Thank you for this story! I really enjoyed every part and loved the character development. I especially loved Gloria’s comeuppance and when the older teens had to be naked in front of the younger boys. You've definitely hit upon one of my fetish fantasies, the “I was required to strip naked in front of a former charge/underling or younger person who in the past respected me or I held power over them" fetish.
I look forward to reading more stories from you!
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Thank you so much, mastergepetto! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! If you like the older girls stripped naked for the younger boys, check out my Doctor Turner story as well. Plenty of that in there.mastergepetto wrote: ↑Tue Jul 05, 2022 8:17 pm Thank you for this story! I really enjoyed every part and loved the character development. I especially loved Gloria’s comeuppance and when the older teens had to be naked in front of the younger boys. You've definitely hit upon one of my fetish fantasies, the “I was required to strip naked in front of a former charge/underling or younger person who in the past respected me or I held power over them" fetish.
I look forward to reading more stories from you!
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Superevil is here!
I have followed your posts on the asstr site.
Looking forward to seeing New Rules and Behaviour Modification here as well.
And just about any story that mind of yours thinks up. I love your depiction of ENF.
P.S. Had to create an account just to acknowledge this.
I have followed your posts on the asstr site.
Looking forward to seeing New Rules and Behaviour Modification here as well.
And just about any story that mind of yours thinks up. I love your depiction of ENF.
P.S. Had to create an account just to acknowledge this.
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Thank you so much! Happy to hear from you, and honored you made an account just to acknowledge me. Which of my stories have been your your favorite, and which one do you think I should post here next?jdworks34 wrote: ↑Wed Jul 06, 2022 6:27 pm Superevil is here!
I have followed your posts on the asstr site.
Looking forward to seeing New Rules and Behaviour Modification here as well.
And just about any story that mind of yours thinks up. I love your depiction of ENF.
P.S. Had to create an account just to acknowledge this.
Also, have you had a chance to check out my latest story, The Tickle Contest? There is a part 2 up on this site that isn't on the ASSTR site yet.
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Smartwatch gotta be my favourite. I mean, it was written in a loving, gentle way but I always wondered what would happen if someone less... restricted got hold of the watch against poor unsuspecting girls.Thank you so much! Happy to hear from you, and honored you made an account just to acknowledge me. Which of my stories have been your your favorite, and which one do you think I should post here next?
Also, have you had a chance to check out my latest story, The Tickle Contest? There is a part 2 up on this site that isn't on the ASSTR site yet.
Behaviour Mod and New Rules are excellent too. I love the universe building you do. I read the first chapter of Tickle. Will definitely read the second one now! Thank you!
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Oh, I was tempted so many times to have Matt lose his conscience, but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. If you want an idea of what it might have been like, just check out Adam in the first few chapters of The New Rules, and that will probably give you a good idea of where I would have taken it.
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I like that Matt kept his conscience. It made sense, he had what he wanted. I was wondering what would happen if someone else got a similar watch, or Matt were to lose it to someone else who... isn't going to be nice about it.Oh, I was tempted so many times to have Matt lose his conscience, but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. If you want an idea of what it might have been like, just check out Adam in the first few chapters of The New Rules, and that will probably give you a good idea of where I would have taken it.
But Adam in Rules is still pretty careful with his treatment. Since the watch has this much power, it is easy for a person to get corrupt and do their own harem or what not. That was what I was thinking might happen. But I guess that is a very usual way of taking a story, yours focuses on individuals and relationships, which is better.