Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[Lefanto]

Really interesting chapter! (Since I prefer penile over anal stimulation, I am happy that it was the cock ring that did the trick, but this is just my personal taste.)

Maybe the teachers should let Seth's teachers in on it?

(I also wonder if it would be appropriate for Mrs. Masters to inform Sara at this point so that she knows what's going on, whether Sara gets directly involved or not. Maybe it would be too much if Sara would participate, but maybe she could just watch and smile.)

[Trundle]

A fantastic extra long chapter! What a treat!

Loved the opening scene with Mrs Masters and Justin. I think one of the reasons I love her character so much because she's used so sparingly. When you see she's in the chapter you know something important is going to happen or something big plot related will happen. I used to think I'd love to see her more in the story, perhaps more "hands on" so to speak with Seth but now I think this is to her advantage. It's like she's an ominous presence throughout, even when she isn't there. She doesn't get her hands dirty, figuratively and literally.

I was surprised Seth managed as long as he did to be honest, making it all the way to the start of his 2nd class before exploding. This again feels like a new low for Seth, even if because of the drugs he's on it's not really registering for him. For his bare ass to be exposed and him to openly ejaculate in front of his class and teacher is a new type of outrageousness. With all the people filming it too, it's now only a matter of time until Sara finds out. If she didn't want to be seen with Seth when he had an erection, how one earth will she react so seeing videos and pics of him cumming in class.

I'm guessing that the blue pills will ensure he stays erect for the rest of the day and the cock ring will remain, so hopefully this isn't the last of his forced ejaculations for the day. I also have the feeling the butt flap is only the first part of his outfit to be taken away from him.

I'd love to know what Mrs Masters plans for Sara, just guessing but maybe she'll try to convince Sara that it's all Seths fault and she should join in with his humiliation to preserve her reputation?

Cannot wait for more.

[dsweenz71]

With all the people filming it too, it's now only a matter of time until Sara finds out.

We can only hold her off so long... it certainly seems like the time is coming for her to find out! Thanks for the feedback as always. There is definitely still some PJ day to come

[dsweenz71]

Really interesting chapter! (Since I prefer penile over anal stimulation, I am happy that it was the cock ring that did the trick, but this is just my personal taste.)

It's true that I have been including a mixture, but I'm glad this one made you happy

Maybe the teachers should let Seth's teachers in on it?

We do have Coach in on it. I have at least one more planned too. But this particular one had to order Seth to get out, so he'd leave without his backpack. Everything for a reason

[Lefanto]

Loved the opening scene with Mrs Masters and Justin. I think one of the reasons I love her character so much because she's used so sparingly.

Yes. At the same time, I hope that at some point or another, we will learn more about what Mrs. Masters thinks and feels. For example, does she enjoy the videos of Seth in sexual situations?

I'd love to know what Mrs Masters plans for Sara, just guessing but maybe she'll try to convince Sara that it's all Seths fault and she should join in with his humiliation to preserve her reputation?

I personally think that, if Sara gets directly involved at all, the result should not be a sad or depressed Seth, but just a more embarrassed Seth, if you know what I mean. (An alternative would be that she just learns about the project and observes with some fun what's happening.) But again, this is just what I would find appropriate and what's going to happen remains the author's choice.

[imanewb]

I find it disturbing that a reader of these stories would be "Perfectly Happy" if a character slashes his wrists to end a story.
That is multiple times it was suggested that a violent self-destruction is a reasonable outcome to the plot, which is probably only half way
through.

In their previous msg about this story, a is placed next to the word "Bloodbath" suggesting being happy if the family got killed?

I guess this is one of the problems of communicating in a purely text based medium.

In a further attempt to provide clarity...

'bloodbath' - an attempt at a one word summary for 'severely negative / dark' (but not necessarily fatal nor, indeed, actually bloody) response, used purely to indicate the sort of thing the author has said he's not planning as context for the thought/suggestion (whatever you want to call it) that, from memory, went something along the lines of 'breakdown of the family unit when, devastated by the ultimate betrayal*, Seth disowns them/runs away with or without a gf'.

*perception being reality for some/most/all people - delete as appropriate. What's that saying about betrayal from those we love cutting the deepest?

the ':P' was intended to indicate 'self deprecating recognition/acceptance of prior conversation and acceptance of the author's stance', nothing more.

'Perfectly Happy' - that, IF the author had elected to end that darkly (the above notwithstanding) then it would fit with the plot to date, and would be an entirely believable response. NOT that I'd be happy that THIS character ended up in prison, died, whatever - though i'm not to pretend that's true in ALL fiction (here, books, tv, etc).

...not advocating for... Whilst I believe something similar would have been a credible response from the character, the author is not, and should not be constrained to anything along those lines, and I an NOT suggesting he should be.

Edit to add: As an aside, why do you find it disturbing that a character treated 'badly' in a story would react negatively - with the strength of reaction being related (tho not necessarily proportionate to) the provocation faced - seems perfectly natural to me and, if the number of 'high school revenge' type books/films out there are anything to go by, to vast numbers of others too.

So a high degree of suspension of disbelief is required anyway for the present story and many other "non-vanilla" sex stories. And at least I rather suspend my disbelief for a story that is erotic and ends in an erotic way than for one which ends in desperation, blood and death. The former type is much more enjoyable, at least for me. And if this should mean that I have to suspend my disbelief even a little more, then so be it!

For this reason, I even welcome the involvement of Seth's parents. It adds to Seth's embarrassing and helpless situation, but at the same time, it also means that (probably) nothing "really" bad will happen to Seth.

(Again, this are just my personal thoughts and tastes, and others may feel differently. And of course it's up to the author how he wants things to develop.)

As I think should be clear from previous/foregoing I'm not averse to the parents being 'in the know'.

And I absolutely agree vis author's choice, personal thoughts and tastes, SoD, etc.

Again, to clarify, I'm not saying I'd enjoy, say, Seth going to prison (getting caught en route to the HS to enact revenge), committing suicide, or whatever. Nor am I advocating same - I'm merely acknowledging that as SoD can stretch only so far (individually subjective) and, for me, some kind of negative response (per the run away example given above) would GREATLY assist therein.

edit to add: Having subsequently read the latest (amusing) chapter - a further illustration of a SoD maintaining, from my perspective, ending springs to mind: The 'happy sad' - the gf finds out (as is apparently planned) and is appalled on his behalf, witnessing people able to do 'anything' to/with him (with which he 'happily' complies under the influence of drugs), stands by him and they 'run off into the sunset' together - the happy(ish) to try and put his life back together. With or without: waiting for graduation, 'laying into' his parents on his behalf 'how could you do this to him??', problems following them, etc, etc (the 'sad').

NB for all I know that may be the kind of ending sweenz already has planed out, or not... doesn't matter either way... We'll all find out soon enough and go from there.

[Lefanto]

Edit to add: As an aside, why do you find it disturbing that a character treated 'badly' in a story would react negatively - with the strength of reaction being related (tho not necessarily proportionate to) the provocation faced - seems perfectly natural to me and, if the number of 'high school revenge' type books/films out there are anything to go by, to vast numbers of others too.

Before I reply, let me say hat I don't judge anyone for their preferences. Some people like "dark" erotic fiction, or at least are not bothered by it, and I'm totally fine with that. Fiction is fiction and real life is real life.

Yet, for some folks, too much "darkness" is a big turn-off within the context of an erotic story; it might even ruin the whole plot for them. This, by the way, may not only apply to written stories, but also to movies and clips. (At the same time, some people who would object to blood or deep despair in an erotic novel or movie, might not mind when, say, a thriller turns very dark.)

Furthermore, the overall theme of this story is not, in my opinion, about someone who feels extremely violated and reacts accordingly; it's more about how a young male experiences some intense, but ultimately "playful" humiliation. Those involved (including Seth himself) don't seem to regard what's happening as brutal abuse. Things seem to be more of some kind of erotic game, albeit an extremely mischievous one. If not, it would also be strange that so many people who do not seem to be abysmally malicious join in.

It seems that Seth is quite accepting of his fate and in some special way even gets a certain thrill or pleasure out from it. Otherwise, he would have reacted much more extremely by now, getting totally depressed or upset. He would not enjoy anything at all but just feel profoundly distressed, having nightmares and so on.
For this reason, if Seth were to react extremely negatively now or later, this would just not fit the story in my opinion.

Again, this is just my point of view, and everybody is entitled to disagree, and the author has the last word anyway. I just want to explain why, in my personal opinion, a "really" dark ending would neither be desirable nor fit the story as it has developed so far.

[dsweenz71]

For this reason, if Seth were to react extremely negatively now or later, this would just not fit the story in my opinion.

That's a great point. I have to agree that I don't feel like it would fit in this story, or with Seth's character, unless the rest of the chapters were completely rewritten. Regardless, the story will not take this path anyway

I do love the occasional dark suspense! But just to read. That's someone else's niche to write.

[imanewb]

Well that's an hour i won't get back.... tap out a reply (fat fungers and all) on this silly touchscreen, press submit and find out i've been logged out.... losing the entire post. that's kinda annoying.

ling version cery, very short, with all the typis in place ...

good to discuss different perceptions, and the rationale behind. as mentioned earlier (and now by sweenz agaiin) entirely moot, as his pergoatice, he has an ending in mind which'll either 'work', or not dependent on how the reader's perceived the story. which isn't a problem in any way, shape or form.

can't please everyone, and only a fool woukd try.

Worst xase? someone goes away feeling a little disappointed atthecway thecstory ended after an enjoyable ride

Edit to grumble at touch screen... I can understand the odd k for an l, etc, but the space bar's 'huge' how do i keep getting so many cs and vs instead of a space ffs?

[Lefanto]

Well that's an hour i won't get back.... tap out a reply (fat fungers and all) on this silly touchscreen, press submit and find out i've been logged out.... losing the entire post. that's kinda annoying.

Yes, it is - it seems you get logged out automatically after a while. I always copy my reply at least to the clipboard before I post it, so it is at least temporally saved. In some cases, if one has not done that, pressing the back button might help though.