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I can definitely see where you are coming from with the trickiness from switching perspectives but I can tell you that it is really well written in and as a result almost seamless. I really can't wait to see where this is going and I finish every chapter wanting more! It's just that good (:.

Thanks a lot NudeBaG. I hope to get more parts out quicker. I have a lot planned.

I think that works out nicely. It allows us as readers to just insert a number for ourselves which is nice and it is true that all the characters seem to be wowed. Can't wait for more chapters. This series is so well written it's insane. The quality has never gone down!

Loving this story for sure. It's a pleasure to read!

This story keeps going from strength to strength. It’s so well written. Makes me wonder where it might go next. Seeing as they can talk I wonder if one of the feeders could offer mark a deal. Maybe help him get some revenge either in school or town. Looking forward to the next chapter

You have done an amazing job explaining. I sit on my seat every chapter looking forward to what is next.

Would there be any interest in a kind JOI story, written from a female perspective? I would imagine yes, as long as it had some level of embarrassment involved to it (even as simple as just nervous awkward young folks seeing and watching one-another nude and playing for the first time in a very ear...

Yep that works too.

I've honestly been surprised that there is basically none of that in mainstream JOI videos online. The vast majority are just bored/annoyed girls.

Perfect! Truly got what she wanted out of him, literally. An amazing story to bide the time for magic, however I can see potential to carry this story on!

Great Part 3! Loved everything about it. I wonder if anyone saw him in the yard? Love how he finally came in the bathroom at the hands of Lauren. I would love another chapter with the next slumber party with her friends. Great potential for more fun.