Unraveling

I am very much enjoying this story. I am really liking the shy, embarrassed responses of Riley and her reluctance and nervousness in complying not to mention the wicked imaginations of her tormentors, Ellie and Aria. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hooked6 Thank you! I’m glad you are enjoying ...
by Emily
Tue May 14, 2024 4:46 pm
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Chapter 6 "Come on, let's go in," Ellie said, opening the door to the car. She stepped out onto the sidewalk, the bright mall lights illuminating the parking lot around them. Riley followed suit, her heart still racing as they made their way towards the entrance. The mall was bustling wit...
by Emily
Fri May 17, 2024 1:45 pm
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Chapter 7 Soon, Ellie set a tray of food down in front of them and took a seat as well. "I got us some chicken tenders, fries, and a couple of sodas. I hope that's okay." Riley nodded, still feeling a little self-conscious but trying to focus on the food. "It's all fine," she sa...
by Emily
Fri May 17, 2024 8:27 pm
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Re: The Unraveling

It’s great to see the wonderful feedback so far!
There will probably be at least a couple more chapters at the mall, any fun ideas as to what Ellie and Aria can do with Riley at the mall?
by Emily
Sat May 18, 2024 3:04 am
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Chapter 8 “Can I have my clothes now, please?" Riley asked tentatively, her cheeks still flushed with embarrassment. Ellie glanced at Aria, who nodded, and then back at Riley. "Well, you can have your dress," Ellie said, handing it back to her. "But as for your bra, you lied to ...