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I'm grateful that people are interested enough in my story to be guessing where it's going. I don't want to give away the plotline in advance, but I like to drop hints. A number of people have picked up on the foreshadowing in the chapters I've posted so far.

In my original draft, when Mr. Barlowe ...

Oh my! what a way to end a chapter! At the hands of someone she insulted, and the imminent arrival of another who hates her, all the while naked and tied! ;) :twisted:

This is really taking shape.

As usual, your writing is wonderful and evocative. With much anticipation I await your next chapter ...

Long time reader, and decided to write something for a change. I sometimes get carried away in my writings, so if there’s any continuity or grammar errors I apologize. This is a one off and complete story, I personally dislike stories releasing in parts. If received well I might write again some ...

The afterimage of what I had just witnessed, still burned in my vision, slowed my reflexes. Were my eyes playing tricks on me? Or was Mary's pubic hair shaped like...a heart? Such a puzzling revelation had my head spinning.

Unfortunately, I didn't have the luxury of stopping to ponder it. Just ...

maybe "The Accidental Porn Star" by PFDWrites?

Babysitter's unwanted visitors force her to play strip spin-the-bottle.

--PART 1--

Sarah waved goodbye from the porch as Ms Byrne drove off to attend her work's party, leaving Sarah in sole charge of her three boys overnight, not to return until mid-afternoon the following day. Being a Friday ...

--PART 2--

At 9.55pm, with all of her charges finally tucked up in their beds, Sarah was taking a break from her homework. She had kicked off her sneakers and put her feet up on the couch to search for a movie to watch on Netflix, whilst simultaneously updating Mike on her evening via WhatsApp ...

--PART 3--

Jenny sat the bottle in the middle of the circle and gave it a good spin. It landed on Charlotte, who looked into the faces of each of the other girls before declaring, "Sarah!" It was only at this point that Sarah realized that she was at a disadvantage, having bare feet from the ...

--PART 4--

Sarah's frenemies had made sure that she would have her back to the staircase at the rear of the living room, but Jenny had an ideal view of it between the two armchairs. As expected, she saw the boys (or at least the twins) she knew so well , quietly creeping down the stairs, stopping ...

Fun story so far, hope there's more to come?

I know that Susan is still working on Chapter 4 of this story.

I'm afraid that it's partly my fault that it's taking so long. Susan has been spending a lot of her time helping me with the stories I've been writing. This past month, we've been mostly ...