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The Unraveling

Table of Contents

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter ...

Chapter 2

Riley’s eyes darted around the hallway, searching for anything that might help her, and that's when she saw it. Out of the corner of her eye, a single, familiar-looking sock perched on the edge of a door. A surge of hope filled her chest. She hurried over, her toes curling with ...

Chapter 3

Riley’s heart pounded in her ears as she waited for a response. There silence seemed to stretch on forever, and with every passing second, she felt the weight of her actions pressing down on her. She wondered if she had made a terrible mistake, if there was some way out of this ...

Chapter 4

The next few days were fairly uneventful for Riley, as she settled into her new life as college student. To avoid seeing Ellie and Aria all together, she spent all of her free time away from her dorm, only sneaking in at night to sleep.

One night, while she was in the library studying ...

Chapter 5

The next morning, Riley awoke to the soft glow of sunlight streaming through the window. She glanced over to the other bed, where Ellie still slept soundly, her long, curly sprawled across the pillow. The events of the previous night came flooding back to her, and a mixture of shame ...

I am very much enjoying this story. I am really liking the shy, embarrassed responses of Riley and her reluctance and nervousness in complying not to mention the wicked imaginations of her tormentors, Ellie and Aria. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Thank you! I’m glad you are ...

Chapter 6

"Come on, let's go in," Ellie said, opening the door to the car. She stepped out onto the sidewalk, the bright mall lights illuminating the parking lot around them. Riley followed suit, her heart still racing as they made their way towards the entrance.

The mall was bustling with ...

Chapter 7

Soon, Ellie set a tray of food down in front of them and took a seat as well. "I got us some chicken tenders, fries, and a couple of sodas. I hope that's okay."

Riley nodded, still feeling a little self-conscious but trying to focus on the food. "It's all fine," she said, taking a few ...

It’s great to see the wonderful feedback so far!
There will probably be at least a couple more chapters at the mall, any fun ideas as to what Ellie and Aria can do with Riley at the mall?

Chapter 8

“Can I have my clothes now, please?" Riley asked tentatively, her cheeks still flushed with embarrassment. Ellie glanced at Aria, who nodded, and then back at Riley.

"Well, you can have your dress," Ellie said, handing it back to her. "But as for your bra, you lied to us, Riley ...