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FYIs from author.

Hi, was going to continue to write a bit of an epic here, but I think I need some feedback on whether people like the direction and what I can do better before I commit any more time. If people things it's too slow or something, might edit/re-upload/delete.
Been reading stories ...

It's very rare that I like enm stories, but this was a rare exception for me.
Really liked her crush turning on him and the ensuing embarassment.

FYIs from author.

Thanks for all the generous feedback last time. I'm afraid I don't think I've actually put any suggestions in yet (except to write what I like :p), maybe in future though. Enjoy, hopefully :).


Part 2 - This time shit actually happens

Chapter 5 – Not playing by the rules ...

FYI's:
-Decided I will make this thread for the third part, but will put updates in here from now on, so check for new parts if you're interested.
-Hopefully this story is going in a direction and style people like, let me know :).
-Feel like there's something about the style of my writing that's a ...

==Part 4==

Chapter 12 – A sight to behold

The air of anticipation as Mona released the clasp. She held the unfastened bra over her bust to wait for a last minute reprieve, none came.

She finally let the bra drop into her hand, revealing her perky c cup breasts. The two delightful globes ...

Part 5

FYI from author. Thanks for all your nice messages <3! Sorry this part is quite a bit shorter than then others, not sure how the direction is going to be received since we're getting very into kinda thing I like now. Possibly I'm biting of more than I can chew haha. Anyway enjoy ...

Part 6

FYI from author
Consider a new part to this my christmas gift to you (sorry if you asked for an ipad). I quite like the part personally, tried to pick the pace up a little reckon it'll probably finish around part 10. Let me know what you think <3.


Chapter 17 – More dignity is shaved ...

FYIs from the Author:

-Thank you very much to Cober for providing ideas/editing/bits of story even for this part, very much appreciated
-Sorry if I've taken a while to get this part out, but I thank you for your kind feedback, now on to humiliating Mona some more

Part 7

Chapter 20 – Mona ...

Did you ever look into this?

Eventually, I'm lazy until someone gives me a kick, hadn't realised it'd been so long actually.

I'll give it a go tomorrow, will help with my social distancing.