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Scouting For Butterflies Chapter 1. It's a lovely day for hunting butterflies, and the local city park should be the perfect place to seek out the beautiful flying insects. It's a Saturday in June and the trip to and from the happy hunting grounds needs to be done before it gets too hot. At approxim...

Scouting For Butterflies Chapter 2. "Is it those damn Indians?" the bound up and blindfolded and bare assed naked boy asked. Not only are there two Red Indians with sharp knives pointed at the two scouts, the cowboy has shown up and he pulled a pearl handled silvery pistol out of his holst...

Scouting For Butterflies Chapter 3. Neither the twelve year old Julia nor her thirteen year old brother made a peep as they were led blindfolded through the park. It was at the edge of the park, Julia could tell the group was crossing a road, that Clovis asked "Where are we going?" "S...

Scouting For Butterflies Chapter 4. Julia has never been one to walk about while wearing minimal clothing. Even inside her own house, with only immediate family members present, Julia always has on a shirt and shorts or pajama bottoms. Hanging around the house in just panties and bra is not for her....

Hello Enf-Kink Welcome to the writer's club. Since you want feedback I'll provide a little. The writing is well done. The main thing for me is it's not clear if this "Conversation" between Emma and the unknown person is in speech only or texting only, or a mix of both. It's written in a wa...

That was a very fun read!
I love stories that end with the main character losing in an embarrassing way.

Like your story. You build up Emma’s tension nicely. Wonder how far the unknown will go with her. Keep it up

I am not a writer, purely a reader. Maybe put the texting in italics to denote that it's not normal speech? Just a suggestion.
Also like the setup for the story and can't wait to see where it goes.

Simply hot. Thank god there is ice water!

Excellent!!