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This has been such a great story! So many twists and turns and questions to be asked! Revenge is necessary but will Ellie think taking pictures is taking revenge too far? Will this be more of a private embarrassment between all of them or more public with maybe the teenagers by the jazcuzzi coming ...

This is my first attempt at writing a story of any nature. Any feedback is appreciated please be nice!

Part 1


Today started off like any other day. I was doing homework in the kitchen while listening to music. In the other room my two sisters Juliana and Claire were both on the phone talking ...

That's how you know it's a good story when there's a lot of potential outcomes! I'm not sure Ellie would approve of blackmail since it seems on previous chapters she still cares for him but just wants to be even with what he saw but who knows with Mia and Hannah running the show! Can't wait for the ...

I hit a writer's block on my story so I thought I'd do an alternate ending version on this story "humiliated in bar by Anon" posted by Darky in the archives of this site. I hope that's ok if not I'll delete this. I only edited the ending version and changed some formatting. Enjoy!

I was a junior ...

Decided to stick with Juliana's viewpoint since I posted it on enf and the first part was to just setup the story.

Part 2

"If I stay here they'll surely find me. They'll recognize me and I'll be known as the naked girl for the rest of high school" I thought. I just couldn't think rationally right ...

Thanks! Not for this one. I just edited an existing story from the archive but wanted a different ending. Still trying to figure out writing these types of stories.

An absolute master piece! I can feel the hatred towards characters like Hannah and Mia for time and time again being overly cruel in a kinda innocent way? And then Ellie I mean I like her but also can't believe a simple peak is turning into videos/pictures that could have bigger unintended ...

Everyone in this story is 18 or older and is based on a true story. However, the added journey is more fiction maybe wished it played out like this but glad it didn't at the same time?? I'm still trying to improve my writing skills so let me know what everyone thinks!


Part 1: Not Your Average ...

Not surprisingly another amazing part!!! I'm so glad Cam got humiliated the way he did but in a way made it worth it for Cam because Ellie forgives him and is thinking straightly now. Although I have a feeling there there could be another twist (hopefully coming at the expense of Hannah or Mia) but ...

Part 3

The short answer was yes, but there was still some hope that it could still be no.

"I'm going to let go of your arm, but if you run you're going to wish these 3 boys were the only people who sees you tonight." Carly whispered. Immediately understanding everything she was saying I covered ...