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by Emily
Mon Jul 08, 2024 9:18 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/06)

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock: The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t play...
by Emily
Sat Jul 13, 2024 2:25 pm
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Chapter 29 Riley's eyes darted between them, her mind racing. She knew she had to choose, had to decide which of them she would be the first to bring to climax. It was a decision she hadn't expected to make, but one she knew she couldn't avoid. Her heart hammered in her chest, her body trembling wi...
by Emily
Sun Aug 04, 2024 12:25 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 7/13)

This is one of my favourite stories on this site, I have to say. I'm becoming a big fan of the whole forced lesbian thing, and this one does it so well! Riley is such a great and likable character, and I love the dynamic she has with Lily. The two of them are in the same perilous situation, and I'd...
by Emily
Mon Aug 12, 2024 11:53 pm
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Chapter 30 Aria, her breathing finally evening out, reached for her robe, sliding it back over her body with the ease of a second skin. Her movements were languid, almost lazy, a clear sign of the satisfaction that Riley had just given her. Riley watched, her own body still humming with the residua...
by Emily
Tue Aug 13, 2024 10:17 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

I hope to have another part ready and posted in the next couple of days. I had a ton of fun writing that last part. ;)

I’d love more feedback, comments, or suggestions for this story and the latest part.
by Emily
Wed Aug 14, 2024 4:46 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Tattoo and piercings are too much invading a body. You can’t force someone into that (my opinion) But to check if she complied to the tasks, more humiliating videos or photos could me made by Riley. She must have acces to clothes in public places otherwise the blackmail element is gone and the girl...
by Emily
Wed Aug 14, 2024 2:26 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

Thanks everyone for the kind comments and ideas!

Please keep them coming. I love hearing some of these ideas and definitely plan to implement some of them into the story.

What other fun ideas do you guys have?
What have I been doing well with this story?
What could I be doing better?
by Emily
Sun Aug 18, 2024 3:58 pm
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Chapter 31 Sleep eluded Riley. Her mind raced with the memories of the evening—the humiliation, the power, the pleasure. She could still feel the stickiness between her legs, a constant reminder of her submission. The images of Aria's climax, the taste of Claire's release, the feel of Ethan and Car...
by Emily
Tue Aug 20, 2024 2:07 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Yet another new chapter, and so soon too! 😃 Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon. 😃 I've yet to actuall...
by Emily
Thu Aug 22, 2024 7:42 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Hopefully I should have another part in a day or so. I’m trying to think of fun ideas for Riley’s day. Any ideas are appreciated!