I really enjoyed your story The Passion of Jessica Christ. One matter to consider, should you ever choose to return to the story, is the distinction between "Lady" and "Dame". A woman who marries a "knight" is referred to as a "lady". Women of independent achievement in the British system are elevated to the title "Dame".
I'd also consider altering the name "Joel", though I know why you've used it And perhaps editing out the reference to Johnny Depp, which hasn't aged well. I also seem to recall that Jessica's classmate isn't described before he makes his big appearance in the play.
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Personally I feel it went way too one sided and cfnm enm and sph in private school. Look at playville and camp there was a nice even cfnm cmnf enf enm but private. You start with girl forced naked but keeps her vagina covered. Then phones are taken. Yet you have her become the stripper assaulting boys and everyone taking pictures. Shouldn't in your world since she assaulted them she should then be publicly displayed on and spanked. Or her display fully unable to move. This is where I feel it was way to one sided you made her the bad guy. The Kaiba in Sao. If you do a girl displayed to show rules are applied equally it would be better. But as stands words say equal but in application they are not. Plus we all know girls won't get the pics off by the next day will they be punished? It's a lot of guys do it punished girls do it and crickets one sided that's why private in my opinion is the worst offender. Cfnm enm is fine if there is some cmnf enf also equal cmnf enf. Plus you write of little kids children being assaulted
Just read "Private School Privates". What an amazing piece of erotica. High school students disciplined in the most humiliating ways. The best being the stripping and displaying of the misguided females and males in front of their fellow students. I found it highly stimulating. Nice job, Executions.
And perhaps editing out the reference to Johnny Depp, which hasn't aged well. I also seem to recall that Jessica's classmate isn't described before he makes his big appearance in the play.