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- Sat Feb 19, 2022 8:30 pm
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Re: Magic
Perfect. Truly an amazing chapter for both Mark and the girls. I cannot wait to see what you have planned for Mark now that the girls have made him hard for his next lesson. I wonder if he will lose it this time!
- Sat Feb 19, 2022 8:47 pm
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Re: Magic
I can definitely see where you are coming from with the trickiness from switching perspectives but I can tell you that it is really well written in and as a result almost seamless. I really can't wait to see where this is going and I finish every chapter wanting more! It's just that good (:.
- Sun Feb 20, 2022 2:53 am
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Re: Liam's Mistake
Thanks a lot NudeBaG. I hope to get more parts out quicker. I have a lot planned.
- Sun Feb 20, 2022 1:44 pm
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Re: Magic
Another chapter so soon, what a brilliant surprise!
More great stuff, it's so well written. I love how we're getting different perspectives during crucial moments, it makes the whole thing more embarrassing and excruciating for poor Mark.
Can't wait for more!
More great stuff, it's so well written. I love how we're getting different perspectives during crucial moments, it makes the whole thing more embarrassing and excruciating for poor Mark.
Can't wait for more!
- Thu Feb 24, 2022 10:31 pm
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Re: Magic
I think that works out nicely. It allows us as readers to just insert a number for ourselves which is nice and it is true that all the characters seem to be wowed. Can't wait for more chapters. This series is so well written it's insane. The quality has never gone down!
- Fri Feb 25, 2022 12:14 am
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Re: Magic
Loving this story for sure. It's a pleasure to read!
- Fri Feb 25, 2022 3:52 am
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Re: Magic
This story keeps going from strength to strength. It’s so well written. Makes me wonder where it might go next. Seeing as they can talk I wonder if one of the feeders could offer mark a deal. Maybe help him get some revenge either in school or town. Looking forward to the next chapter
- Fri Feb 25, 2022 7:21 pm
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Re: Magic
You have done an amazing job explaining. I sit on my seat every chapter looking forward to what is next.
- Thu Mar 03, 2022 10:09 pm
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Re: Babysitting Gone Wrong
Perfect! Truly got what she wanted out of him, literally. An amazing story to bide the time for magic, however I can see potential to carry this story on!
- Thu Mar 03, 2022 10:26 pm
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Re: Babysitting Gone Wrong
Great Part 3! Loved everything about it. I wonder if anyone saw him in the yard? Love how he finally came in the bathroom at the hands of Lauren. I would love another chapter with the next slumber party with her friends. Great potential for more fun.