Caroline is Confused (Complete)
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Thanks as always for the chapter, neverdoubted!
I've always enjoyed the scenario of parents to a teenage girl having to deal with the fact that she doesn't seem to want to wear clothes around the house anymore - both Lucy and Caroline! For those parents, there's basically two ways to deal with the situation - go thermonuclear with the punishments to try and force her to wear clothes, or simply leave her be. Any reasonable parent would eventually give up and choose the latter. After all, a girl being seen naked by her family is hardly a catastrophe and she should hardly be at risk for rape by her male family members. Things get a little more difficult when it comes to guests, but ultimately she is her own human - she has to make her own decisions!
I am curious as to what decisions Caroline's family will make if her struggles continue. I would love to see any continuation to her story, but of course any writings from you are very welcome!
I've always enjoyed the scenario of parents to a teenage girl having to deal with the fact that she doesn't seem to want to wear clothes around the house anymore - both Lucy and Caroline! For those parents, there's basically two ways to deal with the situation - go thermonuclear with the punishments to try and force her to wear clothes, or simply leave her be. Any reasonable parent would eventually give up and choose the latter. After all, a girl being seen naked by her family is hardly a catastrophe and she should hardly be at risk for rape by her male family members. Things get a little more difficult when it comes to guests, but ultimately she is her own human - she has to make her own decisions!
I am curious as to what decisions Caroline's family will make if her struggles continue. I would love to see any continuation to her story, but of course any writings from you are very welcome!
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Coming to you from a writer typing far far away...
EPISODE TWO: The Revenge of the Tharson.
If the next segments are still in outline form, then possibly some minor modifications will lessen the amount of possible trauma that is
dished out on the poor girl, making the future episodes less harsh. Even if things get rough for a while, if there is a happy ending then
all is well and good, and I would be happy to read the rest of the story.
EPISODE TWO: The Revenge of the Tharson.
If the next segments are still in outline form, then possibly some minor modifications will lessen the amount of possible trauma that is
dished out on the poor girl, making the future episodes less harsh. Even if things get rough for a while, if there is a happy ending then
all is well and good, and I would be happy to read the rest of the story.
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I definitely would like to read more of this!
Even if you think it wouldn't fit the board I would think a disclaimer or content warning would be good enough at the start of the story.
For me personally, it's all fantasy so I don't mind reading stories where the girl "doesn't deserve" her naked fate.
Thank you for this story!
Even if you think it wouldn't fit the board I would think a disclaimer or content warning would be good enough at the start of the story.
For me personally, it's all fantasy so I don't mind reading stories where the girl "doesn't deserve" her naked fate.
Thank you for this story!
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I'm not sure some of the content would be appropriate for this board. I'm afraid I've made Caroline a little too sympathetic a protagonist. She's so innocent and doesn't deserve the cruel fate that befalls her. Perhaps, if there were enough interest, I would flesh out and post future episodes. But I'm also happy to let it stand on its own.
But ... poor innocent protagonists that don't deserve it make the best enf victims!
I agree not all stories should be so long... but this one had some fun potential of a protagonist who was genuinely embarrassed by her nudity
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I created an account just to say I'd like to see a part ii thought it should remain a comedy of errors. And not become more sinister in my opinion.
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Wow! Something must have resonated for you to go through the trouble. I do like the idea of a comedy of errors route and will take it into consideration. At this time, I don't see enough engagement to warrant a sequel. Thanks for taking the time to comment, though.Csfts wrote: Thu Dec 07, 2023 4:48 am I created an account just to say I'd like to see a part ii thought it should remain a comedy of errors. And not become more sinister in my opinion.

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I'll add my voice to the calls for a sequel! It would be incredibly tragic not to see how this plays out in school for Caroline, especially since her teacher basically got a blank check to handle her any way he seems fit. Please consider a sequel, I'm betting that many here would agree.
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