Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

[NudeBaG]

Even if someone’s speculation/prediction is close or even dead on to what you have planned, you should have the confidence in yourself to deliver at that point.
That’s just my opinion though.
I’ve seen first hand on here how subversion of expectations can kill a great story.
Go with your gut though.
You ARE an amazing writer, and I have faith you can work with anything.
You have masterfully maintained the tease to perfection, and I fully believe the payoff will be epic.
As I’ve stated, your implementation of the time limit was a fantastic tool.
There’s only so much more that CAN happen within that time limit.
The fact that every chapter has left me wanting more is a testament to your writing.
All I’m saying is, as long as you maintain the quality you’ve delivered so far, all you have to do is put the last few pieces in place, then step back and admire the picture

And I’m sorry if I’ve put unnecessary pressure on you, but this story really IS incredible and IS my current favorite

[Summers]

I understand the comment about having people suggest something close to what you had planned.

It may not be logical, but there is a part of you that thinks about whether that person would think you did it because of their suggestion, and i would imagine, when it is in the open, like the comments on this forum, it would be worse, as others might think the same.

Not a massive thing, but definitely something that can cross your mind.

Kind of glad, when i posted on Nifty, that all comments and feeback was emails. i am not sure if a live and public comment section, would have been a good thing or not for me at the time.

I actually tend to not comment much myself on stories, in case it comes across as trying to take over the story, or if i suggest something already in the works, plus, i ramble, and often confuse myself with the point i am trying to make

[NudeBaG]

Another aspect of this story in particular that tends to get overlooked a lot in these kinds of stories is your depiction of relationships between characters.

Like, I know it’s an ENM story, and Cam IS a bit careless (in more ways than one) AND I DESPERATELY want him to be further embarrassed in front of the girls, but I also ‘kind of’ hope Ellie, Hannah and Mia are a bit surprised
Like, the budding relationship with Ellie has been masterfully crafted in a short time.
She CLEARLY cares for him, and given any other set of circumstances, this could be just a normal day at the pool where their budding relationship evolves and they get closer.

But now, thanks to jealousy, hormones, sibling rivalry, classmate rivalry, revenge and every other conflict that comes at that age, Cam has lived up to Hannah and Mia’s view of him as ‘a stupid boy’.
Even when given the chance to make it up to Ellie, he couldn’t do something that (may have) endeared him to her further.
Now, it seems he’ll be exposed to her WITHOUT the safety net of compassion that was there before.
Again, masterfully crafted relationships in a very short time.

I rambled a bit there, but my point was to further praise your writing abilities

[Freesub]

Though I must say, I think Hannah also deserves some exposure

By the end of this story, Hannah will not have had everything go her own way. I have something planned for her. I'll say no more than that.

I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them returning to the changing cubicle.

I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board.

It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan, when people are offering their own ideas and preferences, and end up struggling to finish the story, as it doesn't quite feel like what you had in mind from the start.

I would love to write my own story on here, but i struggle to take an idea, and actually write the story. i get too distracted, and tend to ramble on in my writing, so what could easily be a story that lasts a few chapters, it turns into an out of control entity with no end in sight

I've only managed to ever write one complete story, and it was insanely long.

Anyway (see i can't help myself, i ramble, lol) good story, and thank you for sharing.

Thanks. I always had a clear plan in my head to start small in a changing cubicle, go big and crazy in the middle, then bring it back to small and personal in a cubicle at the end. However, the story has definitely grown in the telling!

To be honest, I find it more of a struggle when people post something very close to what I already have planned, than when they suggest something completely different. I sort of think it won't be a surprise anymore, or it'll look like I've lifted their idea. But I force myself to get over that. I've deliberately set up and foreshadowed so much stuff that it's inevitable some of the speculation will be pretty close to the mark.

Good luck if you do write something again!

I think the speculation's accuracy is more so down to your hints and the people's experience in reading stories, so I think you are correct in not worrying about whether it will look like you have lifted their idea

[NudeBaG]

Part 10 cumming soon, I hope

[DrWhoFanJ]

Part 10 cumming soon, I hope

Given the current rate of one chapter every four days we’ve had so far, the single most anticipated release (pun intended) of 2025 should be coming tomorrow!