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by EddieDavidson
Wed Jan 22, 2025 6:00 pm
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Re: Girl Scout Cookies

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I also made this one; fun bonus points if you can catch all the Easter Eggs I stuck in this one.

(Hint: try as I might, none of the eggs could fit up their butts)

Note: None of these characters are in the story, they are generic Girl Scouts I created.
by EddieDavidson
Thu Jan 23, 2025 2:22 am
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Chapter 3

I am sure everyone knows not to click on that link above, but just in case - don't click on Nadia's "link".

Chapter Three

On Saturday, there was a ready stream of customers and no shortage of people looking to buy cookies or ogle the three of us. My mom is definitely an attractive woman, and ...
by EddieDavidson
Thu Jan 23, 2025 2:24 pm
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Eddie's notes

I made a "controversial" decision to include some aspects of the Girl Scout's handbook that I feel do the exposition of the world building well in the early parts of the story.

How do people feel about it?
(constructive only - so please don't say "Go touch grass/you suck/your writing sucks - yes, I ...
by EddieDavidson
Sun Jan 26, 2025 2:57 am
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Re: Girl Scout Cookies (Revised chapter 2)

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https://storiesonline.net/n/43683/girl- ... s-by-eddie

If you don't feel like scrolling up and don't mind a different site.
by EddieDavidson
Mon Jan 27, 2025 4:29 am
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chapter one

I have Superpowers! I first discovered I had invisibility about a year ago!

I haven’t used it to stop crime, and I haven’t told anyone. I am still unsure if I want to be a superhero or a villain. I am not exactly built to fight crime; I am kind of wimpy. I keep hoping that super strength and speed ...
by EddieDavidson
Mon Jan 27, 2025 4:30 am
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chapter two

"Darlene, your neural pathways are aligning—let the resonance guide your thoughts to stillness."
“No, this has gone on far enough, Josh!” Darlene’s raised her finger angrily. Kelly stood by me – calmly. My sister reacts this way each time I have to put her under my control. She’s far more reactive ...
by EddieDavidson
Tue Jan 28, 2025 5:23 am
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Katie's Babysitting Service (Short Story) **Chapter One**

The current title is Babysitting Inspector Bawdy and Gengar


I am not sold on that title, yet.

Here are a few others I am pondering.

Babysitter Bound: Katie's really bad day.

Tickled, Teased, and Topless
(The Three T's)

Agent Katie Gets Caught With Her Hands In Her Vagina
(I am just ...
by EddieDavidson
Tue Jan 28, 2025 5:23 am
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Chapter One

“Show us your tits, Katie!”

“Absolutely not, stop asking! That’s gross!” I insisted.

It was another Friday night, and I was babysitting two boys who were old enough to take care of themselves, but their lack of self-control and immaturity made it impossible for their parents to leave them home ...
by EddieDavidson
Wed Jan 29, 2025 2:02 am
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Re: Becky Johnson Doesn’t Need Modesty

another question:

In a world where modesty is not needed, would women's bathrooms be gender neutral, since people should be free to come and go as the women do not need privacy?