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by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 7:56 pm
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Re: Disgraced for Cheating

Excellent story! Quite an unusual premise! And good pacing, making her show herself first to the office personnel, then to her classmates. That must have been mortifying for her! Nice job! (Too bad the teacher didn't write the big red F on her boobs.)
by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 8:21 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

Woah! Creepy!

Good idea, including the ice-water, and that naked walk through the house.

Looking forward to seeing what The Voice makes her do next!
by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 8:28 pm
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Re: Contract Offer

Omigosh! This is getting worse (better) by the paragraph! Looking forward to seeing what's in store for this poor girl next! Is she taken for a walk through the neighborhood without the costume? Are there more hidden cameras?
by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 9:04 pm
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Re: A date with the prettiest girl in school

Neat premise. He thought she was his date but she turned out to be his babysitter. And now she has an audience in front of whom she can humiliate him.

I'm definitely gonna want to read the next installment of this!
by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 9:57 pm
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Re: A Tangled Web

This is turning into a tangled web! I'm loving it, though. What's going to happen to poor Bailey? Looking forward to the next installment.
by Datom
Tue Apr 09, 2024 6:30 pm
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Re: Senior Prank Day (Short Story)

Woah! I did NOT see that coming! Nice work!
by Datom
Wed Apr 10, 2024 7:07 pm
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Coming Home from the Pool

"Hey, Kev! Where ya goin?" I heard my friend’s voice calling to me out of the pool, where about twenty-five boys and girls were playing. It was a warm day in mid-August, when summer vacation was waning, and we kids at the pool wanted to get every minute of fun we could into the remaining d...
by Datom
Wed Apr 10, 2024 9:29 pm
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Lawn Work

LAWN AND YARD WORK Lawn-mowing, hedge trimming, tree trimming, or any other kind of work. Hard-working and dependable Nick Stevens 811-8240 nicks99@yaho,com Nick looked proudly at the top card on the stack of his home-made business cards, and then put them back in the pocket of his shorts. He was p...
by Datom
Thu Apr 11, 2024 12:27 am
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Re: Talent Show Gone Wrong...Or Right?

Wow! Keeps getting worse and worse for the poor guy! Excellent story! You had a unique premise, and you wrote it well.
by Datom
Thu Apr 11, 2024 5:28 am
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Nick Babysits

I may as well start by telling you that my name is Nick Swanson. I live with my Mom (Dad disappeared when I was three) in Maplewood. I’m a junior at Maplewood High. I’m planning to go to the State university after I finish high school, but that’s a couple years away. Good thing, too—I’ve been workin...