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Great chapter once again.
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- Sun Mar 10, 2024 3:05 am
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- Sun Mar 10, 2024 6:13 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/9/24 - School Bus Strip
This is a very fun story to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
- Sun Mar 10, 2024 7:18 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/9/24 - School Bus Strip
This was/is an absolute fantastic chapter! Loved it!
- Tue Mar 12, 2024 11:50 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/9/24 - School Bus Strip
Exceptional story development
- Fri Mar 29, 2024 11:43 pm
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Contract Offer
The first entry Have you ever been blackmailed into something? Did you have to think about it for very long? Did you have to sign a contract? I'm only asking because I have 48 hours to agree to spend the next year as a slave -- to my best friend's younger sister. I will have to sign away all rights,...
- Sat Mar 30, 2024 1:08 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
I can't believe I am just now getting around to reading this marvelous story! I love that her blackmailer turned out to be a female classmate. Your pacing is perfect and the descriptive visuals are most entertaining!
Well done! Looking forward to more soon.
Hooked6
Well done! Looking forward to more soon.
Hooked6
- Mon Apr 01, 2024 7:24 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
This story keeps getting better and better. I would say though that the dares Claire is pushing on Emma are so risky that it's only a matter of time before it implodes causing Emma to get discovered and the fun to stop for Claire. So, I am curious to see how this progresses.
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 8:21 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
Woah! Creepy!
Good idea, including the ice-water, and that naked walk through the house.
Looking forward to seeing what The Voice makes her do next!
Good idea, including the ice-water, and that naked walk through the house.
Looking forward to seeing what The Voice makes her do next!
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 10:34 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
This is only the third story I have commented on. That's because I like it. That said, I will comment on some things just to have a conversation. First, the story is much more enjoyable when the the blackmailer is known. I feared it would be some creepy person or even a family member. Claire made a ...
- Mon Apr 15, 2024 9:27 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
As for describing her features. You’re correct that nearly all stories have that. I’m just not interested in it, I’d rather the reader decide her race/size/looks etc for themselves. Occasionally I lead everyone to my interpretation of what she looks like without thinking, but I’d rather the reader ...