Megan's Broken Bra (Chapter 5 update) 12/30/24

[sslim5]

So did you tease a lot of dads growing up ?

[emobat]

So did you tease a lot of dads growing up ?

a few

[Darky]

Embarrassing this chapter! The full essence of the board

[sslim5]

I hope we see another chapter

[CinnabarSunset]

In the first chapter and also somewhat in the second chapter, there was a psychological element that intrigued me. Megan was self conscious and hyper aware, and it was left ambiguous how much certain things were just "in her head" versus being real. It was fun getting that kind of direct and believable look into Megan's mindset, seeing things through her eyes in more than just a literal sense.

The direction of the story from chapter 3 onward isn't as much my cup of tea. That's not a criticism on a literary level, but just a fact of my personal preferences. I won't elaborate on that right now because it would be a "critique" of the "I don't like this apple because it's not an orange" variety. Even so, I couldn't help feeling some excitement as I read the more recent parts. If you do end up writing more of this story, I'll probably read it.

[Luri]

Keep it up!