Re: The Last Straw (new 10/12)
Posted: Fri Oct 18, 2024 6:37 pm
I'm loving this story! The way whole new worlds of potential humiliation for Mary keep opening up is great. The surprise of Frank giving Frankie authority over Mary and even encouragement to 'make her pay for every stitch; to 'teach her a lesson' about her real position in life... brilliant!
Especially since now we know Frank's views on women, there's much potential for Mary's situation, also Bea's and maybe even Patricia, to develop more surprises. Instead of Mary getting some clothes, maybe the total of 'clothes on girls' might go further South, once Frank sees some improvement in Mary's attitude.
But there's so much more! If the cowgirl show pans out well, and Frankie suddenly has significant cash, what more can he add to the mix?
My vote would be for Mary having to accept some previously undreamt of indignities. For instance having to spend most of her time with a couple of really big, active ben-wa balls inserted. Or a remote controlled vibrating egg. Stimulating clitoral hood piercing? Completely shaved? Perhaps as something appropriate for a girl who would shave her pubes in a heart shape, and then be discovered getting aroused by her exposure.
With still no clothes of course.
Meanwhile there's the ticking time bomb of Frankie's lack of privacy as the days pass. I've no idea where neverdoubted intends to take that, but I hope it goes far. It's a great counter-tension, with Frankie gaining more and more erotic power over Mary (and... ?) but still unable to achieve any relief himself.
Especially since now we know Frank's views on women, there's much potential for Mary's situation, also Bea's and maybe even Patricia, to develop more surprises. Instead of Mary getting some clothes, maybe the total of 'clothes on girls' might go further South, once Frank sees some improvement in Mary's attitude.
But there's so much more! If the cowgirl show pans out well, and Frankie suddenly has significant cash, what more can he add to the mix?
My vote would be for Mary having to accept some previously undreamt of indignities. For instance having to spend most of her time with a couple of really big, active ben-wa balls inserted. Or a remote controlled vibrating egg. Stimulating clitoral hood piercing? Completely shaved? Perhaps as something appropriate for a girl who would shave her pubes in a heart shape, and then be discovered getting aroused by her exposure.
With still no clothes of course.
Meanwhile there's the ticking time bomb of Frankie's lack of privacy as the days pass. I've no idea where neverdoubted intends to take that, but I hope it goes far. It's a great counter-tension, with Frankie gaining more and more erotic power over Mary (and... ?) but still unable to achieve any relief himself.
no spoilers! but definitely more surprises in store! if only there were enough interest...