Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 12 -18 Feb)

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PART 10: CLOSE QUARTERS, CLOSE EXAMINATION

Ellie felt as if Cameron had let her down somehow. It was silly of her, she chastised herself. He couldn’t help what he looked like. Now she understood why he had been so reluctant to let her see him. But even though she had expected more, this was still her boy, her Cameron, and that made the sight of his private parts something she would treasure. So what if he was a little small and undeveloped down there? Ellie was not so shallow as all that. She still felt affection for the boy, and he WAS cute in his birthday suit. She simply had to… adjust to this knew knowledge about him.

As we have become used too, another great piece of suspenseful fantasy writing. I appreciate that Ellie has feelings for Cameron despite his lack of development. She is looking at the bigger picture which is nice yet still enjoying Cameron’s complete exposure. This in depth treatment of her personality adds greatly to the depth of her character. Again well done!

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SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.

I remember reading Jack and Cam are of same size when they have a boner and Ellie thought Jacks boner was decent sized. If only Cam can get a boner the girls might change their opinion.

THIS!
This is what I’m hoping!
I desperately WANT Cam to pop a boner!
Shock the girls!
Make them admire your penis!
At least until you lose it in front of them
If he fights back,
If he can manage to break free- to even PARTIALLY strip one of the girls, that might do it

Given how the plot is going I don’t see him yet. I am actually curious about what Mia is planning and how Cam gonna react he is about to be exposed to one more girl he know.

The author really left us on a cliffhanger here

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I wouldn't call this an SPH reveal.
Cameron obviously hasn't entered puberty yet, so he could look very different in only one year's time.

It being revealed that the older and larger Jack has to resort to stuffing his shorts is definitely SPH, but done in a funny way to put a bully
in his place. I have a crotch stuffing story I haven't gotten around to doing, so I am not against all types of SPH, though my characters tend
to be average to above average in size.

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I wouldn't call this an SPH reveal.
Cameron obviously hasn't entered puberty yet, so he could look very different in only one year's time.

It being revealed that the older and larger Jack has to resort to stuffing his shorts is definitely SPH, but done in a funny way to put a bully
in his place. I have a crotch stuffing story I haven't gotten around to doing, so I am not against all types of SPH, though my characters tend
to be average to above average in size.

It’s been been established earlier when he first lost his trunks that he can get erect.
At 13, you generally ARE able to ejaculate.
I still think if Cam can pop a boner, that might mitigate at least SOME humiliation from the girls.

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Ellie is obviously disappointed and that hurts
Another testament to your writing
I was hoping for an incredibly embarrassing, but hopeful ending.
But as it flops, it seems Cam is screwed, and not literally.
Even worse, it seems he’ll never again be admired by Ellie
She was hoping he had SOMETHING to show, but it seems he’s just a little boy.

Ellie is disappointed, but as stated in the chapter she still likes what she sees and is willing herself to adjust to what she is seeing. Ellie still admires Cam, it says so in the chapter so I am still hopeful of a relationship developing.

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SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.

Understand your preferences however for me this is just what I like to write about and so this chapter does the humiliation so well. In my own stories my concentration is mostly on trying to put into words the best words to convey embarrassment and humiliation. This chapter achieved that very well.

[NudeBaG]

Ellie is obviously disappointed and that hurts
Another testament to your writing
I was hoping for an incredibly embarrassing, but hopeful ending.
But as it flops, it seems Cam is screwed, and not literally.
Even worse, it seems he’ll never again be admired by Ellie
She was hoping he had SOMETHING to show, but it seems he’s just a little boy.

Ellie is disappointed, but as stated in the chapter she still likes what she sees and is willing herself to adjust to what she is seeing. Ellie still admires Cam, it says so in the chapter so I am still hopeful of a relationship developing.

If Ellie really DOES like what she sees, imagine how much MORE she’d like it if Cam got hard?!
It might make up for his lack of development.
And as I stated, I would LOVE if it would surprise/shut Mia and Hannah up, at least momentarily

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SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.

Cam is only 13, so I wasn’t hoping for a ‘huge cock’ reveal.
But it seems he IS underdeveloped for his age, which REALLY fucking sucks
But if he can bone up…
That MIGHT be at least a little more impressive and save himself.
It’s like what happened earlier with the bully, but I REALLY was hoping Cam would be impressive..

Interesting how we read a story differently. I always had the impression that Cam was nothing out of the ordinary in size. Neither super small or exceptional in any way.

[NudeBaG]

SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.

Cam is only 13, so I wasn’t hoping for a ‘huge cock’ reveal.
But it seems he IS underdeveloped for his age, which REALLY fucking sucks
But if he can bone up…
That MIGHT be at least a little more impressive and save himself.
It’s like what happened earlier with the bully, but I REALLY was hoping Cam would be impressive..

Interesting how we read a story differently. I always had the impression that Cam was nothing out of the ordinary in size. Neither super small or exceptional in any way.

I’m not necessarily saying he’s below average size, but he definitely seems to be ‘lacking’.
Between Hannah and Mia, it’s been made clear that his lack of pubic hair is something to be ashamed of.
And even if Hannah doesn’t REALLY know if Cam is ‘small’ for his age, she just seems to be going off of what Mia thinks.
And Mia has made it clear that she is unimpressed.
Even if Ellie is pleased with Cam, there’s still that ‘slight’ moment of disappointment.
I would still love it for Cam to pop a boner, further endearing himself to Ellie and maybe impressing Hannah and upsetting Mia.
But with all the hormones and embarrassment, it doesn’t go completely ‘well’ for Cam…

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Cam is only 13, so I wasn’t hoping for a ‘huge cock’ reveal.
But it seems he IS underdeveloped for his age, which REALLY fucking sucks
But if he can bone up…
That MIGHT be at least a little more impressive and save himself.
It’s like what happened earlier with the bully, but I REALLY was hoping Cam would be impressive..

Interesting how we read a story differently. I always had the impression that Cam was nothing out of the ordinary in size. Neither super small or exceptional in any way.

I’m not necessarily saying he’s below average size, but he definitely seems to be ‘lacking’.
Between Hannah and Mia, it’s been made clear that his lack of pubic hair is something to be ashamed of.
And even if Hannah doesn’t REALLY know if Cam is ‘small’ for his age, she just seems to be going off of what Mia thinks.
And Mia has made it clear that she is unimpressed.
Even if Ellie is pleased with Cam, there’s still that ‘slight’ moment of disappointment.
I would still love it for Cam to pop a boner, further endearing himself to Ellie and maybe impressing Hannah and upsetting Mia.
But with all the hormones and embarrassment, it doesn’t go completely ‘well’ for Cam…

My take on Mia and her comments, I see through the eyes of jealousy. My contention is that Mia has an attraction for Ellie which is not fully reciprocated. I suspect that Cam will pop a boner which while not huge will be well proportioned and handsome as far as Ellie is concerned. So I am expecting Mia to not be impressed once she discovers that Ellie still finds Cam cute and even handsome despite his slightly later development. I suspect it must be the influence of this story on me but in my current half written story ‘Love doesn’t need excessive modesty’ the female character has the same urges and moral tribulations about the naked male main character as well as the dilemma as to how far she is prepared to go with the boy as far as her own modesty is concerned ( havn’t written that part yet). I am very positive from my take of the last chapter that Ellie and Cam have a future together.

Hannah … well let’s hope Cam is allowed some revenge and perhaps Hannah is not yet far into puberty and equally does not want her bare body secrets exposed. Mia is well into puberty but still would be mortified I fell sure if she was seen bare naked.

No doubt the author has a few more surprises in store for us readers