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Britney was utterly exasperated with her indolent sister, Zoey. She had graciously allowed Zoey to move in with her, hoping to support her in regaining stability after losing her previous job. Zoey’s financial reserves had dwindled alarmingly, leaving her unable to cover the rent for the upcoming ...

Greetings, I'm Marla, a devoted mother to two teenagers and happily wed. Today's dawn mirrored the rhythm of any typical Wednesday: orchestrating the family's morning routine before embarking on the familiar hour-long commute to my workplace. As is customary, I'm usually the first to arrive ...

Summary :

Marisa has broken her neighbor's antique stained glass window. Over her protests, Marisa's parents have agreed to let Mr. Barlowe punish her for a day. As she heads over to his house, Marisa is determined not to let the old man get the better of her ...

The general themes of my ...

Cast of Characters :

Marisa Torres, 17
Daniel Torres, 15 (Marisa's younger brother)
Raymond and Elena Torres (Marisa and Daniel's parents)

Henry Barlowe (The Torres family's next door neighbor)
Riley Sullivan, 18 (Mr. Barlowe's grandson and Leigh's cousin)
Leigh Barlowe, 17 (Mr. Barlowe's ...

Chapter 2

"It is so good of you to come, Marisa."

"I didn't have much choice, Mr. Barlowe."

"Oh, there are always choices, my dear," said Mr. Barlowe as he closed the front door. "The very act of living, in fact, is making a ceaseless string of choices."

... Great, a philosophy lesson. Just ...

Awesome start to your new story Sue DeNym! I hope you are foreshadowing Marisa ending up naked in front of many, many boys she knows, and her brother too! Maybe she'll even face another spanking from Mr Barlow, this time with the boys watching as it happens

I have to honestly say that this is completely my taste. The protagonist is totally mine, as is the story itself and the many teased opportunities for humiliation. I'm really looking forward to a sequel.

Chapter 3

"You missed a spot."

Marisa scowled.

"Sorry." Mr. Barlowe grinned. "Couldn't resist."

Without taking her glaring eyes off the old man, Marisa wiped the spot he had been pointing to.

"That's a good girl," said Mr. Barlowe, patting the girl affectionately on her rear.

He paused ...

Chapter 3 (Continued)

"You look tired, Marisa, why don't you have a seat?"

Riley gently sat Marisa down on the soft sofa in the living room. He sat down next to her. She looked at him, still blushing intensely at being naked, unable to cover herself up, gagged and bound.

"This is a little ...

I'm really positively surprised. :D I like how you give the characters depth and don't immediately drift completely into pornography. This in itself makes the entire plot more meaningful and you get more involved with the characters. I liked how you let Marisa and Mr. Barlowe show different sides of ...