Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[dsweenz71]

Let's keep it happy folks, even if the endings are not exactly realistic in the "Fantasy World".

I completely understand if Seth gets mad at his parents, Mrs. Masters, the girls, his dad's boss, anyone else, but I don't expect anything too drastic. And I believe that not even the author does.

Yeah, to each their own and all that but I think any sort of violent or super depressing ending like that wouldn't be at all appropriate and would ruin the entire story.

So a high degree of suspension of disbelief is required anyway for the present story and many other "non-vanilla" sex stories.

Agreed, thank you all. I'm all for suggestions to make it somewhat more realistic (For example, reminding me that someone wouldn't always willingly participate in these humiliations has strengthened the story, I think. It's for these reasons that I've introduced the medications that make Seth more willing... it was going to be this or additional blackmail, and 'magical sex-enhancing medications' felt more creative for this story), but the ending is already planned and won't be changing drastically. I have also reiterated a number of times that I plan for the story to be relatively upbeat throughout, despite scenarios becoming increasingly humiliating and that it could be dark if you really think about what is occurring. However, I write in a similar style to many on this site which requires a high suspension of disbelief, which Lefanto described excellently as a key part of many of these stories. Still, I do respect that this style is not for everyone, and there might be darker and more realistic stories out there (that include death, or a humiliating character getting violent revenge on someone for example). It's just not what I personally write, or even how I think when I'm writing.

Not sure why it keeps being brought up as a possibility.

I do think that part of it is my willingness for suggestions, as well as a welcoming of ongoing commentary/engagement with readers. This is honestly the longest I've ever written a story, and I think that is because of the amazing feedback I am getting and encouragement to continue/watching people's theories about what is coming up! But... I have reiterated a number of times that it won't go that way. So while it does keep coming up in comments, readers can rest assured that it is not doing anything to change the outcome of the story.

[lugro]

Another great chapter! hahaha

We can see things escalating and Seth becoming more and more exposed throughout the day.

And a website where everything that happens to him can be seen? It looks like his humiliation will be perpetuated online haha I certainly didn't expect that.

I can't wait to see what happens the rest of the day, although I have an idea or two about it.

And I'm also looking forward to Thursday... It's the day of the grand final, right? The game will definitely be memorable haha

Anyway, a lot will happen between now and then.

[dsweenz71]

And I'm also looking forward to Thursday... It's the day of the grand final, right? The game will definitely be memorable haha
Anyway, a lot will happen between now and then.

Great memory, and yes! We still have the rest of PJ day, two NAKED meetings with the nurses, a pep rally, a beach day, and a community day to get through. This is going to be a very long week for Seth, and a bit of a wait for that championship game you want to see But I'll try to make it worth the wait!

[lugro]

I'll try to make it worth the wait!

Oh I can bet on that! You always do!

[Lefanto]

Really interesting chapter! (Since I prefer penile over anal stimulation, I am happy that it was the cock ring that did the trick, but this is just my personal taste.)

Maybe the teachers should let Seth's teachers in on it?

(I also wonder if it would be appropriate for Mrs. Masters to inform Sara at this point so that she knows what's going on, whether Sara gets directly involved or not. Maybe it would be too much if Sara would participate, but maybe she could just watch and smile.)

[Trundle]

A fantastic extra long chapter! What a treat!

Loved the opening scene with Mrs Masters and Justin. I think one of the reasons I love her character so much because she's used so sparingly. When you see she's in the chapter you know something important is going to happen or something big plot related will happen. I used to think I'd love to see her more in the story, perhaps more "hands on" so to speak with Seth but now I think this is to her advantage. It's like she's an ominous presence throughout, even when she isn't there. She doesn't get her hands dirty, figuratively and literally.

I was surprised Seth managed as long as he did to be honest, making it all the way to the start of his 2nd class before exploding. This again feels like a new low for Seth, even if because of the drugs he's on it's not really registering for him. For his bare ass to be exposed and him to openly ejaculate in front of his class and teacher is a new type of outrageousness. With all the people filming it too, it's now only a matter of time until Sara finds out. If she didn't want to be seen with Seth when he had an erection, how one earth will she react so seeing videos and pics of him cumming in class.

I'm guessing that the blue pills will ensure he stays erect for the rest of the day and the cock ring will remain, so hopefully this isn't the last of his forced ejaculations for the day. I also have the feeling the butt flap is only the first part of his outfit to be taken away from him.

I'd love to know what Mrs Masters plans for Sara, just guessing but maybe she'll try to convince Sara that it's all Seths fault and she should join in with his humiliation to preserve her reputation?

Cannot wait for more.

[dsweenz71]

With all the people filming it too, it's now only a matter of time until Sara finds out.

We can only hold her off so long... it certainly seems like the time is coming for her to find out! Thanks for the feedback as always. There is definitely still some PJ day to come

[dsweenz71]

Really interesting chapter! (Since I prefer penile over anal stimulation, I am happy that it was the cock ring that did the trick, but this is just my personal taste.)

It's true that I have been including a mixture, but I'm glad this one made you happy

Maybe the teachers should let Seth's teachers in on it?

We do have Coach in on it. I have at least one more planned too. But this particular one had to order Seth to get out, so he'd leave without his backpack. Everything for a reason

[Lefanto]

Loved the opening scene with Mrs Masters and Justin. I think one of the reasons I love her character so much because she's used so sparingly.

Yes. At the same time, I hope that at some point or another, we will learn more about what Mrs. Masters thinks and feels. For example, does she enjoy the videos of Seth in sexual situations?

I'd love to know what Mrs Masters plans for Sara, just guessing but maybe she'll try to convince Sara that it's all Seths fault and she should join in with his humiliation to preserve her reputation?

I personally think that, if Sara gets directly involved at all, the result should not be a sad or depressed Seth, but just a more embarrassed Seth, if you know what I mean. (An alternative would be that she just learns about the project and observes with some fun what's happening.) But again, this is just what I would find appropriate and what's going to happen remains the author's choice.

[imanewb]

I find it disturbing that a reader of these stories would be "Perfectly Happy" if a character slashes his wrists to end a story.
That is multiple times it was suggested that a violent self-destruction is a reasonable outcome to the plot, which is probably only half way
through.

In their previous msg about this story, a is placed next to the word "Bloodbath" suggesting being happy if the family got killed?

I guess this is one of the problems of communicating in a purely text based medium.

In a further attempt to provide clarity...

'bloodbath' - an attempt at a one word summary for 'severely negative / dark' (but not necessarily fatal nor, indeed, actually bloody) response, used purely to indicate the sort of thing the author has said he's not planning as context for the thought/suggestion (whatever you want to call it) that, from memory, went something along the lines of 'breakdown of the family unit when, devastated by the ultimate betrayal*, Seth disowns them/runs away with or without a gf'.

*perception being reality for some/most/all people - delete as appropriate. What's that saying about betrayal from those we love cutting the deepest?

the ':P' was intended to indicate 'self deprecating recognition/acceptance of prior conversation and acceptance of the author's stance', nothing more.

'Perfectly Happy' - that, IF the author had elected to end that darkly (the above notwithstanding) then it would fit with the plot to date, and would be an entirely believable response. NOT that I'd be happy that THIS character ended up in prison, died, whatever - though i'm not to pretend that's true in ALL fiction (here, books, tv, etc).

...not advocating for... Whilst I believe something similar would have been a credible response from the character, the author is not, and should not be constrained to anything along those lines, and I an NOT suggesting he should be.

Edit to add: As an aside, why do you find it disturbing that a character treated 'badly' in a story would react negatively - with the strength of reaction being related (tho not necessarily proportionate to) the provocation faced - seems perfectly natural to me and, if the number of 'high school revenge' type books/films out there are anything to go by, to vast numbers of others too.

So a high degree of suspension of disbelief is required anyway for the present story and many other "non-vanilla" sex stories. And at least I rather suspend my disbelief for a story that is erotic and ends in an erotic way than for one which ends in desperation, blood and death. The former type is much more enjoyable, at least for me. And if this should mean that I have to suspend my disbelief even a little more, then so be it!

For this reason, I even welcome the involvement of Seth's parents. It adds to Seth's embarrassing and helpless situation, but at the same time, it also means that (probably) nothing "really" bad will happen to Seth.

(Again, this are just my personal thoughts and tastes, and others may feel differently. And of course it's up to the author how he wants things to develop.)

As I think should be clear from previous/foregoing I'm not averse to the parents being 'in the know'.

And I absolutely agree vis author's choice, personal thoughts and tastes, SoD, etc.

Again, to clarify, I'm not saying I'd enjoy, say, Seth going to prison (getting caught en route to the HS to enact revenge), committing suicide, or whatever. Nor am I advocating same - I'm merely acknowledging that as SoD can stretch only so far (individually subjective) and, for me, some kind of negative response (per the run away example given above) would GREATLY assist therein.

edit to add: Having subsequently read the latest (amusing) chapter - a further illustration of a SoD maintaining, from my perspective, ending springs to mind: The 'happy sad' - the gf finds out (as is apparently planned) and is appalled on his behalf, witnessing people able to do 'anything' to/with him (with which he 'happily' complies under the influence of drugs), stands by him and they 'run off into the sunset' together - the happy(ish) to try and put his life back together. With or without: waiting for graduation, 'laying into' his parents on his behalf 'how could you do this to him??', problems following them, etc, etc (the 'sad').

NB for all I know that may be the kind of ending sweenz already has planed out, or not... doesn't matter either way... We'll all find out soon enough and go from there.