Heather Plays Hockey [Ch11 Posted on 12/20/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch10 Posted on 12/16/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
I have to admit I didn't expect an off season chapter, but it's interesting, Heather leaning a lot more into her sexuality and a bit into exhibitionism too
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch10 Posted on 12/16/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
I love the story, but it is not easy to read when four different characters are speaking in the same paragraph.
It gets confusing keeping track of who is saying what.
It would change your format from the neat paragraphs look that you are using, but having each speaker have a separate line improves on
the clarity.
It gets confusing keeping track of who is saying what.
It would change your format from the neat paragraphs look that you are using, but having each speaker have a separate line improves on
the clarity.
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch10 Posted on 12/16/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Though I must admit, while the sexuality is fun, I hope you don't forget the innocent, just nudity and butt pats type fun of the starting few chapters
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Heather Plays Hockey Ch11 (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Chapter 11 - High School League - The Beginning
It was again time for hockey season to begin. The coach had gotten a raise and prestige in the student athletics community for how he turned around the Huntington Huskies pee wee and junior leagues. However, there was some doubt about his ability to make a deny in the high school league because his players were all freshman. All the other teams had a mix of freshman, sophomores, juniors, and seniors. Of course those other teams weren't starting from a defunct high school hockey program. The high school league had many more teams in it from all across the state, and nobody expected the Huntington Huskies to even make it to the District Championship let alone go on to the State Championship. The Huntington Huskies were starting behind the eight ball for sure, and they knew it.
Still, on that first day of practice spirits were high. Not everyone had seen everyone else in the off season so there was a lot of catching up going on. Out on the ice the team looked really good. It was obvious they had been keeping in shape and doing what they could to practice without the benefit of ice. The coach was happy with where they were starting from. He also knew people loved and underdog story.
He'd be lying to himself if he said he wasn't excited about being in the locker room with his team after practice. He hadn't seen any of them in the off season and it was fun for him to see the changing bodies of the kids. The coach wasn't gay, but he could still appreciate that these nine young men were at the peak of physical fitness. There were more six packs than the beer cooler at the local convenience store and these boys were taller and more muscular than last year. There was even some facial hair and chest hair sprouts starting on a few boys. This was also the first year he would call describe the boys as having 'cocks'. They were certainly not little boys at all anymore. There were compliments and comparisons going on between all the guys as if standing around naked together was perfectly normal. The coach knew that it feeling normal to them was part of the magic that kept the team improving.
Then he saw Heather throw her gear off and strip. He heard Jeremy say "oh...you wore Spider-Gwen. Awesome.". Now the whole team, and the coach, got to see one of Heather's new thongs. It won her a round of applause as she took a sarcastic bow then pulled them off before walking into the showers. The coach noticed her breasts had grown since the end of season sleepover. The was a very full B cup now, or maybe a small C cup. Her butt was plumper too. She looked so womanly but also still just only 15 years old. It was a confusing dichotomy even for the coach.
In the showers the group goofed around splashing and joking like they were 11 again. It was nice to see that even with all the outward changes that they could still also just be kids. Eventually their teen hormones kicked in though. He heard a lot of explicit giving of consent to touching. He heard "wow Heather, your tits definitely grew" from one boy and "I love that booty Heather!" from another. He heard Heather's voice saying "your abs are amazing. Leads my eyes right down to your cock". The coach shouldn't have been surprised, but he was a little that they picked up some vulgar slang. With all the catching up they didn't have time for masterbation this first day. He was pretty confident that wouldn't always be true.
After the shower, the team was getting dressed. Heather came into the coach's office wearing only a sheer pink thong. He said "what's up Mulqueany?" as casually as possible. She said "some things....have changed since last season, coach". He couldn't help but make a little joke saying "you mean more than the new undies?" Heather giggled and blushed. The coach never understood why Heather blushed sometimes because she had willingly came into his office in nothing but this thong and with her breasts completely exposed. But him mentioning her new panty style turned her cheeks pink. She said "I wanted more grown-up panties. But yes, more stuff changed." She lowered her voice and leaned closer saying "I started getting my period. I thought you should know." The coach didn't fully know the best way to respond. He said "um....well I will make sure there are pads and tampons in this spare locker. If you need to sit out a practice or game we can figure that out." She said "I definitely don't want to sit out. But I do appreciate the products coach. Thanks for being understanding". He nodded. She hugged him and he rubbed her bare back followed by a pat on the butt. Heather smiled and went to finish getting dressed.
The team lost their first game as they acclimated to the pace of a high school league game. Then they won three games in a row. They were off to a good start. With the team now being 15 years old, their sexualities were in overdrive. The coach remembered being that age and how difficult it was. He worried it may be the thing that finally tore the team apart. There was more bickering and aggression than he was used to. Jeremy and Heather sensed it too. Without consulting the coach the captain and co-captain had the whole team meet extra early one practice. The coach wasn't even there yet but he did arrive in time to catch the end of what must have been a long team heart-to-heart.
Jeremy was talking at that point saying "we are all learning a lot about ourselves and our bodies and it's scary. But if we all agree that the locker room is a safe space to explore, without judgement or embarrassment I think we will be a better team on and off the ice." Heather said "I think it was a good start going around the room and just verbalizing what we've learned about ourselves. Timmy, I for one think it's cool you like spankings. Henry, I don't understand it but I am happy for you that you figured out you like being hit in the balls". The other boys cringed but gave him a thumbs up. Jeremy added "and now you all know I like to wear panties. It's a relief to just be able to share that and feel safe." Heather said "and I feel like less of a weirdo that I like to put things up my butt and have my pubes yanked. So....let's just keep this acceptance going."
Heather looked up and said "oh, coach I didn't see you come in. We met early to try to fix some team dynamics." He said "I'm actually glad. This team's interpersonal bonds has been our secret weapon for years. Are you all ready to get out on the ice?" Heather said "ok guys. You heard him. Skate up and be on the ice in five." She gave the coach a wink and he smiled back. He had accidentally learned a lot about his players' proclivities. He wished he'd had an environment like this when he was in high school.
It was again time for hockey season to begin. The coach had gotten a raise and prestige in the student athletics community for how he turned around the Huntington Huskies pee wee and junior leagues. However, there was some doubt about his ability to make a deny in the high school league because his players were all freshman. All the other teams had a mix of freshman, sophomores, juniors, and seniors. Of course those other teams weren't starting from a defunct high school hockey program. The high school league had many more teams in it from all across the state, and nobody expected the Huntington Huskies to even make it to the District Championship let alone go on to the State Championship. The Huntington Huskies were starting behind the eight ball for sure, and they knew it.
Still, on that first day of practice spirits were high. Not everyone had seen everyone else in the off season so there was a lot of catching up going on. Out on the ice the team looked really good. It was obvious they had been keeping in shape and doing what they could to practice without the benefit of ice. The coach was happy with where they were starting from. He also knew people loved and underdog story.
He'd be lying to himself if he said he wasn't excited about being in the locker room with his team after practice. He hadn't seen any of them in the off season and it was fun for him to see the changing bodies of the kids. The coach wasn't gay, but he could still appreciate that these nine young men were at the peak of physical fitness. There were more six packs than the beer cooler at the local convenience store and these boys were taller and more muscular than last year. There was even some facial hair and chest hair sprouts starting on a few boys. This was also the first year he would call describe the boys as having 'cocks'. They were certainly not little boys at all anymore. There were compliments and comparisons going on between all the guys as if standing around naked together was perfectly normal. The coach knew that it feeling normal to them was part of the magic that kept the team improving.
Then he saw Heather throw her gear off and strip. He heard Jeremy say "oh...you wore Spider-Gwen. Awesome.". Now the whole team, and the coach, got to see one of Heather's new thongs. It won her a round of applause as she took a sarcastic bow then pulled them off before walking into the showers. The coach noticed her breasts had grown since the end of season sleepover. The was a very full B cup now, or maybe a small C cup. Her butt was plumper too. She looked so womanly but also still just only 15 years old. It was a confusing dichotomy even for the coach.
In the showers the group goofed around splashing and joking like they were 11 again. It was nice to see that even with all the outward changes that they could still also just be kids. Eventually their teen hormones kicked in though. He heard a lot of explicit giving of consent to touching. He heard "wow Heather, your tits definitely grew" from one boy and "I love that booty Heather!" from another. He heard Heather's voice saying "your abs are amazing. Leads my eyes right down to your cock". The coach shouldn't have been surprised, but he was a little that they picked up some vulgar slang. With all the catching up they didn't have time for masterbation this first day. He was pretty confident that wouldn't always be true.
After the shower, the team was getting dressed. Heather came into the coach's office wearing only a sheer pink thong. He said "what's up Mulqueany?" as casually as possible. She said "some things....have changed since last season, coach". He couldn't help but make a little joke saying "you mean more than the new undies?" Heather giggled and blushed. The coach never understood why Heather blushed sometimes because she had willingly came into his office in nothing but this thong and with her breasts completely exposed. But him mentioning her new panty style turned her cheeks pink. She said "I wanted more grown-up panties. But yes, more stuff changed." She lowered her voice and leaned closer saying "I started getting my period. I thought you should know." The coach didn't fully know the best way to respond. He said "um....well I will make sure there are pads and tampons in this spare locker. If you need to sit out a practice or game we can figure that out." She said "I definitely don't want to sit out. But I do appreciate the products coach. Thanks for being understanding". He nodded. She hugged him and he rubbed her bare back followed by a pat on the butt. Heather smiled and went to finish getting dressed.
The team lost their first game as they acclimated to the pace of a high school league game. Then they won three games in a row. They were off to a good start. With the team now being 15 years old, their sexualities were in overdrive. The coach remembered being that age and how difficult it was. He worried it may be the thing that finally tore the team apart. There was more bickering and aggression than he was used to. Jeremy and Heather sensed it too. Without consulting the coach the captain and co-captain had the whole team meet extra early one practice. The coach wasn't even there yet but he did arrive in time to catch the end of what must have been a long team heart-to-heart.
Jeremy was talking at that point saying "we are all learning a lot about ourselves and our bodies and it's scary. But if we all agree that the locker room is a safe space to explore, without judgement or embarrassment I think we will be a better team on and off the ice." Heather said "I think it was a good start going around the room and just verbalizing what we've learned about ourselves. Timmy, I for one think it's cool you like spankings. Henry, I don't understand it but I am happy for you that you figured out you like being hit in the balls". The other boys cringed but gave him a thumbs up. Jeremy added "and now you all know I like to wear panties. It's a relief to just be able to share that and feel safe." Heather said "and I feel like less of a weirdo that I like to put things up my butt and have my pubes yanked. So....let's just keep this acceptance going."
Heather looked up and said "oh, coach I didn't see you come in. We met early to try to fix some team dynamics." He said "I'm actually glad. This team's interpersonal bonds has been our secret weapon for years. Are you all ready to get out on the ice?" Heather said "ok guys. You heard him. Skate up and be on the ice in five." She gave the coach a wink and he smiled back. He had accidentally learned a lot about his players' proclivities. He wished he'd had an environment like this when he was in high school.
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch11 Posted on 12/20/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
This last chapter reminds me of the surprising scene in Starship Troopers, where all the soldiers shower together.
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With the team playing others across the state, a longer road trip might be needed. Ten hyped up and horny 15 year olds in a hotel could
get very interesting. I'm sure the hotel has a heated swimming pool, and then it gets really steamy.
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With the team playing others across the state, a longer road trip might be needed. Ten hyped up and horny 15 year olds in a hotel could
get very interesting. I'm sure the hotel has a heated swimming pool, and then it gets really steamy.
Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch11 Posted on 12/20/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
Chapter 11 was one of character development and I anticipate more plot progression in Chapter 12--Chapter 11 is necessary. Airing dirty laundry within the confines of the locker room where teammates mutually trusted each other totally.
Keep up the good work, please!
Keep up the good work, please!
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch11 Posted on 12/20/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
So first of I love this story, and I don't know if this is even worth mentioning. But from what I remember your skills and fitness increase a lot in these years, and even facing people 1 year older than me meant I was getting 10x'ed in the scoreline, so hearing a team beat opponents who are 3 years older than them 3 times in a row took me out of the story for a bit there.
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch11 Posted on 12/20/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)
I suppose that's the post nut clarity boosting their decision making statENFfanatic wrote: ↑Sat Dec 21, 2024 3:06 pm So first of I love this story, and I don't know if this is even worth mentioning. But from what I remember your skills and fitness increase a lot in these years, and even facing people 1 year older than me meant I was getting 10x'ed in the scoreline, so hearing a team beat opponents who are 3 years older than them 3 times in a row took me out of the story for a bit there.
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