Good, very very good!
Excellent ENF component. Tory's reaction to her crush and brother is perfect. And in my opinion this two part story is just the right length. But if a sequel or epilogue happened, that would be excellent as well.
Thanks for writing.
Girls Don't Need Modesty: Clothes Shopping (Complete)
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This could easily continue with many spin-offs, like Tory at the doctors getting her yearly physical, and also some spin-offs with Fredrick and Tory, and could even do a school spin-off after all the other spin-offs.
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I have so many stories still ongoing, that I wanted to get in and out with this one quickly. You can certainly imagine these things happening to Tory one day. Me, I imagine that Tory's dad and Gina's mom end up getting together, with the two girls bonding over their less modest lifestyle. Fredrick would continue to discipline Tory, even as they begin a romantic relationship. Disciplining Gina would probably then end up being a shared responsibility of Fredrick and Bart. Tory would probably end up embracing her nakedness after a while. She's a strong-willed girl, so while she might be teased about it at first, I don't imagine her letting that go on for too long. Any girls teasing her would get the same treatment as the girls from the food court, and if that didn't work, Tory might conspire to pants and strip them herself. And as her dad said, girls don't need modesty, so she'd hardly get in trouble for doing so.computerphoto wrote: ↑Tue Aug 20, 2024 12:32 am This could easily continue with many spin-offs, like Tory at the doctors getting her yearly physical, and also some spin-offs with Fredrick and Tory, and could even do a school spin-off after all the other spin-offs.
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Incredible story! I loved every word of it! This perfectly captures the concept of girls not needing modesty. I love her father's attitude about all of it.o especially loved Tory's tantrum and spanking and it was fun to see her embrace her new life style by wearing that teddy to breakfast. This definitely inspires some new ideas for future stories in this universe. Great story! Thank you for writing it.
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I would never have been able to do it without your inspiration! Thank you!perseus wrote: ↑Tue Aug 20, 2024 2:38 pm Incredible story! I loved every word of it! This perfectly captures the concept of girls not needing modesty. I love her father's attitude about all of it.o especially loved Tory's tantrum and spanking and it was fun to see her embrace her new life style by wearing that teddy to breakfast. This definitely inspires some new ideas for future stories in this universe. Great story! Thank you for writing it.
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