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by unfair
Sun Apr 05, 2020 7:41 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-9 [new part 9]

Well, you're a pretty average superhero series, but you're good at pushing me out of my procrastination.
I have however split this part a little to help keep me motivated a little. I'm thinking part 10 will be the last.

Hope everyone is surviving you know what virus, and probably have plenty of use ...
by unfair
Sun Apr 26, 2020 3:59 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-10 [new part 10.0]

Alright, I got around to 1 chapter, and figured I may as well post it, and follow it up with the other 2 chapters (10.3 and 10.6) for this part next weekend. So sorry if it's a bit short, but the wait until the next should be shorter.

Chapter 28 – Keys, pees and more saying “cheese”

The girls ...
by unfair
Mon Apr 27, 2020 9:48 pm
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Re: Kaitlyn’s Torture [PART 1, 2, 3]

Really great, can't wait for more.
by unfair
Sun May 03, 2020 3:00 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-10 [new part 10.3]

Sorry it's only one chapter again! Was about 5th on my priorities list this weekend, and figured something was better than nothing. Enjoy :).

Chapter 29 – Tape of removing tape

The four squeezed into the public girl’s bathroom cubicle, shoving the reluctant Mona ahead of them onto the toilet ...
by unfair
Mon May 11, 2020 1:12 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-11 [new part 11]

So I only meant to write the final chapter in the last part, but then I got carried away enjoying it, so now there's a new part. I like the themes in this part a lot, but I'd be interested what other people's thoughts on the direction are.

I've said this before, but I suspect the next part will be ...
by unfair
Sun Jul 05, 2020 6:06 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-11 [new part 11]

Sorry, hope you haven't given up waiting. I've written the plan for the last 3 chapters, expect in the coming weeks.
by unfair
Sun Aug 16, 2020 12:49 pm
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Re: Manipulating Mona part 3-12 [new part 12]

Part 12

FYI's from author, I've managed a chapter! It is on the longer side though.

Sorry for leaving you guys hanging, I hope you like the chapter, I wrote it mainly last night. I've had my gf over for a while, and while she likes the story, she tends to take my attentions more than internet ...
by unfair
Sun Oct 11, 2020 10:17 pm
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Re: Marissa's Barbeque with Cousins

I really liked it! Favourite I read in a while personally.

I think this "girls forcing themselves on them is ok, but let's not get too rapey" becomes a farce. Write what you want, no one is forced to read it.