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Dare Me - Chapter 9 - Lucy makes a Diamond (Part 2) Are you kidding me?! I almost went off on her. Was she really that worked up that she couldn't let me get a single night's sleep? I opened my mouth to berate her, but then I watched her somehow shrink even further into herself. She was clearly in d...

Thanks! These unexpected added chapters are providing integral and necessary plot progression. The swimsuit saga is going to be a culmination or result. Without these recent events happening first, it would have been very hard to justify or explain character motivation, both for Mikey and Lucy. Not ...

Dare Me - Chapter 10 - History Buff (Part 1) "Dare me, Mikey! Please, Dare me. Dare me NOW!" my annoying little sister stomped her foot impatiently. I did my best to ignore her relentless badgering and keep my focus on the TV. I shouldn't complain. I mean, it's not like Saved by the Bell r...

You are certainly applying the heat, pressure and time formula to the reader as well! The wait for the next chapter is going to be brutal! Great work as always! This story keeps getting better and better! Darn it, I was going to wait and see how it went over, but now I may go ahead and post the nex...

Dare Me - Chapter 10 - History Buff (Part 2) I heard the sounds of a slave coming before I saw her. The distinct clinking of chains on metal clattered in from the other room and accompanied her slow progress. When she finally arrived, I saw what had delayed her. Her ankles were fettered with metalli...

If the position of all those rings, chains and strips will have relevance in the next chapter -- which I assume they will -- I wouldn't mind some visual aid. It only exists in my head. Someday soon, we'll be able to feed a story like this to an AI and it will generate illustrations for every scene....

Mariax wrote: ↑Fri Dec 02, 2022 5:43 pm These cliffhangers are killing me! I can't wait to read how the presentation goes.

Will probably post it later today, if there's enough interest.

Dare Me - Chapter 10 - History Buff (Part 3) That afternoon, after checking myself out from school, I rode my bike home and emptied my backpack of its contents. I intended to load Lucy's costume inside in order to bring it to her school. I couldn't believe how heavy it was! Even the smaller rings we...

About a month later, when the time came to expect another dare request from Lucy, I didn't have anything lined up. Nothing like the spectacular history club dare I had given her last month. I was still anticipating it though, hoping to prove my theory that her urges followed some sort of biorhythmic...

Very glad to see you are continuing this story and have another chapter in mind after the swimsuit saga. This chapter looks like it going to shake things up quiet a bit. Excited to see where this goes! I pretty much have the whole thing outlined. I could post all the chapter names (subject to chang...