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by EddieDavidson
Thu Jan 16, 2025 6:43 pm
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Re: Becky Johnson Doesn’t Need Modesty

I'm not super creative so I really don't have a good reason why the attitude is changing and now girl's modesty i

Don't sell yourself short! first off, you created a "universe" - which is in and of itself, pretty cool. However, just from your short note -it shows you are already engaging on the ...
by EddieDavidson
Fri Jan 17, 2025 5:26 pm
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Chapter 5

My mom didn’t smile like she often did through spankings. She gazed at me with stern eyes and a flat expression, stoically offering her body to me completely and letting me slap down on her pussy as hard as I could – almost sting her as hard as I could on her most intimate body parts.

With the ...
by EddieDavidson
Fri Jan 17, 2025 10:13 pm
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Re: Alex the farm girl - Cenotes ahead!

I am always happy to encourage a fellow author!!

You have a great imagination here. If you write it like she is telling the story, it also helps you to see it through her eyes. I imagine I am the character, sitting across from the reader, shooting the shit and telling them the most interesting ...
by EddieDavidson
Sat Jan 18, 2025 5:27 am
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Girl Scout Cookies (Revised all chapters)

One of the fantastic things about this forum is the ability to collaborate and be inspired.

https://storiesonline.net/i/43683-c

I put in a few easter eggs in this picture - and a quick shoutout to Perseus who must have inspired many people with their writing, who in turn inspired me. I am not ...
by EddieDavidson
Sat Jan 18, 2025 5:38 am
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Chapter One (revised 1/24)

"Girls, it’s a new school year, and you know what that means! We’re selling Girl Scout cookies today. After you clean up the kitchen, I want you in your uniforms and to load the car with these cookies," Mom announced, her tone leaving no room for discussion.

Neither I nor my sister Alex protested ...
by EddieDavidson
Sun Jan 19, 2025 1:22 am
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Re: Girl Scout Cookies

This lot would definitely talk about that when confronted with naked butts.

Which also leads to the next phase of the story, where they talk about having a good look at them to cure them of their juvenile interests.
by EddieDavidson
Sun Jan 19, 2025 7:18 am
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T.W.A.T.S Program: Traditional Women Advocating Training and Submission

Twats are the names of the den mother/troop leader of girl scouts - the subtext is they were stripped of what little authority they had when the two organizations merged and reduced to den mother at best.

T.W.A.T.S Program: Traditional Women Advocating Training and Submission ...
by EddieDavidson
Mon Jan 20, 2025 5:20 am
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chapter 2

I made the probably unpopular decision to include an excerpt from the Girl Scout Handbook - but I enjoyed writing it and feel it's appropriate here.


“Today, you stepped up in the kitchen and called your sister’s disgusting armpits out, but you were really ridiculing me for not checking up on ...
by EddieDavidson
Tue Jan 21, 2025 7:32 am
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Re: Girl Scout Cookies

[I plan to use this as something of a story guide and take excerpts from it to include in the story in place of exposition.


THE GIRL SCOUTS (AKA TGS/TRADITIONAL GIRL SCOUTS) and THE BOY SCOUTS (AKA TRADITIONAL BOY SCOUTS) -Co-education/Joint Alliance
Girl Scout Values and Disciplinary Plan ...
by EddieDavidson
Wed Jan 22, 2025 5:56 pm
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Re: Girl Scout Cookies

I am working on Chapter three today. The first two chapters changed quite a bit. I wanted to take my time and build up the world by having things occur that help define why things work like they do here.

I also wanted to put excerpts of the Girl Scout Handbook throughout the story.

Today, I made ...