Becky's Initiation

[Jeepman89]

It's very obvious why he's so popular with all those girls now.

[hightab]

I just logged in to say I hate that ending. Wtf after all they have been through together Becky and Ryan they break up. If anything Becky and Ryan should get revenge on the sosrity and stay together

[Datom]

I just logged in to say I hate that ending. Wtf after all they have been through together Becky and Ryan they break up. If anything Becky and Ryan should get revenge on the sosrity and stay together

Yeah, I know. Maybe in a future story.

[Datom]

Several people hated the ending of this story. So I'm going to try an alternate ending or two.

ALTERNATE ENDING 1:

“Well, congratulations!” Tami looked at Becky. “You’ve survived the initiation, Becky! You’re now officially a member of Kappa Nu Tau. How do you like it?”

Becky blurted out, “You can take your Kappa Nu Tau and go to hell with it! Now get out of here, all of you!”

Mandy and Tami shrugged and left. Ryan turned and followed.

"No, Ryan!" Becky blurted out. "I didn't mean you! Please stay!"

Ryan turned and looked at Becky. His face was blank. He spoke.

"Yes, Becky. Me too. You're the one who got me into this nightmare."

"I didn't mean to," Becky wailed. "I didn't know this was all going to happen!"

"I warned you," Ryan said. His voice was starting to sound angry now.

Becky's eyes opened wide. "But I never thought they'd do this to you!" She put her hand on Ryan's arm. "I hated this, Ryan! Believe me, I hated it! They had me tied up to that chair by the window so I had to watch! I had to sit and watch while all those girls walked up to you, and put their hands all over your bare body, and took off your underpants, and . . . and played with your penis! And I hated when that carful of girls came and put you in their station wagon and took you off to . . . to . . .to wherever!" She paused for breath. "I hated it!"

"Yeah," said Ryan. His tone was clipped. "You hated it. Well, I wasn't too crazy about it either. Don't forget, I'm the one who got tied up and put on display naked, and got photographed in the nude. And heaven only knows how many girls are gonna see those pictures of me and recognize me! And then I was the one who got hauled off to that apartment by those girls! I was the one who got raped . . ."

"Boys can't get raped," Becky interjected.

"Oh, no? Well this boy sure was! And then on top of that, to be told that they gave me herpes!" Ryan stopped for breath, then went on, "I'm still not sure that was a joke. I'm going to get in and see my doctor next week. And, so help me, if he tells me I have herpes," he paused again, "if he tells me I have so much as even one little herp, . . ."

"Herp?"

". . .I'm gonna have someone in court so fast it won't be funny!"

"Oh, Ryan!" Becky sobbed, "I'm so, so sorry!"

"Yeah?" Ryan's voice was even more clipped. "Well, I'm sorry too, Becky. But if you don't have more respect for me than that, then, I'm done with you!"

Ryan pulled up the blanked over himself, turned, and walked out the door, leaving Becky sobbing.

[hightab]

Several people hated the ending of this story. So I'm going to try an alternate ending or two.

ALTERNATE ENDING 1:

“Well, congratulations!” Tami looked at Becky. “You’ve survived the initiation, Becky! You’re now officially a member of Kappa Nu Tau. How do you like it?”

Becky blurted out, “You can take your Kappa Nu Tau and go to hell with it! Now get out of here, all of you!”

Mandy and Tami shrugged and left. Ryan turned and followed.

"No, Ryan!" Becky blurted out. "I didn't mean you! Please stay!"

Ryan turned and looked at Becky. His face was blank. He spoke.

"Yes, Becky. Me too. You're the one who got me into this nightmare."

"I didn't mean to," Becky wailed. "I didn't know this was all going to happen!"

"I warned you," Ryan said. His voice was starting to sound angry now.

Becky's eyes opened wide. "But I never thought they'd do this to you!" She put her hand on Ryan's arm. "I hated this, Ryan! Believe me, I hated it! They had me tied up to that chair by the window so I had to watch! I had to sit and watch while all those girls walked up to you, and put their hands all over your bare body, and took off your underpants, and . . . and played with your penis! And I hated when that carful of girls came and put you in their station wagon and took you off to . . . to . . .to wherever!" She paused for breath. "I hated it!"

"Yeah," said Ryan. His tone was clipped. "You hated it. Well, I wasn't too crazy about it either. Don't forget, I'm the one who got tied up and put on display naked, and got photographed in the nude. And heaven only knows how many girls are gonna see those pictures of me and recognize me! And then I was the one who got hauled off to that apartment by those girls! I was the one who got raped . . ."

"Boys can't get raped," Becky interjected.

"Oh, no? Well this boy sure was! And then on top of that, to be told that they gave me herpes!" Ryan stopped for breath, then went on, "I'm still not sure that was a joke. I'm going to get in and see my doctor next week. And, so help me, if he tells me I have herpes," he paused again, "if he tells me I have so much as even one little herp, . . ."

"Herp?"

". . .I'm gonna have someone in court so fast it won't be funny!"

"Oh, Ryan!" Becky sobbed, "I'm so, so sorry!"

"Yeah?" Ryan's voice was even more clipped. "Well, I'm sorry too, Becky. But if you don't have more respect for me than that, then, I'm done with you!"

Ryan pulled up the blanked over himself, turned, and walked out the door, leaving Becky sobbing.

It’s the same ending with more words. We don’t need a recap on how it lead up to where they are now.

[Datom]

"It’s the same ending with more words. We don’t need a recap on how it lead up to where they are now."

It's NOT the same ending, Hightab. In this one, he breaks up with her, rather than the reverse.

When I get time I'll try again.

[Datom]

ALTERNATE ENDING 2

Mandy and Tami turned, in a huff, and shrugged, and marched out the door.

“Oh, Ryan!” Becky burst out. “I’m so sorry!”

“That was just plain evil!” Ryan shook his head. “The stuff they did to me!”

“I know!” Becky took Ryan’s arm. “I saw it!”

“You did?”

“Yes! Tami and her friend tied me to a chair and pushed me up to the window. They made me watch you outside!”

Ryan stood up and looked out the window. Sure enough, there was the streetlight. And lying in the grass, a few feet away, was the wooden box.

“So you had to watch while they did all that stuff to me? While they pulled down my underpants and played with me and . . . and everything?”

“Oh, yes, Ryan! I hated it! Then that car came up and took you away, and Tami pretended she didn’t know where they took you!”

Becky had tears in her eyes now. Ryan came over and put his bare arm around her shoulders.

“It’s okay, Becky,” he said quietly. “It’s over now.”

“But it was all my fault.”

“No, it wasn’t. You didn’t know they were going to do all that to me, did you?”

“No,” Becky sniffed.

“Then how could it be your fault?”

“But, Ryan,” Becky asked, “What about all the pictures they took of you? Those girls are going to share your naked pictures with their friends. Those are going to be all over campus, aren’t they?” Her eyes widened. “I don’t want other girls having nude pictures of my boyfriend!”

“Yeah, I guess. And every so often I’ll pass some girl I don’t know, and she’ll give me a funny look. I don’t know what I can do about that.”

“I hate her,” Becky growled. “I hate that Tami. I wish I could get back at her!”

“Well,” Ryan looked at her inquisitively, “What do you suggest?”

“I’d like to do just what she did to you!” Becky muttered. “I’d like to strip her down to her panties and tie her up to a lamppost!”

“How about the one right in front of Fletcher Hall?” Ryan grinned.

“The boys’ dorm?” Becky looked at him, a little surprised.

“Sure,” Ryan was grinning wickedly now. “The guys in Fletcher are total animals. They’ll love having her on display in front of the dorm.”

“I bet they’d love to come out and take pictures of her body,” Becky smiled.

“Oh, they’d do more than that. They’d have their hands all over her.”

“Omigod! I’d love to see her squirming! Naked and helpless, while they fondle her breasts, and . . . and play with her nipples . . .”

“And pet her belly and her thighs . . .”

“And squeeze her ass . . .”

Ryan chuckled, “And when they start slipping their hands inside her panties, and touching her lips, and sliding their fingers up inside her and start stimulating her . . .”

“Omigod, Ryan! They’ll make her climax three times in the first twenty minutes!”

“She’ll have as many fingers inside her as a baseball glove!”

Becky giggled at the metaphor. “And they’ll be wiggling around inside her helpless body.”

Suddenly Ryan stood up and grinned broadly. “Becky, let’s do it!”

“Do what?”

“Go tie up Tami and strip her.”

“We can’t, though! I mean, it’s fun to talk about it, but in real life, real people couldn’t actually do it!”

“That’s it, though,” Ryan explained. “Don’t you see, Becky? We’re not real people. We’re characters in an ENM story. So we can do whatever the author lets us do.”

“That’s right!" Becky brightened. “Of course, if we do, it will turn into an ENF story.”

“If that’s okay with you, it’s okay with me.”

Becky noodded. "I don't mind a bit."

“Come on, Becky. I want to stop at my place and put some clothes on. Then let’s go show Tami to the world.”

Becky was all smiles now. “Or at least to all the hungry guys in Fletcher Hall.”

Holding the blanket on him with one hand, Ryan stretched out his free hand and took Becky’s hand. They headed for the door.

[hightab]

ALTERNATE ENDING 2

“That’s it, though,” Ryan explained. “Don’t you see, Becky? We’re not real people. We’re characters in an ENM story. So we can do whatever the author lets us do.”

That’s funny to make them say that and that’s a funny and better ending

[Massageguy]

More rape doesn't improve the story...