
Great tale (or is that great "tail?")--thanks for the story.
Awesome, can't wait!steam train wrote: Fri Jun 28, 2024 10:13 am For those interested, keep a look out where I post most of my stories (FNSA) in July & August’ as the author has given me permission to write about Pete’s physical examination and then I created Lauren Prentiss and her brother Ben which was brilliantly worked into the above story. If you want to find out what happens to Lauren, that will be published in August.
Steam
“Just then, Becca’s worst fear was realized. The nurse was leading a group of three by room. The nurse kept walking; she knew what was in the room, but the three others stopped dead in their tracks and stared into the room. To Becca’s great frustration, one of the three was Lauren Prentiss, one of the most popular girls in her school. They were in the same grade; Becca would have to deal with Lauren seeing this side of her for the rest of the year now. Lauren didn’t like Becca, or, more accurately, Lauren didn’t like anyone outside of her group of friends. She was a bitch, and it was killing Becca that Lauren could see her like this, but perhaps worse, Lauren’s older brother was seeing her too! Becca didn’t know him, but that didn’t make the fact that he was gazing at her private girl's parts any easier. After a few seconds of shock from the three, Lauren tried to cover her brother’s eyes, then the older lady with them, no doubt their mother, grabbed her son’s wrist, and the three left.”
Thank you! I'm very glad you are enjoying the story!Bucket wrote: Wed Aug 07, 2024 6:33 pm I really love this story already and there's so much potential here. Would love to see Becca's home life.
The cream that the Dr has prescribed creates all sorts very fun opportunities, and I could see a scenario where Becca has to remain bottomless at home from now on, which could be a great deal of fun. I don't know why a bottomless girl is so much fun, (so long as the shirt is above or around the naval) probably because there's extra focus on her nether regions, which would/could make the girl feel even more exposed and vulnerable than if she was outright naked. I don't think I've seen a bottomless story even once, so the mere novelty of it would make it so much more fun and entertaining! Just a suggestion. ☺
I also love the intimate involvement of her brother in giving her (reluctant) pleasure. Hope that's a running theme.
Anyway, hope there's a lot more to come soon!
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