That was a very fun read!
I love stories that end with the main character losing in an embarrassing way.
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- Sun Jan 14, 2024 7:07 am
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Re: The Blinds
Like your story. You build up Emma’s tension nicely. Wonder how far the unknown will go with her. Keep it up
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 7:24 am
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Re: The Blinds
I am not a writer, purely a reader. Maybe put the texting in italics to denote that it's not normal speech? Just a suggestion.
Also like the setup for the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
Also like the setup for the story and can't wait to see where it goes.
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 9:02 pm
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Re: The Blinds
Simply hot. Thank god there is ice water!
- Tue Jan 16, 2024 2:42 am
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Re: The Blinds
Hopefully, this leads to her parents catching her naked and misinterpreting what she is doing in such a way that they decide she should be encouraged to go naked whenever she is at home.
- Tue Jan 16, 2024 6:26 pm
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Twelve Days
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Author’s note: the following is not the story, but merely a prologue. It was suggested that I post this to judge reader interest. If you would like to read the actual story, let me know. But unless there is a significant amount of interest, it will ...
Author’s note: the following is not the story, but merely a prologue. It was suggested that I post this to judge reader interest. If you would like to read the actual story, let me know. But unless there is a significant amount of interest, it will ...
- Fri Jan 19, 2024 2:45 am
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Re: The Blinds - update chapter 3, 1/18/24
Great addition once again.
Also, I particularly like that her blackmailer is requiring her to be naked at all times in her bedroom.
Also, I particularly like that her blackmailer is requiring her to be naked at all times in her bedroom.
- Fri Jan 19, 2024 4:45 pm
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Re: The Blinds - update chapter 3, 1/18/24
You're welcome and I look forward to it.
- Fri Jan 19, 2024 6:32 pm
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Re: The Blinds - update chapter 3, 1/18/24
Not really lame in my opinion. Love to see she is not only naked in her bedroom, but also in other places. Should he/she push Enma’s limits?
True, I meant tame in that she’s managed to skirt by unseen fairly easily so far.
That’s only a good sign, your great story will only get more parts ...