Amy Unfiltered

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I'd love to get your input on how to approach the scene between Amy and Samantha. Given that Samantha is the beautiful protagonist and will be nude, I'm considering telling this part of the story from her point of view. What are your thoughts on this?

If you want, you could briefly touch on it in Amy's story too, whether a monologue or a flashback or something.

[Rawr112]

In my view one protagonist and to be honest keep it separate. It’s cool enough that there is an implied or hinted at overlap without needing to tie the two stories together majorly.

The stories have different origins and I’m so uninterested in the Amy version but the Samantha corporate revenge story is great and thrilling.

Samantha’s continued story could continue with more of the corporate themed degradation including slowly her colleagues finding out, maybe some financial domination could come into it (whereas Amy wouldn’t have that), probably some collar and leash/servitude and the like.

Amy’s story is different altogether.

[Revengedpirate]

Just my opinion but I think amy probably needs a conclusion now. I think it’ll get harder and harder to find new ways of getting Amy naked without anyone noticing or finding out. I think it probably should have ended in the park, with Amy over the mums knee (child with balloon) being spanked with her entire school turning up. Having pictures of her taken from the expensive camera. Having her forced into the playground with the other kids. There were lots of opportunities to further embarrass or humiliate her there. Like everyone else it should only be one protagonist too. I’ve tried with two it just doesn’t work and keep to the same pace.

Having said that I’m loving the story hoping it continues at the same pace.

[mcenf]

I agree with many of the previous comments and truly appreciate all your input. Amy's story has been an intense journey, and I want to share that the ideas I've been receiving and developing in my mind are being carefully saved for a new story I’m planning to create in the medium term, with another character who will follow their own path.

As for Amy, my intention is to give her a proper conclusion, but before reaching the end, I want to lead her to a significant encounter with Samantha, as I feel their dynamic still has a lot to offer. Amy's ending could be very humiliating for her… or maybe not. I’m still unsure how to approach it.

For now, I’m going to pause Amy's story at this point while I focus on advancing Samantha’s story and delving deeper into her development. Thank you for your support and patience, and I hope you continue to enjoy these stories.