Any recomendations?

[anthonydemon]

Greetings, I am a lover of well written prolonged forced nudity, as it was done before. Especially if it leads to OON at school. I would like to know if there is any "Old School" that can recommend me something along these lines. My favorite stories:

- Surprise Assembly (Katie)
- Davy, the Most Popular Kid in School (Darwin's Duck)

Thanks in advance!

[mastergepetto]

Ohhh Surprise Assembly is a classic! I haven’t read that in awhile!

A story somewhat similar along those lines is Tara’s Ordeal by FriarJohn99. Although it’s based in college, it’s still a prolonged OON in School type story where the heroine is forced to do many humiliating tasks in front of her classmates and peers.

Part 1
https://asstr.xyz/files/Authors/Vanessa ... 201.1.docx

Part 2
https://asstr.xyz/files/Authors/Vanessa ... 201.2.docx

Part 3
https://asstr.xyz/files/Authors/Vanessa ... 201.3.docx

[edithdick]

I just saw this posted on another site:

https://adrowen.wixsite.com/nkdfiction/ ... -in-school

And here is a long form story about a girl who accidentally became a nudist.

https://mollyzmind.com/fiction/what-a-g ... pt-01.html

[underdog_13]

It's hard to talk about nude in school and not to remember "The Unintentional Nudist", by TrackJim, DonnyLaja, Katie Lynch and others. Check out these sites:
https://www.donnylaja.com/tami-smithers-stories
https://allcmnf.thebeachclub-ii.net/vie ... =47&t=2852
https://writingsofleviticus.grometsplaz ... gadoon.htm

[Gizmo3056]

One of my favorites is a story called "A day at the Rec Center" by Moonlight.

Vanessa has a copy of it at her archive
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/uv4lzlupaxd1 ... tracking=1

[edithdick]

Greetings, I am a lover of well written prolonged forced nudity, as it was done before.

I’d like your opinion on something. I just started a rewrite of Janet’s Story because I realized that I wrote myself into oblivion the first time through. I thought chapter one was a solid premise, but this led to a situation of a forced permanent nudity for the main character.

I realized a little ways into the story that this would get monotonous if I tried to make every day feel like her first day being naked. To spice things up, I decided that some of her female friends would go naked with her out of sympathy. That was becoming a dead end as well, since you can only escalate everything to a certain point before the entire concept becomes boring.

My new version will start very similarly to the original, ENF OON forced nudism etc. but once that has been firmly established, I intend to write (hopefully) compelling story content with strong characters who love/hate each other and occasionally backstab one another. In other words, I’m planning a drama story with a (forced to be) naked girl as the main character.

Based on your interests, does this even sound like a story you would want to spend much time reading?

[anthonydemon]

Greetings, I am a lover of well written prolonged forced nudity, as it was done before.

I’d like your opinion on something. I just started a rewrite of Janet’s Story because I realized that I wrote myself into oblivion the first time through. I thought chapter one was a solid premise, but this led to a situation of a forced permanent nudity for the main character.

I realized a little ways into the story that this would get monotonous if I tried to make every day feel like her first day being naked. To spice things up, I decided that some of her female friends would go naked with her out of sympathy. That was becoming a dead end as well, since you can only escalate everything to a certain point before the entire concept becomes boring.

My new version will start very similarly to the original, ENF OON forced nudism etc. but once that has been firmly established, I intend to write (hopefully) compelling story content with strong characters who love/hate each other and occasionally backstab one another. In other words, I’m planning a drama story with a (forced to be) naked girl as the main character.

Based on your interests, does this even sound like a story you would want to spend much time reading?

That certainly sounds good. Personally, I like that the story focuses on the humiliation of a single person, for me that focus and cruelty is a vital part. There are many ways to escalate the story, but usually the ascending cruelty of the "punishers" is usually the best. You can also add new places that are increasingly public, add elements of soft bondage in specific uncomfortable situations, etc., although the key is to narrate in detail what the victim feels in this case, and the progressive and controlled escalation. Thanks for your comments and I hope I can be of some help (I'm going to read your story)

[anthonydemon]

Thank you all guys for the nice recommendations. unfortunately I have already read them all, but the response from the community is appreciated, best wishes <3

[underdog_13]

Okay, let's try again:

• Although not exactly "forced", Blair (BPClavel) has a classic, "The Exhibitionist Next Door". You can find it in Vanessa Evans' archive, here: https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Vanessa/ArchiveT/
• Another not exactly "forced" classic by BPClavel, also in Vanessa's archive, "Summer at Cache Lake": https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Vanessa/ArchiveS/
• Readerman also has a classic, a work-in-progress actually, "The Resort Ambassador", this one really forced, which you can find here ( https://nficstoryboard.com/profile/readerman/ ). Good comments on the story maybe get to help RM go on with it.
• CarrieP also has a classic, "A Passion for the Game", that you can find here (https://www.literotica.com/stories/memb ... ubmissions) and here (https://www.asstr.org/~Carrie/)
• Sabineteas has some great stories at Literotica: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memb ... ubmissions
• NakedDan (also known as D. H. Jonathan) has a fantastic story, "The Volunteer", which turned into a book, actually, with a sequel. His stories are available at Amazon here: ( https://www.amazon.com/stores/D.-H.-Jon ... abled=true )
• Falcon released "The Reluctant Exhibitionist" some time ago, and Seahalk76 kept on going with it. By the way, Seahawk76 has great stories. Here ( https://writingsofleviticus.grometsplaz ... ionist.htm ) and here ( https://www.literotica.com/stories/memb ... ubmissions ).
• bydasea also has great stories, a little bit (or a lot) into BDSM, here ( https://www.literotica.com/stories/memb ... ubmissions ) and here ( https://storiesonline.net/a/bydasea )
• Charles Frank (who, I believe, is another pen name for bydasea) has some stories here ( https://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/aut ... thorid=431 ).
• As I mentioned her name a few times here, Vanessa Evans has some fantastic stories (although some more to Exhibitionist than ENF) here (https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Vanessa/). She also used to have a favorites story folder there, but unfortunately she deleted it .
• The Writings of Leviticus has a whole ENF section here ( https://writingsofleviticus.grometsplaza.net/nudity.htm )
• The All CMNF Forum has this fantastic index to the stories posted there: ( https://allcmnf.thebeachclub-ii.net/vie ... =30&t=2515 )
• Cassie has a fantastic site with stories of Forced Nudity here ( https://puericil.netlify.app/fna/main ), but bookmark this page also ( https://justpaste.it/fna )
• Last, but not least, you may try Kristen Archives, here ( https://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/ )

And then, my friend, if you already know all these sites, maybe it's time to write your own stories, and share them here

[edithdick]

That certainly sounds good. Personally, I like that the story focuses on the humiliation of a single person, for me that focus and cruelty is a vital part. There are many ways to escalate the story, but usually the ascending cruelty of the "punishers" is usually the best. You can also add new places that are increasingly public, add elements of soft bondage in specific uncomfortable situations, etc., although the key is to narrate in detail what the victim feels in this case, and the progressive and controlled escalation. Thanks for your comments and I hope I can be of some help (I'm going to read your story)

Thanks for your feedback, maybe I will rethink my approach to this. Since my main problem with the original story was that Janet would eventually become used to being naked, and it would cease to be an interesting story to tell.

Your suggestion made me consider how to prevent this from happening. The way sit-coms don’t focus on character development, but just maintain the status quo. I could treat each chapter like a single story and never let her become comfortable with the status quo. Just humiliation after humiliation.

I really need to think about this. In the meantime, I really found this video interesting if I can adapt this technique to my story telling. Instead of comedic gags, humiliation gags.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vb11aCmZWc0