The writing is still top notch, and I believe there is more to cum, but it seems we may have seen everything Cam has to offer at this point…
Or have we????
He was able to get a boner earlier.
Maybe… JUST MAYBE,
Cam is a grower and NOT a shower????
Ellie is obviously disappointed and that hurts
Another testament to your writing
I was hoping for an incredibly embarrassing, but hopeful ending.
But as it flops, it seems Cam is screwed, and not literally.
Even worse, it seems he’ll never again be admired by Ellie

She was hoping he had SOMETHING to show, but it seems he’s just a little boy.
Maybe Hannah and Mia would even cut him some slack if he had a boner.
Maybe he should try and get even? Again??!
Maybe the embarrassment and shame will end up being Cam’s saving grace???
As we know, embarrassment can sometimes accompany arousal.
At this point, all he can hope for is to surprise the girls


The fact that this ISN’T the final chapter has me hopeful
And I am in NO way upset with your writing

This hurt.
THAT’S good writing!