The Last Straw (new 10/12)

[SensoryOverlord]

I'm loving this story! The way whole new worlds of potential humiliation for Mary keep opening up is great. The surprise of Frank giving Frankie authority over Mary and even encouragement to 'make her pay for every stitch; to 'teach her a lesson' about her real position in life... brilliant!

Especially since now we know Frank's views on women, there's much potential for Mary's situation, also Bea's and maybe even Patricia, to develop more surprises. Instead of Mary getting some clothes, maybe the total of 'clothes on girls' might go further South, once Frank sees some improvement in Mary's attitude.

But there's so much more! If the cowgirl show pans out well, and Frankie suddenly has significant cash, what more can he add to the mix?
My vote would be for Mary having to accept some previously undreamt of indignities. For instance having to spend most of her time with a couple of really big, active ben-wa balls inserted. Or a remote controlled vibrating egg. Stimulating clitoral hood piercing? Completely shaved? Perhaps as something appropriate for a girl who would shave her pubes in a heart shape, and then be discovered getting aroused by her exposure.

With still no clothes of course.

Meanwhile there's the ticking time bomb of Frankie's lack of privacy as the days pass. I've no idea where neverdoubted intends to take that, but I hope it goes far. It's a great counter-tension, with Frankie gaining more and more erotic power over Mary (and... ?) but still unable to achieve any relief himself.

[neverdoubted]

I'm loving this story! The way whole new worlds of potential humiliation for Mary keep opening up is great. The surprise of Frank giving Frankie authority over Mary and even encouragement to 'make her pay for every stitch; to 'teach her a lesson' about her real position in life... brilliant!

Especially since now we know Frank's views on women, there's much potential for Mary's situation, also Bea's and maybe even Patricia, to develop more surprises. Instead of Mary getting some clothes, maybe the total of 'clothes on girls' might go further South, once Frank sees some improvement in Mary's attitude.

But there's so much more! If the cowgirl show pans out well, and Frankie suddenly has significant cash, what more can he add to the mix?
My vote would be for Mary having to accept some previously undreamt of indignities. For instance having to spend most of her time with a couple of really big, active ben-wa balls inserted. Or a remote controlled vibrating egg. Stimulating clitoral hood piercing? Completely shaved? Perhaps as something appropriate for a girl who would shave her pubes in a heart shape, and then be discovered getting aroused by her exposure.

With still no clothes of course.

Meanwhile there's the ticking time bomb of Frankie's lack of privacy as the days pass. I've no idea where neverdoubted intends to take that, but I hope it goes far. It's a great counter-tension, with Frankie gaining more and more erotic power over Mary (and... ?) but still unable to achieve any relief himself.

Day three is definitely a game changer and I'm glad to see a reader picking up on it. It only gets more embarrassing from here on out. But let's not get carried away. I'm pretty sure remote controlled vibrating eggs didn't exist in the seventies.

And you bring up a good point about Frank's perspective. If he sees Mary's behavior miraculously improving despite her lack of clothes (or because of it?) what would stop him from converting her temporary punishment into a permanent attitude adjustment solution?

(and... ?)

no spoilers! but definitely more surprises in store! if only there were enough interest...

[Skylar21]

no spoilers! but definitely more surprises in store! if only there were enough interest...

Oh I assure you, there's enough interest!

[jojo12026]

Lots of interest to see what befalls Mary next...

[Bucket]

if only there were enough interest...

I can guarantee you that there is an abundance of interest. No doubt about it.

[Themarble]

Lot of interest here!!!

[Freesub]

Don't think it's possible NOT to have interest for this?

[perseus]

I have plenty of interest! I'm also holding out hope for more Dare Me as well!

[neverdoubted]

I have plenty of interest! I'm also holding out hope for more Dare Me as well!

Just curious…if you could only pick one to get updates in November?

[mcenf]

I am very interested in new chapters of this story.