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This started out as two chapters, it ended with eleven chapters. I had a lot of fun creating the illustrations - I was inspired by the Archie Comics/Norman Rockwell vintage Americana.

https://storiesonline.net/n/44065/cousins-don-t-need-modesty

https://storiesonline.net/i/44065-c

As far as I am ...

“Dalton, you are really doing me a big favor,” my aunt said as I stood in her living room. It was 1987, and I was still in high school.

“I am just happy to help, Aunt Alice,” I smiled. I really had no choice in the matter. My mom had insisted that I help her sister and sent me over.

“You are ...

There i am selling used cars again.

My first thought when my naked cousins offered to play “Truth or Dare” and made it clear that they were only interested in “dares” was to dare them to fuck my brains out. I had no experience with truth or dare games, and I didn’t want to scare them off if that was too far out.

They seemed up for ...

One more image from chapter two. i find when I give them their own thread, they are larger/easier to read.

Hope that is okay.

“You thought you could get one over on me? That I was a softie? Do you think I was born yesterday? I know every trick in the book. You think my sister hasn’t tried buttering me up to get out of being made to count?” I asked. I was lying, of course. I realized that I probably shouldn’t embellish too ...

I think you are doing great, and you should keep writing.

My honest feedback;

1. This is very clear, and I love the use of dialogue and word pictures. Your tempo is good - the pacing of action to dialogue.
2. If you did not tell me this is your first written story, I would not have believed it.
3 ...

I thought it was a really cool story. I'd like to see more of it.

I had a similar idea for a Scottish family that lives near a nudist beach off the coast, but I have been working on finishing some of my other stories. This almost mirrors it, except that it's a girl who comes to live with them, and ...

Archie called his older sisters over with a patronizing grin, slapping his thighs like he was calling over playful puppies. “C’mon, mutts! C’mon girls, girly-girly, here, pup-pup-puppy, wag your arses, like good girls, Move your fat little butts, c’mon girl,” he slapped his thighs repeatedly to ...

I was deeply entrenched in the naughty puppy games we were playing outside and almost didn’t hear the doorbell when it rang. The sound broke the stalemate between my competitive cousins. I was enjoying the bouncing butts, and the humiliating games – but it was time for dinner! The girls were going ...