Trundle wrote: Sat Mar 29, 2025 1:15 am
I think he has a top on unless I'm mistaken?
I could definitely see Maggie wanting to get Alex completely naked though, not even giving him a t shirt to cover up with
Hmmmm. Unless I've lost track of some parts of my own story at this point, he hasn't had a shirt on since chapter 3! Maggie only gave him a pair of shorts! Now you guys have me second guessing, did I give him a shirt at some point since then? lol
Haha oh that's much better then, silly me!
So all he has on is the flimsy underwear? Perfect!
Really hoping for a continuation of this.
Younger sisters being in control has been a big fetish of mine for a while (not sure if you can tell)
And after the reworking of Maggie’s character, she’s become a favorite of mine!
With the setting of a girlscout meeting, this is a perfect set up!
No worries, I already have a little something something in the works! I put it on ice for a bit, so I didn't get lost in the sauce and make the slow burn go a bit too fast haha.
I can see what I can do about getting it done and out soon. Glad to see how many people like my story so far :p
No rush!
Anticipation for a new chapter of a story we fall in love with is part of the journey here.
I think we ALL want to be as prolific as possible, but hold ourselves to a certain quality.
I absolutely hate my own writing, but I love it when a great story like this gets regular updates.
You have a perfect recipe, and so far, you’ve been serving up deliciousness.
I see no reason you could disappoint, unless you try and subvert expectations for some reason.
That’s where most authors lose it.
You know what your audience wants, it’s up to you to deliver on expectations in a way that makes YOU happy!
I feel weird whenever I offer this bit of advice, as I generally hate everything I write.
But when you find a story that you can easily put yourself into…
That’s magic.
You’re doing a great job!
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