Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[Trundle]

Oh wow.

This felt like a whole new level of humiliation for Seth, this is the new rock bottom for him I'd say, I'll be amazed to see how things could get worse for the boy from here, though I've no doubt you'll manage it

Male on male sexual activity isn't my thing generally but I thought this was really well done because it was more about the humiliation of it than any kind of lust or sexual desire. Which sounds odd to say when it ends with a boy fingering another boy to orgasm but you know what I mean The fact it was clear neither Seth or Rowan wanted this to happen, that the girls and Mrs Masters had forced them to do it made it very enjoyable. I think anything more than cupping his balls or checking his prostate would be another thing entirely, not sure I want to see anything more sexual than that if it's boy on boy but this was fine.

Fascinated to see where this leaves Seth now, totally and utterly humiliated in front of his peers and friends. How angry is he at Rowan for convincing him to tell Coach, that only made things worse. How ashamed is he? Does he have to quit the basketball team now because he can't face them again, do the team shun him and think he's gay because he shot all over himself in front of them? Is the coach now done? Many questions.

More teases about Mrs Bradbury, more teases that maybe even Mrs Masters is only following orders. Who is ultimately behind all this? The story just gets better and better, I think it's fantastic to read a brilliant chapter and then there's still teases and hints of more fun yet to come. I'm still hoping for some sort of event where Seth has to meet with Mrs Masters and the girls out of school. So he can be humiliated in front of a different group of people.

So Seth now has to go and shower off, the blue pills should mean even though hes ejaculated all over himself he will still be rock hard, is he able to shower in peace or will there be more trouble today? I so can't wait! Seth's degradation is thrilling to read.

[imanewb]

Male on male sexual activity isn't my thing generally but I thought this was really well done because it was more about the humiliation of it than any kind of lust or sexual desire. Which sounds odd to say when it ends with a boy fingering another boy to orgasm but you know what I mean The fact it was clear neither Seth or Rowan wanted this to happen, that the girls and Mrs Masters had forced them to do it made it very enjoyable. I think anything more than cupping his balls or checking his prostate would be another thing entirely, not sure I want to see anything more sexual than that if it's boy on boy but this was fine.

Agreed all round. It was well written, and focussed sufficiently on the humiliation aspect to 'look past' the mechanism by which it was achieved, if so inclined, to whit the story remains enjoyable... and, similarly, wouldn't want to see anything 'stronger' (eg getting another student to rape him) but don't see how the administration could 'legitimately*' coerce such student involvement (male on male, or otherwise)

*legitimately whilst remaining internally consistent.

Fascinated to see where this leaves Seth now, totally and utterly humiliated in front of his peers and friends. How angry is he at Rowan for convincing him to tell Coach, that only made things worse. How ashamed is he? Does he have to quit the basketball team now because he can't face them again, do the team shun him and think he's gay because he shot all over himself in front of them? Is the coach now done? Many questions.

I was just discussing this a few moments ago... as mentioned earlier, I would have expected Seth to rage quit the team at the end of the previous chapter... well attempt to, for the purposes of the story doing so wouldn't have gone well (naturally)... now, however, how can he have any choice but be fuming mad at everyone/thing? Humiliated, embarrassed and very, very angry...

Don't know about anyone else but it's giving off a distinct 'research study' vibe to me... funding for the 'assistants', mandates from above, etc (which would at least give some plausibility to the actions of the school, etc - however unethical it would be in the real world, it's something we could believe in a fictional setting)... One that's being repeated in other schools (or I'm reading too much into comments like '...and seth is in the second one.' (phase that is).

Which might give a plausible mechanism for taking humiliation 'on the road' so to speak.

Assuming Seth lasts that long... angry people make rash decisions... e.g. masters wants to control who finds out when does she (from memory, coach told him something like that)... angry seth decides fuck her, why wait, things are getting worse, more and more people are finding out anyway, and so walks out of a scene trying to feel a little in control, snapping at gawkers 'take a picture, it'll last longer' (and obviously regretting it later)

Up to, and including, more 'violent' responses (which could all be foiled/backfire spectacularly)... e.g. the next time he's forced to wank for an audience, say fuck it, 'hate fuck right at them' (aim and try and fire over them- at which point the g/f walks in and sees his cum dripping off whomever), or turns up with a knife planning revenge, get arrested, stripped, searched, locked up, abused in the cells.... or, gets blind drunk trying to cope with stress, with consequences at home & school, and so on.

We did have a laugh about the research project notion... And wondered how it might end... 8 weeks end (if he can get that far) with the big reveal (to seth), a 'thanks for participating, here's a cheque for $$$$' speech, which seth blows on gas, guns and ammo and takes as much of the school down with him as possible in a blaze. or just goes after coach & masters (so far). or just kills himself.

[Trundle]

Haha as much as I'm loving his humiliation I don't think I'd like an ending quite as dark as that for this story haha. Any kind of violence would probably be a bit too much for my tastes, or any serious violence or death anyway. I don't think that's where the story is going to be fair but it's a fair thing to speculate about anyway.

I could see Seth quitting the basketball team in anger/shame definitely but what could be worse would be if they turn their back on him and think he's perverted/weak and so that's why he has to quit the team. He is basically forced into doing it. They had his back with going along with his lie about where he was to Sara so it would hurt to lose them as friends. Maybe that's one of the plans of Mrs. Masters? To isolate him and make him feel alone with nowhere to turn. He can't tell anymore teachers now, his brother is already in on it, he's lost his basketball friends. There's only his GF and parents left I suppose and he won't want to tell him out of pride.

If it's some kind of behavioural research experiment being done with Seth as the chosen subject it does open things up to take him out on the road yeah. Some kind of private function hosted by Mr Masters where we meet Mrs Bradbury?

I hope it's all revealed bit by bit though, because it's fun to guess what will happen.

[dsweenz71]

Male on male sexual activity isn't my thing generally but I thought this was really well done because it was more about the humiliation of it than any kind of lust or sexual desire.

I don't anticipate doing too much male on male, so don't worry. It just felt inevitable in this chapter since there was a whole audience of his peers and they were all males. It's yet another thing to hold over Seth now too, so he won't feel compelled to keep trying to seek help from others. I doubt he (or Rowan) want this to get out to more than the basketball team.

I would have expected Seth to rage quit the team at the end of the previous chapter

The thing about Seth and his team is that they've worked really hard to qualify for the semifinals. They have a lot of respect for their coach and quitting the team with only a few weeks left is hardly on his mind. He's wanted to quit the Nurse's club since it started, because he isn't bought into it, but sports is another matter. Without basketball or wrestling, Seth would feel like a nobody!

Any kind of violence would probably be a bit too much for my tastes, or any serious violence or death anyway.

Definitely not planning to get very dark in terms of Seth's reaction, don't worry. His humiliations might get a bit more intense, but I still have Seth alive in the ending I'm envisioning, and no school shootings will have taken place! If this was a hyper realistic story, any teen might be considering those things after what they've been through, but as my last author's note shared, this is more of a sexual fantasy than a hyper realistic story. Still, I never mind readers speculating

[imanewb]

Haha as much as I'm loving his humiliation I don't think I'd like an ending quite as dark as that for this story haha. Any kind of violence would probably be a bit too much for my tastes, or any serious violence or death anyway. I don't think that's where the story is going to be fair but it's a fair thing to speculate about anyway.

Agree, the humiliation was good. Can't say I'd enjoy serious violence or death as part of the main story, hell the sexual assault dressed up as a demonstration was probably pushing my limits*

Definitely not planning to get very dark in terms of Seth's reaction, don't worry. His humiliations might get a bit more intense, but I still have Seth alive in the ending I'm envisioning, and no school shootings will have taken place! If this was a hyper realistic story, any teen might be considering those things after what they've been through, but as my last author's note shared, this is more of a sexual fantasy than a hyper realistic story. Still, I never mind readers speculating

For your amusement, it was my 80 year old mother who came up with the darkest ending when I was mentioned this (in precis) while we were discussing the strengths and weaknesses of different writers with respect to world building (consistency, believability, etc, etc) - can't remember her exact words, but it was something like, "American isn't he, why doesn't he just shoot the fuckers or top himself". Patience of a saint my mum... I think she maybe watches too much TV

But, I can't say I really care if it ends very darkly either - that'd certainly be more believable, fantasy or not, than 'and he just moved on, forget all about it and lived happily ever after', for example, and wouldn't spoil the ride (so to speak) in getting to that point either.

*speaking of which, how many people on a basketball team? should think word's going to spread like wildfire - 'you won't believe what happened in gym today...'

[dsweenz71]

I can't say I really care if it ends very darkly - that'd certainly be more believable than 'and he just moved on, forget all about it and lived happily ever after'

It won't be a happily ever after, but may be up to the reader to determine in their own mind. The great thing about this story (unlike any of my previous ones) is that I know exactly how it is going to end, right down to likely the last sentence. Hell, I could probably write the final chapter right now, even though some of the humiliations along the way are improvised.

how many people on a basketball team?

I envision about 12, though thankfully for Seth they're unlikely to tell too many people. That would mean admitting they felt up his balls, and most of them won't want their girlfriends to know. Don't worry though - lots of other humiliations are coming that won't be able to remain so secret

[TeenFan]

Wow, the post chapter commentary is longer than the chapter.

This opens up a whole new, mostly previously unexplored, territory in the stripping and humiliating concept. When a boy is forced to be
touched by another boy, with girls watching and calling the shots. Won't make everybody happy, but sometimes a writer (or filmmaker)
must create their grand vision of a story. The movies that often win the awards are the ones that are daring and challenge peoples perceptions
of what is acceptable in storytelling.

I think a great example of this is Tarantino's "Pulp Fiction" movie. There is a difficult to watch scene where Bruce Willis and Ving Rhames are
being treated horribly by a group of sadistic perverts. This movie was nominated for Best Picture.

Hopefully nobody is turned off from a great story because one chapter out of nineteen has some content that is different.
I've combined both boys and girls touching a guy in a story before. My most successful early story here "Trapped by Tornado" has a boy
getting jerked off with two girls and two boys working it together as a team. I'm all for experimenting and exploring new ways to do these
types of stories.

[imanewb]

Wow, the post chapter commentary is longer than the chapter.

Gotta dissect every little facet while we're waiting for the next installment... hopefully the author takes it in the spirit in which it's intended (fortunately dsweenz71 does!)

[dsweenz71]

Wow, the post chapter commentary is longer than the chapter.

Partially my fault. I tend to reply as often as I can and this clogs up the comment section. I don't mind in the slightest - that's why I make sure to have a table of contents, and hot links to the next chapter, so the readers of the future can feel free to skip the commentary.

Hopefully nobody is turned off from a great story because one chapter out of nineteen has some content that is different.

If it does, that's okay too. I never promised my story would be for everyone. Up until this story, I'd never even written a CFNM story, they were all ENM with straight guys' male peers being the ones to witness humiliation. So it's inevitable to have that theme blend in. I'll try to incorporate some more girls going forward, but this story is definitely a blend of both.

[dsweenz71]

Also wanted to note new working cover art made with AI on page 1. Feel free to check it out. If someone else makes something even better, I'll consider it