The Last Straw (new 10/12)

[Bucket]

Hate to be that guy and go against another user/commenter, but I would hate to see the other sisters join the naked punishment. Mary being the only one naked and embarrassed makes this story so special because if it.

Having any of the other sisters join would ruin that imo.

You make a compelling argument. There's something about a solo acts that makes it especially entertaining. In a harem, each girl's story runs the risk of getting lost in the crowd. On the other hand, it feels like a missed opportunity to introduce a pretty girl to an ENF story only to have her keep her clothes on the whole time. I'm torn!

That's fair.

It's ok to be torn, and at the end of the day, it's your story and you should write it as you see fit. I do feel that making other girls strip would completely detract from and potentially ruin what makes this story so damn wonderful. Mary being the only one naked whilst everyone around her is dressed, amplifying her extreme mortification, only to (hopefully) get worse and worse for her in terms of exposure really fully engages you and you feel fully invested in Mary and her story/situation.

Adding other girls getting naked would drastically reduce Mary's story, her situation and her devastating embarrassment. Sidenote: I do love how you heavily include the extremely negative effect this is having on Mary's mental health btw. Mary sitting there in tears constantly is realistic and adds to her perilous situation.

I do like a suggestion made by another reader here where despite Mary's desperate humiliation, perhaps she starts to develop an exhibitionist nature a bit and it all starts to turn her on despite her vest efforts not to.

Anyway, regardless of where you take this story, I'll be there the entire journey. ☺

[SensoryOverlord]

That heart is just waiting to be deemed disorderly, so she's ordered to remove it entirely.

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Hate to be that guy and go against another user/commenter, but I would hate to see the other sisters join the naked punishment. Mary being the only one naked and embarrassed makes this story so special because if it.

Having any of the other sisters join would ruin that imo.

You make a compelling argument. There's something about a solo act that makes it especially entertaining. In a harem, each girl's story runs the risk of getting lost in the crowd. On the other hand, it feels like a missed opportunity to introduce a pretty girl to an ENF story only to have her keep her clothes on the whole time. I'm torn!

I have a suggestion then! Just have the other girls be naked only in front of their brother and father instead of publically!

This will keep the public nudity as OON , but also won't be a waste of such pretty girls, as I feel it ruins a story to not have all the girls go nude at least once

Maybe with photographic evidence of their nudity kept with their father, so it exists but their brother cannot have it to freely show others, but the girls cannot destroy their nude pictures either!

[Bucket]

Hate to be that guy and go against another user/commenter, but I would hate to see the other sisters join the naked punishment. Mary being the only one naked and embarrassed makes this story so special because if it.

Having any of the other sisters join would ruin that imo.

You make a compelling argument. There's something about a solo act that makes it especially entertaining. In a harem, each girl's story runs the risk of getting lost in the crowd. On the other hand, it feels like a missed opportunity to introduce a pretty girl to an ENF story only to have her keep her clothes on the whole time. I'm torn!

I have a suggestion then! Just have the other girls be naked only in front of their brother and father instead of publically!

This will keep the public nudity as OON , but also won't be a waste of such pretty girls, as I feel it ruins a story to not have all the girls go nude at least once

Maybe with photographic evidence of their nudity kept with their father, so it exists but their brother cannot have it to freely show others, but the girls cannot destroy their nude pictures either!

Sorry, have to disagree wholeheartedly.

It's fine though. We all have our opinions, and you're certainly entitled to yours, so no worries ☺

[SensoryOverlord]

I'll cast my vote with Mary remaining the only one naked. Mostly. Much more potential for humiliating situations, and status rifts in the family that way.

However... that shaved heart. That's going to be a point of contention. Frank will take a very dim view, and order it removed completely.
But he'll also wonder about the other girls, so there'll have to be an 'inspection scene.' And a shaving scene. Plenty of scope for other insubordinations to be discovered, both with Mary and the other girls. What's the bet they _all_ have some suggestive shaving?

Frank certainly wouldn't tollerate that. He might decide that some kind of daily stubble inspection would be a good idea. "Smooth to the touch in all areas" being the standard to be met. With a thorough re-shaving to be applied on failure. All with a report written in an inspection logbook. Got to keep adequate records.

For which he'll delegate responsibility. It's the military way. He won't think having Patricia do the checks, shavings and writeup would be appropriate. So it will have to be Junior. To be carried out first thing each morning, pyjamas dropped, before showers and dressing for efficiency. (Mary excepted on the dressing.) Under general parental supervision of course, to ensure it's all done thoroughly and consistently. No favoritism or slacking off.

Junior's erection would be tollerated. "Can't be avoided, he'll just have to bear with it. Character building." However after a few days of this, and the girls and Junior sleeping in close proximity with no privacy, what will Frank think when he discovers that the dear innocent daughters are developing indications of strong sexual arousal during the inspections and shaving he's ordered? He's a strict military man, I doubt he'd approve.

If something is revealing a problem, then obviously what's needed is more of it. Inspections doubled to morning and evening, with an added component of direct manual and visual close checking for signs of arousal. Both superficial, and an internal check with fingers. Frank will be shocked and dismayed to read the logbook reports. (Probably will have Junior read them out to him while they are driving.)

Some kind of disciplinary routine will have to be imposed. Also at some point Junior's increasing trouble with persistent erections will have to be addressed. Semper Fi!

[neverdoubted]

I should just get on with posting it so everyone doesn't have to wonder how this is going to play out

You have a very active imagination, SensoryOverload. While most of these predictions are off the mark, you have managed to correctly guess one future plot point. Not gonna tell you which one.

[jojo12026]

Please DO post the next chapters

[Bucket]

I should just get on with posting it so everyone doesn't have to wonder how this is going to play out

You have a very active imagination, SensoryOverload. While most of these predictions are off the mark, you have managed to correctly guess one future plot point. Not gonna tell you which one.

Oh hell yeah!

Is there a new chapter coming imminently? I've yet to read the latest chapter, so if you post by tomorrow, I'll read both chapters first thing tomorrow.

[neverdoubted]

ok, I'll post it in the morning.

[Bucket]

ok, I'll post it in the morning.

Legend!