The Camping Trip

[Cheese]

My first story, loosely based on true events. Enjoy

THE CAMPING TRIP PART 1

Me and this kid, Ethan, were in the same scout troop. Of course, being teenage boys, we were usually horny. So when we tented together on a freezing camping trip, things went as badly as expected.

The first night, we ate dinner and got settled for bed. Ethan went on his phone, and I started to read a book. Both got boring, and we started to talk. You know, crushes, p0rn, the usual. That was when he asked:

“Have you had sex yet?” Obviously, no. He made up a very clearly fake story about doing it with a family friend, and I called BS. He wasn’t too happy. He told me that I didn’t know since I was a virgin, and I didn’t even know what sex felt like. As a short-tempered person, I snapped back,

“Then let’s have sex!” Obviously I didn’t mean it, but he took it literally. He said, “ok,” and my horny self didn’t object yet. He told me to pull my pants down and take my shirt off (we were both in sleeping bags.) I told him he had too as well. So, we both did. I asked,

“And underwear?” starting to get nervous. He said yes, so I did. He put his phone flashlight on and said we each had 5 seconds to look. So, on the count of three, we pulled our sleeping bags down and revealed our tiny, hard as rock penises.

Wow. He had a minuscule, shriveled, grayish dick. It was vulgar, yet also very inticing. It was a little shorter than mine, but mine was a baby penis so I didn’t have much room to talk.

The flash was when things turned for the worse. I saw his light flash, and got confused. Then it hit me. He just took a picture of my fully erect yet still little penis. I grabbed for his phone, pulling myself out of my sleeping bag and allowing my pants to fall completely off of my legs and to the floor, where he dived.

It was like a nightmare. He took my pants and shirt, underwear, sleeping bag, pillows, and backpack, wrapped them in a pile, and threw them out of the zip door. I was stunned. Hey, he was very problematic for me and my dick, but he was clever.

“You may have noticed that you are without clothes. You have 2 options. Listen to me and be my bitch, or go out there and expose your bald, little, hard penis to the very much so awake girls troop across from us. Im sure they would love your cock and balls.”

Everyone knows there was only one option. 3 minutes later, I was lying on my back. He was kneeling next to me.

“So. What are you gonna do to me?” To that, he slapped my dick. HARD.

“You aren’t allowed to talk. Ok?” Seething in pain, I nodded my head.

“I think the first thing you should do is get the hang of things. I want you to touch my dick.” I did that. It was almost nice. “Next, tickle my balls.” He laughed and doubled over, slamming his forehead right on to my stomach, to which I lunged up, bringing my dick right into his open mouth.

“HEY! WHAT THE FUCK? YOU DONT DO ANYTHING WITHOUT MY PERMISSION! YOU NEED TO BE PUNISHED.”

Immediately, I regretted my actions.

The first “punishment” was a face massage with his dick. I almost puked.

The second was more creative. I had to go to the girls camp, shine a light into 3 tents, and not get caught. If I was caught, I had to stay still for 10 seconds per person who saw me. I was not allowed to give any form of explanation. If they wanted me to do something, I had to do it for however long they wanted. Unfortunately, a tent of 3 girls was about to open the door when I shined the light. Imagine where that went.

You imagined wrong. They dragged me into their tent, and took turns stroking me to completion and squeezing my balls as hard as they could. They then had the bright idea to FaceTime another tent, which consisted of 5 older girls.

8 very… mature… girls swooning over my dick. I think I actually got harder than a brick. Sounds like a dream, except they were treating me like a toy and had no regard whatsoever for the fact that kneeling on my balls FUCKING HURT. I was glad when they finally let me go, after they all took a few turns riding me and making me shoot a few loads on them.

When I finally got back, Ethan was not happy that I was gone for so long. (About 20-25 minutes.) He said that my 1 remaining punishment was now doubled. I was scared.

He made me do 1 more that night, then the next was to be reserved for the next day. The one remaining for this night was, I had to sleep under him, with my dick tucked into his waistband. It hurt, but it was manageable. What I didn’t know was, as soon as I fell asleep, he snuck over to the girls and invite one over. They came back to me, laying on the ground with my dick fully visible. What Ethan didn’t know was, this was my best friend (and crush) since I was 2, Elizabeth. Besides a few body exploration moments and accidents (which I plan to make stories about later,) we had really never seen each other naked. Ethan zipped the door shut and sat outside.

I woke up by Elizabeth rubbing my chest. I freaked out and rushed to cover myself, but quickly realized there was no need, as I got a full view of small tits and shaved pussy. My only reaction was to gather the nerve to mutter, “Lizzy… what the fuhhhh…”

“Oh Kevin. How have you not realized? I’ve liked you like… forever! Now I’m laying here naked, what are you gonna do?” And that’s when my instincts kicked in.

I pulled her into a hug.

“Lizzy, it has been a night. And obviously, I like you too. I always have.” For the next 10 minutes, we laid there and just cuddled. Eventually, I looked up at her face, and she stared into my eyes. Then we kissed. We both shimmied completely on to the floor, and made out. Which lead to my dick between her thighs…
and my face burrowed in her tits…
and my hands on her pussy…

20 minutes later, I heard the farmilar “zzphhphphph” of the door. And when Ethan walked inside, he immediately got a crotchfull of Elizabeth’s shoe. She gave me one final kiss, got dressed, and left.

“Ok little lover boy, your sex dream is over. Now, your back to the harsh little reality of serving me again.” This statement was joined with a stomp of my dick, and my clothes and 10lb bag being thrown on my crotch. Even though I had my clothes back, Ethan still had my dick pic. And until it was gone…



Ethan was in control.

[NudeBaG]

Interesting story
Good job!

[TeenFan]

Always good to have new writers. Please continue with more submissions.
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I found the early part of the story, where two boys at camp compare each other's dicks, to be the believable section.
The way the boys are described makes me think they are no older than twelve.

The part where the boy is pulled into a tent full of girls, and has sex with them, even spurting on several of them, I found to be less believable.

Make the boy a little older, more mature to be able to orgasm multiple times. The boy is in the girl's tent for 20 minutes. No need to rush
through that part in only a few sentences. Give us the works please.

[Cheese]

Yeah, I know it’s a bit unrealistic, that’s what I’m figuring out though- do people like unrealistic vs realistic more? Thanks for the feedback!

[Summers]

Realistic for me is always better. You don't have to be completely serious, but trying to tell the reader that a boy basically came over and over again to 8 girls, who all made him cum in multiple ways, in 25 mins. That's a bit too unrealistic.

The story itself is decent enough, but felt completely rushed.

Everything you crammed in, could have been a multi chaptered story, which each part getting its own chapter.

I would also say that it was a bit weird that the MC's reason for agreeing to be Ethan's slave, was to not risk being seen naked by girls, if he stepped out to get his clothes, which could only be a few feet from the tent. Yet, pretty much a few sentences later, without much happening, he is suddenly agreeing to walking out naked, flashing a light on every tent, and agreeing to not move if girls come out.

Why would he agree to do any of that? All that happened between him not wanting to even go a few feet outside the tent, and that, was he got a dick rubbed on his face.

So for me, if you want some feedback, i would make that first part one chapter, have the MC be stripped, and the clothes thrown out, but then Ethan needs to get blackmail material, he needs to get the MC's hands tied behind his back, and then get embarrassing photos and videos, a cock in his mouth and stuff like that, have Ethan just spend at least a few hours or even the entire night dominating him and making sure the MC knew his place.

Then the next chapter can escalate to Ethan making him do more embarrassing stuff, i would again keep it between them, get the MC to actively do stuff, this time untied, with the blackmail hanging over his head, and get him to even run outside naked or pee outside naked, and stuff like that.

Then you can bring the girl tent instruction in the 3rd chapter, and have it just the first 3 girls that chapter, maybe getting their own blackmail material on the MC, or just being content to embarrass him, make him orgasm a couple of times, and maybe make him pee outside.

The next chapter could be him back in the tent, and Ethan in control again.

Then the next, Ethan sets him up to fall into the hands of more girls at their camp.

could last a couple of chapters of humiliation and dares.

Those are just examples though, from what you gave us in the story, that shows that you have enough for multiple chapters if you ever wanted to expand the story, or maybe if you have another story in mind, to show you, that you don't have to rush a story, or jam a million things into it.

Your story could have just been about Ethan dominating the MC in the tent all night, and actually making him his slave, with blackmail material, and it would have been completely fine, and probably get a lot of praise.

Sometimes, simple is better, and less is more.