Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

[NudeBaG]

Okay, I just reread that work of art.
Reading it back, it seems I was mistaken.
Mia and Ellie HAVEN’T seen Cameron’s genitals yet, only Hannah, and only briefly.
Mia has a picture of at least Cam’s bare butt, but did she get a picture of anything else?!
And is Ellie there with them?
Or is it just Cam, Mia and Hannah?

I still say a physical tussle with a naked Cam is in store.
Ellie NEEDS to be involved in Cameron’s complete exposure

Ellie is with Mia in the next cubicle, she was the one who swiped Cameron’s swim suit. (She no longer need to imagine Cam naked in the changing cubicle, she had him where she wanted. )

That’s what I thought, just wanted to be sure to complete the image in my head!

Thank you for confirmation

I’m loving this!

Can’t wait for the climax

[NudeBaG]

Okay BareB4U, I just reread our last PM

I hope I’m on the right path as to what is going to happen
No spoilers from me

This is in the running for my official favorite story here

Just had to point this out for my own pleasure

“The thought of all this attention (particularly Ellie’s attention) on his private anatomy was starting to have an effect on it. He felt himself begin to stiffen, his penis starting to push against the hands that were clutching it tightly to the rest of his body. For a moment, he and Ellie locked eyes. It seemed as if something empathic passed between them. Cameron knew he looked wretched. He saw the delight in Ellie’s eyes fade and be replaced by something more like pity. Fantastic, he thought sarcastically. Now she thinks I’m pathetic. But then Ellie did something which puzzled Cameron, and gave him the tiniest of nods. What could that mean?

Ellie’s lustful desire to see Cameron’s bare body in all its glory had been doing battle with her affection for him as a person since she arrived on the scene. His hands were fidgeting and he seemed to be struggling to keep himself covered. She REALLY wanted to see what was behind those hands, but she also had some sympathy for how he must be feeling. Was modesty as strong for boys as it was for girls? She would DIE if she were to lose her bikini in front of Cam and other boys!”

Cam can INDEED become erect, and it does seem to enhance his size, let’s hope it’s enough to be impressive to Hannah, Ellie and Mia

[steam train]

Okay, I just reread that work of art.
Reading it back, it seems I was mistaken.
Mia and Ellie HAVEN’T seen Cameron’s genitals yet, only Hannah, and only briefly.
Mia has a picture of at least Cam’s bare butt, but did she get a picture of anything else?!
And is Ellie there with them?
Or is it just Cam, Mia and Hannah?

I still say a physical tussle with a naked Cam is in store.
Ellie NEEDS to be involved in Cameron’s complete exposure

Ellie is with Mia in the next cubicle, she was the one who swiped Cameron’s swim suit. (She no longer need to imagine Cam naked in the changing cubicle, she had him where she wanted. )

That’s what I thought, just wanted to be sure to complete the image in my head!


Thank you for confirmation

I’m loving this!

Can’t wait for the climax

I’ve had to reread this as well. I don’t think Ellie has seen anything yet from what the author wrote. She reached under the partition and disappeared with Cameron’s swim trunks so was back out of sight by the time the towel was stripped off. It is ambiguous if she is up above the partition with Mia but it would seem not, so I am inclined to think she still has only seen Cameron from the rear and only then at some distance. …. So the tease is what shall she do with the swim shorts?

[NudeBaG]

Ellie is with Mia in the next cubicle, she was the one who swiped Cameron’s swim suit. (She no longer need to imagine Cam naked in the changing cubicle, she had him where she wanted. )

That’s what I thought, just wanted to be sure to complete the image in my head!


Thank you for confirmation

I’m loving this!

Can’t wait for the climax

I’ve had to reread this as well. I don’t think Ellie has seen anything yet from what the author wrote. She reached under the partition and disappeared with Cameron’s swim trunks so was back out of sight by the time the towel was stripped off. It is ambiguous if she is up above the partition with Mia but it would seem not, so I am inclined to think she still has only seen Cameron from the rear and only then at some distance. …. So the tease is what shall she do with the swim shorts?

This story has been literally THE BEST example of a ‘tease’ as I’ve ever read.
I know in my head how I want things to go, and have definitely made that known
I have faith that the author will live up to all the expectations set forth.

No pressure

[BareB4U]

I've made a couple of small changes to the end of the most recent chapter, as it seems from these comments that I hadn't written it as clearly as it needed to be.

Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia.

No, she hasn't got a peek yet.

Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present.

Cameron is fairly sure she wasn't there taking a photo of his front a moment earlier.

Thanks everyone!

[Freesub]

I've made a couple of small changes to the end of the most recent chapter, as it seems from these comments that I hadn't written it as clearly as it needed to be.

Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia.

No, she hasn't got a peek yet.

Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present.

Cameron is fairly sure she wasn't there taking a photo of his front a moment earlier.

Thanks everyone!

Loving it! Can't wait for more!
I hope ellie will forgive cameron and decide a peek of her front is a fair trade for a peek of his

[Freesub]

Though I must say, I think Hannah also deserves some exposure

[Summers]

I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them returning to the changing cubicle.

I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board.

It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan, when people are offering their own ideas and preferences, and end up struggling to finish the story, as it doesn't quite feel like what you had in mind from the start.

I would love to write my own story on here, but i struggle to take an idea, and actually write the story. i get too distracted, and tend to ramble on in my writing, so what could easily be a story that lasts a few chapters, it turns into an out of control entity with no end in sight

I've only managed to ever write one complete story, and it was insanely long.

Anyway (see i can't help myself, i ramble, lol) good story, and thank you for sharing.

[NudeBaG]

Just read the rewrite
Perfect!

CAN NOT wait for the full exposure!

I still stand by my previous hopes and dreams, and I still have faith that you will deliver

Shit!

Now I have a at work

Full disclosure, this is one of those stories I read multiple times while masturbating, putting myself in the character’s place.

To me, that’s the true mark of excellence in a writer’s work on here!

Stellar Job !