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Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 2) I kept the phone unplugged all weekend so Benny couldn't get to her, and made mom practice her delivery of the evidence. I played the role of Benny. I knew it would be hard for her since she was not good at confrontation; thus, the practice. I had no...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 3) I was caught just as off-guard by her dare request as she was. But I wasn't about to let her off the hook. She should know the rules by now. Once she asked, there was no backing out. But she might have to wait a while. The actual dare could come at a...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 4) We set out for the city of Westfield about an hour away. It was bigger than our town with a greater variety of stores. While Lucy had big plans, particularly when it came to clothing purchases, I kept the official checklist and was in charge of the m...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 5) Every head turned as Lucy entered the mall. Every..single..one. She had been turning heads for years and had to be used to it by now, but this was different. The two-story Westfield mall was laid out traditionally in a giant "X" shape excep...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 6) The crowd of dedicated onlookers had swelled to at least twenty. Any thoughts of shopping were forgotten as they waited with bated breath to see what the girl of their dreams would do next. They were not disappointed when she appeared at the store en...

I love this story!! The pace at which you escalate the events is perfect! I love how Mikey is taking control of the house. I'm also loving these multiple part entries too. Thank you. I never quite know how many little details make it through to the reader. It’s a fine line between heavy-handed fore...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 7) I went to the bathroom then made a circuit of the arcade. I had been in such a state of euphoria earlier I had never really gotten the lay of the land. Besides the traditional game cabinets filling every nook and cranny, the arcade had plenty of pinb...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 8) I borrowed the pen and paper from the luggage salesman then returned to the hall. Lucy watched from the window, her face screwed up in confusion, as I entered the photo stall. I knew the concept. But having never used a photobooth before, I needed to...

Dare Me - Chapter 11 - Severance Package (Part 9) I went to school next day but had trouble concentrating. I was so worried about the trip. When I got home, I saw Lucy laying out in the backyard working on getting a base tan in her new swimsuit. As much fun as it would have been to toy with her some...

Great story! I really like how you manage to keep her innocence and embarrassment despite the multiple escalating situations. Many stories lose this and ramble too long after completion. Wow, that is high praise coming from a legend like yourself! There are two cadences of escalation happening at t...