Amy Unfiltered

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I'd love to get your input on how to approach the scene between Amy and Samantha. Given that Samantha is the beautiful protagonist and will be nude, I'm considering telling this part of the story from her point of view. What are your thoughts on this?

If you want, you could briefly touch on it in Amy's story too, whether a monologue or a flashback or something.

[Rawr112]

In my view one protagonist and to be honest keep it separate. It’s cool enough that there is an implied or hinted at overlap without needing to tie the two stories together majorly.

The stories have different origins and I’m so uninterested in the Amy version but the Samantha corporate revenge story is great and thrilling.

Samantha’s continued story could continue with more of the corporate themed degradation including slowly her colleagues finding out, maybe some financial domination could come into it (whereas Amy wouldn’t have that), probably some collar and leash/servitude and the like.

Amy’s story is different altogether.

[Revengedpirate]

Just my opinion but I think amy probably needs a conclusion now. I think it’ll get harder and harder to find new ways of getting Amy naked without anyone noticing or finding out. I think it probably should have ended in the park, with Amy over the mums knee (child with balloon) being spanked with her entire school turning up. Having pictures of her taken from the expensive camera. Having her forced into the playground with the other kids. There were lots of opportunities to further embarrass or humiliate her there. Like everyone else it should only be one protagonist too. I’ve tried with two it just doesn’t work and keep to the same pace.

Having said that I’m loving the story hoping it continues at the same pace.

[mcenf]

I agree with many of the previous comments and truly appreciate all your input. Amy's story has been an intense journey, and I want to share that the ideas I've been receiving and developing in my mind are being carefully saved for a new story I’m planning to create in the medium term, with another character who will follow their own path.

As for Amy, my intention is to give her a proper conclusion, but before reaching the end, I want to lead her to a significant encounter with Samantha, as I feel their dynamic still has a lot to offer. Amy's ending could be very humiliating for her… or maybe not. I’m still unsure how to approach it.

For now, I’m going to pause Amy's story at this point while I focus on advancing Samantha’s story and delving deeper into her development. Thank you for your support and patience, and I hope you continue to enjoy these stories.

[Bucket]

I've been reading this story off and on when I've had time and it's really a lot of fun!

I was hoping that we start to see reluctant arousal from Amy, and so I was thrilled to see the "touch yourself" scene on the subway, and it seems to now be a running theme which I love. Really enjoying this story so far.

[Fixitman8267]

I'd love to get your input on how to approach the scene between Amy and Samantha. Given that Samantha is the beautiful protagonist and will be nude, I'm considering telling this part of the story from her point of view. What are your thoughts on this?

If you want, you could briefly touch on it in Amy's story too, whether a monologue or a flashback or something.

I can't say much since I haven't finished reading both stories, but what do you think about Megan handcuffing them together? One hand each and one foot each, drop them off somewhere, and force them to make their way to Samantha's home. Maybe have them followed and recorded by a drone. I would suggest a night mission so they have a better chance of not getting arrested since they could hide in the dark. It runs the risk of getting captured by gang members. In the daytime, they would be more exposed and would run the risk of someone calling the cops about the two naked women shackled together.

[Debbifan]

I can't say much since I haven't finished reading both stories, but what do you think about Megan handcuffing them together?

Thumbs down to that from me. My preference is for Amy to have the upper hand in her upcoming encounter with Samantha, even if she eventually falls back into the victim role with Megan later. But that is all your choice of course

[Revengedpirate]

how is it neither girl has been seen by anyone they know? you had sam and amy walk an entire office block twice and the worse that happens is one is caught on camera.

im loving the descriptiveness, would just like a bit more people seeing the girls. so far i think amy has even masturbated several times again in front of nobody. it just feels a bit avoiding of actually being caught

[Debbifan]

how is it neither girl has been seen by anyone they know? you had sam and amy walk an entire office block twice and the worse that happens is one is caught on camera.

im loving the descriptiveness, would just like a bit more people seeing the girls. so far i think amy has even masturbated several times again in front of nobody. it just feels a bit avoiding of actually being caught

It's called a slow build up. Sam has been seen by Valeria and Carla and Julia, who have all now become involved in the 'game'. And the guy in charge of the security cameras saw Sam in the flesh too. Megan's control of Sam ( I'm talking about the Sam story primarily here, though am conscious that this is the Amy thread ) is reliant on Sam's desperation to avoid exposure to those she knows. When / if the worst happens, it starts to signal the beginning of the end of the story ( which we know will happen at some point ) Sam has nothing left to lose, so why carry on being coerced by Megan ?